MG NEW SS SHATTERED HEART, PT-10,PG -64, MAR'22,2015

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Nice start please check cs & story u mentioned yash in cs and tej in story if iam wrong sorry

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ammu5

@ammu5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

superb... continue soon n if possible PM plz

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ashmaaneet

@ashmaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

congrats for new ss dr 👏👏 wowww lovely concept n prologue ❤️ continue soon loved it vry much 😳

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Angel

@amita5

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

congrats on the new story

awesome prologue and cs

please update soon and pm me

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Sri_Radha

@Sri_Radha

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Congrats for new ss👏

Amazing prologue⭐️

Interesting concept👏

Nice character sketch⭐️

Continue soon

Eagerly waiting for first part

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

very very painful but interesting start...

so it means Drashti is step sister to Tej and Geet...

one thing is confusing me...

Urmila, Tej and Geet all are suffering may be because of forced marriage of Raj and Sonali but it is not completely Savitri Devi's fault...some where Raj and Urmila are also responsible for this...why they started unprotected physical relations without marriage...and if they are married secretly then why didn't they told their relation to Savitri Devi...a woman who take care of him after his parents her love is not worth enough to be informed about their marriage...then this whole thing would not have happened in first place...so in my POV Raj and Urmila are more in blaming side than Savitri devi...

A GIRL LIVING IN HER SMALL WORLD, WHERE ALL HER DREAMS ARE SHATTERED . NO ONE IS THERE FOR HER TO HOLD HER .SHE GAVE HER DREAMS AND LIFE IN NAME OF OTHER'S GRATEFULLNESS. IN RETURN SHE GOT ONLY BROKEN DREAMS

all 3 Urmila, Geet and Tej are suffering in poverty then why it is that only Geet's dreams are shattered...does it means that her mother, brother and bhabhi don't love her or they harass her, behave badly with her...

how can Drashti and Geet have same features...being daughters of different women they should have some difference...

the word used for father's sister is BUAJI not BAUJI...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...'

Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 12 years ago

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

beautiful story.it touched my heart.Raj was already married 2 urmila & had tej & geet as kids.But had 2 marry sonali too.thats y drashti & geet look alike.drashti hurt maan.hop Geet will enter maan's life.loved it.Tej's cs is missing.plz update asap

Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago