KR/ReYam SS | Filamentous Lines|Ch2 - Pg13

-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

nice one

loved it

thank you for the pm

update soon

and do pm me

P.S. SORRY

SHORT COMMENT

travailing

baad main pakka edit kar dungi.. 😊😊

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

superb... 😃

but still... mystery continues 😳

seems like... swayam is punishing himself this way

curry... yumm.. bhukh lag gyi 😆

ahan.. sharon is already smitten 😉

kriya ki life toh aur bhi dukhi hai... 😭

still she finds reasons for happiness 😊

rey mil gya 😲

oye hoye... ho gyi hamare hero ki entry.. vo bhi mandir me ... 😎

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raina

@--RAINA--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

awsome update.,
lykd it
thankx 4 d pm
update soon

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Meenal

@Meesocute

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Just one word PERFECT
everything was well described their feelings,sadness,their routine...
Waiting for more

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

awesome update..loved d way u showed swayam's character d way he feels abt his kitchen n things that r close to him... d way u showed swayam telling how to make d curry to sharon making her taste it was nice... kria's poem d way she feels for her mom n d way she s determined to find d culprit who s responsible for her mom's condition was nice... she s now following d person d find d culprit ... waiting for next part

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Beautful update!!!

i loved the way you explained how they try to forget their pain!!

it was very beautifully and intricately written!!

and the story is gettting interesting!!!

an awesome update!!!

CONTINUE SOON!!!

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Pinkpearly

@Pinkpearly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

awsum update
thanx for d pm

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

I lobe the you portray emotions.. feelings.. so descriptive.. and so amazing..

The entire fuss.. in the head of two souls.. each trying to sooth themselves.. one tries his hand in kitchen.. with the recepies.. to whom Sharon is always a support.. the love birds..

and the other.. just walks down the street.. clicks pictures.. of the various objects in the devotional surrounding... and fortunately finds SOMEONE.. who can help her out to find the culprit..

PS: sorry for the delayed comment.. I have grown lazy these days.. 🤔
But I will soon review Love of Nile as well..
Apologies for the delay..

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

and yes.. you write exceptionally good.. I really like all your works.. 😉

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