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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: ashwini16

Hey... I hav read d season 1 on blog n it was awesome... Nice part... Continue soon... Busy nowadays sry for chotu cmnt...




ohh thank uu dear for commenting ...
it's okk.. i cn understand.. chotu cmmnt hi sahi but u freed sum time n cmmnted, dats imp.. ๐Ÿ˜Š
thnx..
i'll try to update soonish.. t.c dear.. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: _Sadaf_

Yaaayyy!! ๐Ÿฅณ

Sargam di, I love you so so much for starting season 2 of this SS! โค๏ธ
You know na this is my most favorite fiction of yours!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Thank you so much diii!! ๐Ÿค—
Now coming to the update, firstly the siggy, it's really a cute one!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
And the update was amazing!! Loved this cute & jhalli Riddhima!! โค๏ธโค๏ธ
Her habits are so like me!! Messy, jhalli, lazy & etc etc etc!! ๐Ÿ˜†
Loved the chapter a lot!! Written very beautifully & cutely!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ‘
Please continue soon Sargam dii! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Will be waiting for the next update!!
And yes, thank you for posting it on IF coz I don't visit the blog anymore so yea I'm happy you updated here!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Please please continue soon!!
Love you dii!! โค๏ธ
Take Care!!




oh thank u soo muchh sweetu-pie..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
glad to see ur cmmnt on ds story..
yes i knw u liked ssn 1, dat's y i was waiting for ur reaction about ssn 2.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
now i'm soo hppy dat my sweetu-pie liked ds ssn.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
i'll post soon dear.. bas thoda sa busy hoon abhi..
but yeh wali bahot short story hain.. shrter dan last season..
hope u'll like the nxt prts dear..
love u too sweetu-pie.. โค๏ธ
t.c.. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: _Sadaf_

Yaaayyy!! ๐Ÿฅณ

Sargam di, I love you so so much for starting season 2 of this SS! โค๏ธ
You know na this is my most favorite fiction of yours!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Thank you so much diii!! ๐Ÿค—
Now coming to the update, firstly the siggy, it's really a cute one!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
And the update was amazing!! Loved this cute & jhalli Riddhima!! โค๏ธโค๏ธ
Her habits are so like me!! Messy, jhalli, lazy & etc etc etc!! ๐Ÿ˜†
Loved the chapter a lot!! Written very beautifully & cutely!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ‘
Please continue soon Sargam dii! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Will be waiting for the next update!!
And yes, thank you for posting it on IF coz I don't visit the blog anymore so yea I'm happy you updated here!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Please please continue soon!!
Love you dii!! โค๏ธ
Take Care!!




oh thank u soo muchh sweetu-pie..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
glad to see ur cmmnt on ds story..
yes i knw u liked ssn 1, dat's y i was waiting for ur reaction about ssn 2.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
now i'm soo hppy dat my sweetu-pie liked ds ssn.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
i'll post soon dear.. bas thoda sa busy hoon abhi..
but yeh wali bahot short story hain.. shrter dan last season..
hope u'll like the nxt prts dear..
love u too sweetu-pie.. โค๏ธ
t.c.. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
aage kab milega di... 1st season was mind blowing ki second ke liya wait nahi ho raha
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: mishs

aage kab milega di... 1st season was mind blowing ki second ke liya wait nahi ho raha




i'll update soon aayuu... bass abhi thoda sa busy schedule jaa raha hain..
i'll update nxt prts soon dear..
abhi likhne ka time, mainly energy nhi hain..
anyways, thnx for liking ssn1 dear.. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
t.c ayuu.. luv u..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Chotu_Babu




i'll update soon aayuu... bass abhi thoda sa busy schedule jaa raha hain..
i'll update nxt prts soon dear..
abhi likhne ka time, mainly energy nhi hain..
anyways, thnx for liking ssn1 dear.. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
t.c ayuu.. luv u..


will wait for it di..
take ur time and do rest to .. don't get too tierd na...
love u too
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: mishs


will wait for it di..
take ur time and do rest to .. don't get too tierd na...
love u too




aww.. thnk u soo muchh for understanding dear.. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
still i'll try to post on weekend..
t.c dear.. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Hello my dear readers...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

1st of all very sorry for this super late update in spite of promising weekly updates.. i know i'm really disaster in keeping promises when it comes to updates.. u see, i alwaz accept i'm too lazy nd dat's d reason i'm too irregular..๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

anyways, i tried to give u a longer part as a compensation.. see.. i know how to bribe.. LOL..๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

hope it'll work.. nd i won't get any scolding.. hehehehe..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

thnk u soo muchh everyone who pressed d 'like' tab nd commented.. i'm really happy nd hope u'll like this part too.. fingers crossed...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


so, here goes part2 of "Is It 983*****80??" ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›



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PART - 2



"Hello papa??"


