Ariya ss @hum kisise kaam nahi@ updt part 8 + VVI NOTE pg 16 04.12.13 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
awesome dear...
continue soon. ...
so rajkumari n rajkumar...
it's gonna be awesome...
waiting. ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
hi piyal🤗...nice concept ...meri riya princess😃...n prince arjun...n lots of action😃... update soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
love the concept
cont. soon
Edited by Harman987 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Character sketch...

Maharaj suryakant:father of kuar arjun...

Maharani saurabhi:mother of arjun...

Maharaj samaresh:father of riya...

Maharani gayatri:mother of riya

Kumarai Ayesha:best friend of riya ,daughter of pradhan mantri...

Kuar sameer:bff of arjun...prince of another state...

No shree...no lisa...

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Chandrakant:body guard of riya...

Aur ek...

Villain sikandar...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

PART 1

Daimaa:maharaj...yeh rahi aapki beti...

M sama:bahat khubsurat...aaj se isska naam hoga...rajkumari riyasmi...pradhan mantriji...sare rajye me aaj kissike ghar khana nahi banega...aaj se aglle das din(10 days)jashn hoga...

p.m:ji maharaj...

1 maid:mantra ji...aapko jaldi aapke ghar jana hoga...aapki patni ko dard utha hai...

p.m:maharaj mai izzajat chahunga...

m samar:ha...aapki waha zaroorat hai...

p.m:chalta hu...

next day...

m samar:mantri ji...kais hai aapki patni???

p.m:maharaj hamare ghar bhi laxmi ayi hai...

m samar:bhahat achchha...fir toh dugna jashn hoga...

rajya me 10 din tak jashn chale...dhere dhere waqt beet ta gaya...rajkumari riasmi aur mantra putri aisha bari hoti gayi...ayse karke 12 barsh beet gaye...unke gurukul jane ka samay ho gaya...woh dono dhere dhere yudh me mahir hote gaye...unki umar aab 20 saal ho chuke the...unhe rajmahal laut na tha...rajmahal me wapas ate waqt...

raaste me 2 rajkumar gundo se laar rahe the...par gunde unper bhari per rahe the...tabhi waha ek ghorsawar hath me talwar liye ata hai...ghore se utarke woh un gundo ke eyes marta hai ki saab gunde waha se bhaag jate hai...tabhi...

ek rajkumar:shukriya...aap kaunse rajye ke rajkumar hai???hum hai sauryagar ke rajkumar arjun...aur yeh hai hamare mitra rajya jaipur ke rajkumar kuar sameerendra...

ghorsawar ka muh ek parda se Dhaka hua tha...toh unhone unka chahra nahi dekh paye the...

ghorsawar:hum???hum hai raaspur ki rajkumari riasmi...

sameer:aap ek larki???

Ria:kyun???aab tak toh hamara shukriyada kiya jaa raha tha...jab yeh pata chala ki hum ek larki hai...sab bhul gaye...aap larke hote hi eyes e hai...

Tabhi ek aur ghorsawar ata hai waha...kumari aisha...

Aisha:chalo ria...in larko se baat karne ka koi faida nahi hai...

Ria:sahi kaha...chalo...

Woh waha se chali jait hai...

Arjun:yeh koi mamuli rajkumari nahi hai...dum hai ussme...

Sameer:sahi kaha...per usski jo sathi thi woh bhi kam nahi thi...

Arjun:chal ghar bhi jana hai ki nahi...

Sameer:ha...jana hai...

Idher raaspur me unki ane ki taiyai chal rahi hai...dono rajmahal ke shingha dwar(main gate)pe ate hai...unki upper fulo ki bawchhar ho rahi hoti haii...maharani gayatri aarti thal liye darwaze ke samne khari hoti hai...dono jhuk ke ranima ko pranaam karti hai...

Ranima:khush raho...sadeiv vijayi bhaba...kaisa tha safar???

Ria:achchha tha...per...

Ranima:per???

Aisha:woh kya hai nah rani ma...raaste me kuchh gundo ne nah do rajkumar per hamla kar diya tha...unlogo bachate hue hi der ho gayi...

Ranima:toh kya rajkumari ria ne unlogo ka akele samna kkia???

Aisha:ha...akele...

Ria:maa...hume andar nahi ane dogi...sab baat kya yahi karni hai???

Rani ma:nahi beta...andar aao...waise woh kahake the???

Ria:woh???ek the saurya gar ke rajkumar aur ek the jaipur ke...naam the...ha...pahele wale ka naam arjun...aur dusre ka...

Aisha:sameer...mera matlab sameerendra...

Ranima:ohhh...achchha...aap log jake aaram karo...hum naasta bhijwate hai...

Risha:ji ...

Rani jati hai maharaj ke paas jati hai...aur kahti hai...

M samar:kya hua gayatri???itni pareshaan kyun ho???

Rani:woh hamari beti ria ne pata hai kisse panga le liya hai????

M samar:kiss se??

Rani:kuar arjun se...

M samar:kuar arjun???per humne toh...

Rani:wagi toh...aab agar use yeh baaat pata chali ke humne usske liye kuar arjun ko pasand kia hai...woh toh mana kar degi...

M samar:sahi kaha...abhi use kuchh batate nahi hai...samay ane per bata demge...

Precap:

Ria ko larko se gussa kyun ata hai...

Usski larko ke prarti nafraat ka raaz...

Firse amne samne ria arjun...

Per kaise????

Comments plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Hey wow...




Me first to res...
Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
hi piyal...🤗...
rajkumari riyasmi😊...n rajkumari aisha😊...ka saamna hua rajkumar arjun aur rajkumar sameerendra... se...wow what a fight...😆
arjun riya😉...ab aayega maza😉...update soon
Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Nice one buddy!
Thanks for the PM.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Ooo so arjun is the bridegroom for riya and both had a good fight
thanx for pm,
interesting update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Awesome part.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.

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