Smitar's: Finding Khushi #10 Link to #11 on Pg 1 - Page 78

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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my god... thatwas super hilarious

lassi and video games in a bachelors party... that should be the bachelors party of the century
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the pm Reshu.
I will comment later on Monday probably.
Loved the update very much Smitaji.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Smita, the 'Nahi Nahi' and the 'Zara Zara' VMs wonderfully depicted their raging desires, while the 'Lazy Lad' one was an ode to lost opportunities!

I just love how accommodating everyone is of the Khushi-Arnav love story... Anamika and Ganesh are not only enjoying their own wedding rituals shared with their newfound family but having a whale of a time watching the hitherto stubborn ASR getting his comeuppance at the hands of a sprite who instinctively knows how to twist him round her little finger... and a thoroughly smitten Arnav using his shatir dimaag to make all Khushi's dreams come true is a sight for sore eyes!

Arnav asking Khushi if she has packed her stars is a clear indication of his knowledge of what's close to her heart... such simple gestures are the true essence of romance! It's always tragic circumstances that have forced Khushi to move homes, so one can't fault her if doubts assail her mind as to the future of this relationship... after all, again and again she has had to give up what she thought was her permanent home... that Arnav understands her pain and unfounded fears, resulting in his promise to her "You will never have to leave my house to go anywhere else." means the world! Akash surprise on seeing Arnav and Khushi in each other's arms and Arnav's discomfiture on being caught seem surprising as hasn't Arnav just entertained everyone with his PDA when Khushi was begging him to take her with him?! Adorable nonetheless, reminded me of Akash and Payal walking in on them before the haldi ceremony at GH in the show! The rooms seem to have been allotted with an eye to frustrating any sneaky notions the betrothed couples, especially Khushi and Arnav, might have of enjoying an amorous interlude before the actual wedding... a veritable army of chaperons seems to be encamped next to the brides' room! Wouldn't it be wonderful if either Ganesh or Arnav decide to sneak in to their beloveds' room, only to be caught?! Whereas before, Khushi was inconsolable at the thought of being apart from Arnav, now it seems like he is reluctant to be away from her... Khushi's sunny disposition is back, now that she can see Arnav whenever she wants. Arnav hesitated to leave the room. "Khushi, tum theek ho?" he asked, running his thumb lovingly down her cheek. "Ji," she smiled, having forgotten her earlier tears. "Sure? You want me to stay with you?" poor Arnav asked. "No, I am fine, Arnavji," Khushi beamed... a desperate Arnav trying to find an excuse to remain with her and failing miserably because she doesn't get it is one of the cutest moments! Khushi's childlike notions of what a bachelor's party entails and Anamika's and Arnav's stunned faces is the cherry on top! Thank you for reminding us of the similar scene in the show... now can't wait to read your take on the bachelor's party and Khushi's reaction when she learns what a bachelor's party truly means!

Edited by Maddy1270 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
khushi tum kab seekhogi yeh sab innocent baby.loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hahaha really nice and khyshi is so cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
really men will drink lassi in bachelors party
finally they all are under same roof
waiting for what is gonna to happen in bachelors party
waiting for the update
update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
hahhaa...u r too good i cant wait to see Kushis reaction to the Real Bachelor Party
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Posted: 12 years ago
dat was awesome
thanx fr d pm dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...!
waiting for the wedding now...!
and khushi is soo innocent!

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