VirMan SS: HBKoyi Mohabbat Karle Part 8B-pg 47 NEW

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meera angel

@mohishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

😛 loveee it sooo much...plzzz update soon...pari hummm a fabulousss writer too...keep it up meeraangel@

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Ruby

@RUBYxyx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

loved it pari it seems interesting please update soon xx

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Ankita

@-ineffable-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Pari it was just mindblowingg... 😊

it was very much interesting and amazing 😃

loved it ❤️

seems virat has already failed head over heels for manvi 😃😉

as he said that to convince them for their marriage and he also bribed them 😆 for it 😃

seems he wants her to be his at any cost 😉

manvi was a bussiness deal but whn she got to know it from virat it didn't hurt her 😃

she is also falling for him 😉❤️

and the engagement even done cool 😃

do pm me too from next update 😊

update asap 😊 and update ATM soon 😛

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rashi246

@rashi246

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

I'm dead excited to read the next part. Plzzz continue soon

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virkush

@virkush

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Pari... nice concept, maanvi's family members r selfish, virman's marriage is a business deal and maanvi already feeling comfortable with virat.. interesting...Hope virat gives her all the love and care. Continue soon and pm me 😃

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JESMY

@JESNIA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

AWESOME CONCEPT.
EAGERLY WAITING FOR READ MORE.

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

wow - so amazed by this concept for sum odd reason i feel as if i can really realte to this manvi bt still fabulous concept- hope this is that true love that shes waiting and craving for - by the looks of it he knows her from before n maybe even loves her really cnt wait for the next part- plz do continue soon n thanx a lot for the pm 😉 eager to read more

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

well the start itself was just bang on am sure this SS is gonna be just fab👏👏
already hating manvi's family they are just soo fake people they are treating asthough she doesnt belong to that family like she is an orphan ...😡
feeling soo bad for manvi she is just soo lonely ...
and what was that they just kinda sold manvi in a business deal 😲😲
are they really her parents 😡
virat the vadhera you just did all this but why??
he seems to be soo understanding and caring then why this...😕
wanna know virat's pov...
update next part soon ...😃

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itsfate

@itsfate

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

awesome update
love the concept
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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roshreb

@roshreb

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

awesome concept pari❤️
hate manvi's family !!
first manvi stood frozen on hearing the "deal" but at the end
"She had trouble letting him go"...
and it was virat who convinced her parent's for this marriage..
plz want to have virat's POV ...