ArHiSS:AnApateAffair#4,Ch21,Pg124,(19/07)COMPLETED - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Saiyyu, thank you for this looong update… and you are back with a bang!

Love the militant Khushi, so furious just because Arnav doesn't consider her sexy! Arnav's concern transforming to sheer devilry as he wants to see how Khushi will prove her sexiness is endearing and funny… the only problem then is that he might get a heart-attack and won't be able to keep his hands off her! Akash's 'sexyji' is the tops… the Raizada brothers are incorrigible, only poor NK failing in his attempts at wooing Lavanya when she is more than willing to be wooed… he needs a few lessons from his brothers! Anyone watching Arnav and Khushi's constant wrangling about anything and everything would doubt that they were to marry! Loved Khushi's riposte: "He is your replacement? Should I go ahead and marry him too? Chalega?" Khushi huffed out… but that would be going too far, as reflected in Arnav's glare! Thank god for modern gadgets and apps: Arnav can warn NK off without being physically present! Poor Khushi, so confused with Arnav's blow hot blow cold behaviour… nice to see her take the bull by the horns… their minds are so attuned that each has the same sense of possessiveness when it comes to the other as desire pulsates through them, and each asks the same questions of the other. But Arnav is too stubborn for his own good… he doesn't mind enjoying kissing and touching Khushi but playfully refuses to admit that she's sexy! Her retort to his praise of the sexy dress is classic: "Toh iss dress say shadi kar lena!" To him Madhuri was a moth compared to his happy butterfly… wow, what a comparison! It was hilarious watching Arnav fall for the oldest trick in the book — a woman's tears… Khushi's emotional blackmail sure did work… Arnav forgot everything to just blurt out that she was the sexiest woman alive! What torrid images: He caressed her arms, lifted her whole body to his and twice, TWICE he dipped her so low that he was all over her while she was almost lying on the floor… Khushi couldn't have imagined that her trick would unleash Arnav's uninhibited desires… that intense passion gentling into love is a momentous moment… their families' reaction is the cherry on top!

You have done a marvelous job of seamlessly blending into your story all those beautiful Arnav-Khushi moments during the Payal-Akash Sangeet! An awesome twist to the original scene at the end: Khushi catching up on all the kisses she was deprived of during the week and When they came up for air, Khushi combed his messed up hair with her fingers and whispered, "Ab theek hain!" Agree with you that Teri Meri has become synonymous with Arnav and Khushi!

What will Arnav's reaction be to Khushi's confession that she tricked him into performing with her? Or did he already know it was a trick and admitted to her SQ and danced with her because he wantede to?

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Posted: 12 years ago
Maha update is mega hit yaar...all is there...hottie,nottiee,flirtiree Arnav nd a sexy Khushi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Caught up on your works. They are all brilliant. Loved this story and the way it is going 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
congo on d nw thrd
awsum updt

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Posted: 12 years ago
Aj Sunday hai naa...update k bina bilkul bhi achha nahi laag rahe...
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
finallly u updaaated :D
lovelyy it ws !
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Posted: 12 years ago
Agreed for me Teri Meri is strictly ArHi..the thought of Salman and Kareena do not come close to my mind

update was brilliant
Khushi trying to prove her sexiness and Arnav trying to make sure he don't blurt out that she is
Khushi planning to make him dance with her and succeeded but he is unaware yet
im sure he won't complain as he got a chance to be so close to her, touch her, and get a passionate kiss from it too

seriously im sure these two have forgotten it is a 'fake' relationship
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res was unres a great feet so had to announce
Pg 3 everyone lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
res.


*EDIT*


*sniff*sniff* I got nostalgic in the end

Reminded of one of the best scenes of IPK🤗 Didi teri chotay deewanay😆 that definitely came as a surprise even in the serial😉 and a surprise it was and then the most famous Teri-Meri, BOTH!😆

Loved their nok-jhok😆 and his admittance to her being sexyy, hayeee😳 bechara ASR... btw emotional blackmail ftw! hamesha.🤣 Wonder if he'll mind getting to know the truth after such a mind-boggling kiss☺️😆

Btw, do they remember that this all is "fake", as per they claim, that too when reminded😆

Honestly bolun? I am blank, reading all the scenes, brain mein film chal rahi thi saray scenes ki😃 I would really like to say THANK YOU, for giving such a IPK-filled update😊 rona araha hai yaad kar ke woh din😭

take care and update soon😊
Edited by smarty94 - 12 years ago

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