Riddhima became confused nd removing d cell, she glanced at the no. once more.. in deed it's a wrong no. riddhima concluded but before she could say anything the person on the other side whispered once again..

"Papa?? Aap hi ho,na??"


Riddhima sighed nd softly started.. "baby.. yeh aapkey papa ka number nhi hain beta.. aapney galti se koi aur no. dial kar liya hain.. abhi fir se dhyaan se dial karna,okk??"


Actually it was a lill girl on the othr side of the ph. Who was trying to call her father but the lill soul was unable to dial the correct no. nd hence it landed on riddhima's cell..


"ohh.." her tone was highly disappointedโ€ฆ but thn agn she tried her luck once.. "mmm didi aap ko pakka yakeen hain na ki yeh merey papa ka no. nhi hain??" her tone was too eager nd hopeful.. riddhima felt bad.. god knws why ds kid needs to call her father this late.. she juz hoped dat everything is fine.. she juz hoped there isn't any emergency wth ds kid.. "poochun kya??" riddhima thought nd hesitantly asked..

"nahi beta.. I'm sure yeh aapkey papa ka no. nhi hain.. parr.. (she felt hesitant but tensed as well so finally she asked).. par beta aap itney raat ko apney papa ko kyun call kar rahe ho?? Sab thik toh hain na??"

Riddhima asked nd prayed in her heart dat everything if fine wth ds lill kiddo..


"mmmโ€ฆ" the girl strtd softly agn.. "wohh main aapko bata toh sakti hoon par mumma ne kaha hain strangers se baat nhi kartey.." she said truthfully nd ridzy felt strong urge to pull her cheeks.. aww.. she's such a cutie pie..


"haan yeh toh sahi hain.. thik hain baby.. aapko batane ki zaroorat nhi.. abhi main ph. rakhti hoon .. aap dhyaan se no. dial karna.."


"okk didi.. bye.."


"bye beta.. gud9t" riddhima cut d call nd smiled sweetly.. such a cute nd innocent kid.. but isn't all kids are innocent?? Of course nd dat's y she juz loves kidsโ€ฆ they are the true blessing of god.. riddhima once again looked at her cell smilingly nd said to herself.. "I juz hope koi problem na ho iss bachchi ko.." nd thn putting the cell again on the dressing table, she went to her bed..


"phew!! Finally.." riddhima announced happily seeing her stupid romantic movie has ended already.. she took the remote nd agin started shuffling the channels.. nd once again she found another romantic movie.. her altime fav "twilight saga"..


"arrey yaar.. main bhi khushi khushi vampire ban jayungi agar uss stupid ne mujhey itna (showing as small amount as one could show through his/her fingers) sa hint de toh.." she said sadly seeing Bella happily probing Edward to make her juz like him, a vampire, so dat they can stay togetherโ€ฆ TOGETHER!!! Is it really possible?? Isn't this concept of togetherness till eternity is quite vague nd debating.. she thought..

"par mainu kaisey pata hoga yaar.. main toh abhi tak.. ABHI TAK single hoon.. hayyo rabba kab par lagaoge meri naiyaa (boat)?? Aap bhi na gannu bhaiya haddh karte ho.. ek toh mujhey itnaa jhalli banaya ki kabhi kabhi main khud apney aap se pareshan ho jati hoon.. (nd she looked at her wounded finger nd feet pitifully).. I know bahot zyada jhalli hoon main issiliye toh wohh mr. super cool mujhey bilkul bhi importance nhi deta.. (sigh)โ€ฆ par aap toh bhagwan ho,na.. kuch toh chakkar chalao.. ohh gannu bhaiyaa.. kuch toh miracle karo.. (thn thinking).. kash main cindrella hoti toh mujhey bhi ek angel milti na joh meri har problem solve karti.." but her garbled speech got interrupted when her cell again started to buzz..

