Siblings - A sacred relation Kriyam ss Update Pg17

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Posted: 12 years ago
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So @swaronvrushan (Sorry i don't know your name!) had requested me to write an ss on kriyam . And yeh idea mere mind mein just struck hua so i wrote it down . This is a really very short ss , cause mere school shuru ho rahe hain in about 10 days , toh i will be completing this before it . Hope you all like it. Hope u liked the name! IF ANY ONE HAS A BETTER PLEASE SUGGEST!

Siblings ' A sacred relation


Index

Part 1 - Pg 1

Part 2 - Pg 7

Part 3 - Pg 12

Part 4 - Pg 17 (Last part)




Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 12 years ago

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PART 1

After the G.S elections , rey was selected as the G.S of the college and kria became the A.G.S . Rey was behaving rudely with her , which made kria really very upset . She could not even talk to swayam as she thought he was busy in some work . She had become really very quiet , which did not get un noticed by swayam . But he would gradually forget about it when he used to see Sharon as he would remember that he had to make Sharon feel special .

One day , kria was working in the library , tears rolling down her cheeks as today rey had crossed his limits and insulted her really very bad (the canteen incident) . Swayam who did not know about it , called kria . Kria picked it up .

"Hello?"

"Kria , where are you?"

"Library kyun?"

"Nahi just asked , kal rehearsal kitne baje hain?"

"Swayam mein nahi aa rahi kal , i am tired!"

"Fine! Take care , aur jaldi nikal raat hogayi hain!"

"Kay!"

"Accha , ek kaam kar mujhe tu paach minute mein atrium mein mil , i'll drop you!"

"Nahi! I will go on my own!"

"Don't worry i won't drop you home in a cycle!"

Kria giggles.

"I know that!"

"Kria are you fine?"

"H-Ha-Han kyun?"

"Tu jhut bol rahi hain na?"

"Nahi swayam!"

"Kria!"

Kria broke into tears.

"Swayam i can't tolerate this , har baat par gussa karta hain , itna rude behave karta hain , insult karta hain meri . It hurts me alot!"

"Kaun kria?"

"R-Rey! He hates me! What did i do? Ek thapad ki wajha se voh meri itni insult kar raha hain , and on top of that it was not me who was at fault , it was him!"

"Kria , stop crying first!"

"I don't know why swayam , i just can't freaking hate him!"

Swayam came there , he saw her crying bitterly , he saw the librarian not there . Kria saw him and hugged him crying .

"Mujhe nahi ban na koi ags! I don't want to be near him , i don't wanna get hurt!"

"Calm down kria! Rey ko toh mein dekh lunga , lekin tu rona band kar! Voh gaya bhaad mein! And ussne tujhe hurt kia hain , don't feel guilty. You regret what you did , tumne usse sorry bhi bol dia , agar voh phir bhi tumhe itna hurt kar raha hain , dur raho ho usse . And start saying no!"

"Lekin swayam mein usse ignore nahi kar paaungi!"

"Ussne aaj galat kia hain kria , Tum dono apni jagha par galat ho lekin voh tumhare guilt ka advantage le raha hain! Start saying no! Kria look at me dear . You trust your brother right?"

(Kriyam are siblings , kria is one year younger then all of them but took an early admission so studies in the same year as them all . Kriyam's parents are divorced , but kriyam still meet each other . No one knows about their relation . Kria when alone calls him bhai , but usually she calls him by his name . Swayam loves pampering his sister , and kria loves being pampered . :P )

"Yes!"

"So stop crying ."

Swayam wiped her tears.

"Smile kria!"

Kria smiled weakly.

"Naa! My sister 's smile! Not this one!"

Kria did not.

"Arre kaha gayi voh smile? Uff , dekhne do mujhe ."

He started tickling kria , who burst out laughing .

"Yeh rahi na voh smile!"

"Bhai! I love you!"

"Love you too , now chalo ."

Kria nods , swayam took her to his car . They went to his car , and sat . They reached her home and kria went . Swayam was sitting in his car thinking about something.

"Kuch toh karna padega , kria ko hassane ke liye! Lekin kya! Pehle toh rey se baat karun!"

He drove his car to their usual spot , and rey also came in a while.

"Hey swayam!"

"Kria se dur rehna!"

Rey looked at him a little shocked.

"Kya bol raha hain tu?"

"Meine kaha kria se dur rehna! You crossed your limits today rey! She is hurt dude! And i am not going to see her cry any more that to because of you!"

"Look it was just a prank and mein nahi chahta tha kria hurt ho!"

"Shut up!"

"Who are you to tell me what i should do! Mein karun kria se baat yeh meri marzi hain!"

"Tujhe jo karna hain kar rey! Lekin usse hurt mat kar! Agar isske baad i saw her cry , that to cause of you! I am going to kill you! And i am serious about that!"

Saying this swayam went to his car and drove away , leaving rey shocked beyond limits.

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Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres
first OMG m the first
how *faint*

but okay let start i thought ki story ka plot new hoga but its okay
rey ko tp peetna chhaiye
kriya ko kitna rula diya
u know elder bro to hona he chahiye
secure feel hota hey yaar
i always love kriyam ki dosti
now here bro and sis
amazing one
kya dhamki di hey swayam ney
here no rayma
only kreyam
a missing kriyaam


and best friend
wala sss b osam tha main wha comment nahi kar payi sorry for that
but i love ur all work
keep it up
and sorry for pulling ur leg
keep it up
update soon
m waiting
aroma_rubharu
okay final unres
sorry for leg pulling
Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yaar tu always comment ki dhamki kyu deti hey ...band baj jati hey bimaar insaan ki 😭
aroma
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

unres

sry for d late unres😳

awesomee start😊

kriyam as siblings👏

continue soon😳
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aroma.arsha

yaar tu always comment ki dhamki kyu deti hey ...band baj jati hey bimaar insaan ki 😭
aroma


I did not know! Haan but i do pm those jo mujhe bol dete hain ki unke exams chal rahe hain ya unhe fever hain! Now i'll send u dont worry!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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GUYS COMMENT WARNA J AGAIN BHADAK JAYEWGI 😳
jinda rehna hey to comment


haha
coomment comment


okay fine i'll comment
after 20 min
jubaan dikha k bhaging



aroma

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kriyaanshfreva


I did not know! Haan but i do pm those jo mujhe bol dete hain ki unke exams chal rahe hain ya unhe fever hain! Now i'll send u dont worry!



chill ek hafta hospital mey reh k main bore ho gyi m jut pulling ur leg i will do big wala comment in 20 min okay don't mind hey
hey my name aroma and u ?
main kitna formal sound kar rhi ho
matlab mujey b samz nahi aya

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice strt..
Do cntinue n pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome...

Vry nice start..

Luvd it...

Wow kriyam siblings..!!!

Update soon nxt part...

Thnx 4 de pm..

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