"Tring!! Tring!!"

"arrey yaar.. chain (peace) se koi baat bhi nhi karne deta.. (she sighed n agn looked at d ceiling..) gannu bhaiya.. 2mins haan.. main abhi aye.. aap kahin jana mat.." she got up quickly nd again got almost stumbled on the bed โ€“ foot but fortunately this time she managed to balance herself juz on time.. seeing herself not falling on the floor wth a loud thus as alwaz she felt proud on herself nd showed her happy-dent wala huge smile to her bed-foot as if saying 'see-u-lose-this-time'.. thn she turned to her dressing table after patting her back for keeping balance nd took her cell but without seeing the no. she shouted..


"arrey yaar kyun itni raat ko logo ki neend kharab karne pe tuley hue ho.. na khud sote ho na dusro ko sone dete ho.. haddh hain yaar !!!"


But her irritated speech got disturbed but someone's voice..

"tu kabhi normal bhi ho sakti hain, kya??"


Her voice literally got chocked in her throat nd her eyes became wide stretched in horror.. she hurriedly removed her cell to see the caller's name.. although she knows who the caller is.. she can never ever misunderstand this voice but still she wanted to check.. nd yes.. it's him only.. she gasped seeing the height of her bad luck.. the person whom she wanna impress alwaz gets negative impression about her only.. now he will again think she is juz a crazy, stupid, immature gal.. her face fell in disappointment.. nd she reluctantly took her phone near her ear slowly but didn't feel like saying anything..


"oyee kaha chali gayee?? BASKET yaar.. tu sun bhi rahi hain ya so gayee phone hold pe rakh ke??"

His voice was full of mischief.. god!!! he's pulling my leg again.. why god why?? Why do u alwaz do this wth me?? She felt like crying but decided to cry later nd talk to him 1st..


"haan ARMAAN.. I'm listening.." riddhima said meekly lost in her own thoughts but he smirked on the other side nd mimicked her in d same way..

"haan armaan.. I'm listening.."


Riddhima's ears shot up hearing him mimicking her.. arrgg.. such a jerk..

"wat d hell armaan.. tune itni raat ko mera dimag khaney ke liye phone kiya hain kya??" she literally shouted over d phone nd his smile widened getting desired response..


"aur nahi toh kya.. tujhey pata hain meri menu card mein tera dimag top mein ata hain.. yummyyy.. I juz love to eat ur brain, basket.." armaan said playfully boiling her blood even more..


"teri toh.." riddhima so wanted to bit him black n blue but alas this jackass is really out of her reach now.. she fisted her palm nd crunched it on her thigh lill roughly.. 'aauch' she shrieked causing hurt to herself..


"oyee kya hua??" he asked concerned..


"nothing.. (then exhaling a lung full of air forcefully she started..).. kya baat hain armaan?? Koi kaam tha kya??" she asked sincerely..


He smiled nd replied straightly.. "haan basket.. ek bahot badi problem aa gayee hain.."


"kya??" she became tensed all of a sudden..


His smile widened dan before but he controlled his excitement nd said calmly.. "basket yaar.. mujhey neend nahi aa rahi hain.."


It took quite a few seconds to register the meaning of his words nd thn she felt her ears exhaling hot air in anger..

"stupid.. idiot.. jerk.. tuney itni raat ko iss liye call kiya kyunki tu bore ho raha hain.. armaan yaar.. u're such a moron.. tu mil mujhey kal office main.. I'll kill u definitely.. arrgg.. I still cant blve tune time pass karney ke liye itni raat ko call kiyaa.." she kept on cursing him nd he accepted all accusations proudly without intervening her.. but suddenly he said softly..

"u know wat basket.. u're such a sweetheart.."


bang!!! riddhima felt a bang loudly on her heart nd she paused all of a sudden.. 'sweet heart'.. this wrd strted ringing in her ear.. isn't it wat she alwaz wished to be addressed by him.. again all her sweet, romantic dreams strted coming in her mind.. she again got lost in her thought wen he shouted getting no response from her side..

"oyee jhalli kaha kho gayee fir se??" he taunted again..


Nd she came bck to the reality.. 'jhalli' .. yes.. that's wat he thinks about me.. she sighed sadly nd thn all of a sudden she felt really angry wth him.. dnt knw why but she's damn angry wth him now.. she wanted to shot him bck sumthing which will shut his big mouth nd he won't dare to tease her anymore now at least but wat?? God!! this jerk is too witty.. is there anyone who can make a fool of him.. she wonders alwaz.. I'll give dat person d biggest treat jo iss idiot ko bakda banayega.. she often thought whenever he catches every prank played on him.. such a smarty jackass!! Riddhima fumed more nd cursed him in her mind wth more selected slangs..


"knock knock!! basket ji.. u dere??" he teased more.. 'why riddhi why?? tujhey yehi mila tha pyaar karne ke liye.. oh god.. yeh ladka mujhey pagal kar dega..' she felt helpless..

but before she could ans him, her cell indicated another incoming call.. without checking she thnked d caller nth times in her heart for saving her from this idiot who alrdy got on her nerve really bad..


"basket yaar.. tu khayali pulao banana kab bandh karegi?? Oyee madam.. apney prince charming ke dreams se bahar ayiye aur apney boss ko entertain ki jiye.." he said cheesily nd flirtingly..


'ullo ka pattha' riddhima couldn't hlp but muttered under her breathe.. it feels alwaz gr8 to curse sum1 in mother-tongue.. she smiled at her own thought feeling better thn controlling her frustration, she replied coolly..

"umm.. armaan.. I'll talk to u later, okk??.. now bye.. I'm getting another call now.."


Armaan frowned getting this sudden disturbance..

"but it's too late.. tujhey kaun phone karega abhi??" he said reluctantly feeling no intension to end d call..


"tch armaan.. u're not my BF yaar.. aur waisey bhi hain koi jiskey barey mein tu nahi janta.." riddhima said casually without knowing the meaning of her words but as a result he frowned more..


"basket.. kis ke barey mein mujhey nhi pata??" his voice was deadly serious yet demanding..


But she overlooked this sudden change of his tone nd replied hurriedly.. "offo armaan.. tu aur tera questn n answer segments.. kal bata dungi.. abhi main rakhti hoon warna call disconnect ho jayega.. okk bye.. gd9t.. see u.." she said all in a go nd quickly received another call wthout giving him a mere chance to say anything..


"phew!! Finally peecha choota.." she thought nd closed her eyes to relax her fast beating heart.. after a few seconds she came bck to reality wen she heard..

"papa??"


She blinked her eyes nd tried to remember d same wrd n voice.. it sounded too familiar.. in deed she heard it somewhere.. nd thn she remembered about d call which came before armaan's call.. that cute lill angel.. she smiled.. 'lagta hain fir se galat no. dial kiya hain..' riddhima thought nd started smilingly..

"beta.."


But before she could say more she heard a soft whisper.. "dhatt.. fir se galat no. dial kar liya mainey.."


Riddhima smiled widely hearing her scolding herself nd again askd softly..

"beta aap kaun sa no. dhund rahe ho??"


The lill gal sighed nd asked weakly.. "didi.. yeh 983*****80 nahi hain kya??"




____________to be continued


next update?? ummm... mmm... i really don't know nd i won't promise either.. let's see whenever i feel lill less lazy, i'll update.. hehe...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

juz kidding.. actually i've exms nxt month.. so, i dnt think before that it'll be possible to update..

till then take care.. love u all..๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

sargam...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ



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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
waaaooo di ...
itna acha part hai.. and the little girl trying to call again and agin to her father but end up calling ridhima.. and her fisrt convo with ridhima was amzingly cute.. and then armaan and ridhima conve too was great ...

becari ridhima ko kitna chidata hai armaan
but pyaar ke maare usse bura bhi laga ki tine raath ko koun call kar raha hai...
hehehe
beta armaan boss-giri baad mein dikhana aabhi pyaar ka izhar karo...




loved the part very much..
continue soon di
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Wow...awesum luvd dis ort too...mast ..luvd ridzi's jhali charactr...plz do update soon..

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