Swaron FF: The best Journey ever... *COMPLETED*

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

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Edited my comment on pg 67

Edited by sweet16cash - 12 years ago

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#442

thank you for irritating me so much 😆

do write more on swaron

coming to the last update

swayam came in sharon's room before the haldi was cute

the whole convo between them was beautiful

n the description of sharon n swayam

on the wedding day was amazinggly penned

as a writer you are amazingg

this ff definitely struck a chord !!! 🤗

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Shweta

@addicted_love

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#443

The wedding was so Beautiful !!!! 😊
Loved it so so so much !! 😊
I am really going to miss this FF like crazy !!! ... wish it never ended ! 😊

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zk456789

@zk456789

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#444

Very well written
Now waiting for your new story
This is one of the best story on swaron
Thanks for the pm

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#445

i just come to knw abt this FF 😈
it's a really lovely concept
the character sketch was amazing

Icompleted reading two chapters

Chapter 1

it was amazing
swayam put the ring on his hand himself 🤣
finally SwaRon engaged
i simply love their nok-jhok 😳
nd simmi's dialogue "The Love Birds" 😳😳

Chapter 2

it was just superb
i enjoyed it a lot
kabhi to normal insan ki tarah darwaze se aa jaya kro 🤣
nd then the KISS ☺️
swayam in sharon's house late night 😳
nd in the morning when sharon wake him up by saying ll not talk to u if u ll not awake...that was cute 😊😊
i loved the equation f Swayam with Sharon's parents
it was amazing

will keep commenting after reading 😈

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#446

wonderful!!

wished this one never ended!!!

marriage was just beautiful and haldi was cute!!

do write a lot on swaron!!

you rock as a writer and this is reflected in all your works especially thisone.

ty for the pm nd commendable job. keep it up.

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#447

nic update love it...
plzz write more

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Rohan :)

@RoHaNmAlHoTrA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#448

Firstly , I am sorry for being little late to reply, but late is better than never.

The Sangeet.

I would not say that was very well written just for the story but was an exceptionally beautiful way down the Swaron lovestory.

The song selection was done accurately and none of them felt wrong at where they were placed.

But more than , what I loved was Taarey's dialogues all the way down written exquisitely.

The rest all was also described really well but i just wished the story had lasted a bit more.

According to the concept it was beautiful, everything of it and I internally feel it as a sequel and continuation to 'Life is not always easy'.

For the writer, you have an exceptional style of writing that I have never read before anywhere and the inclusion of the gang in the story does not let the story b like a mushy-mushy just rubbish. It also makes us live along the story and does not let it get boring. That does not at all means that the story lacked romantic feature.The romantic bits were also described very well and were just apt and never getting more than that required.

"Authors, like coins, grow dearer as they grow old,

It is the rust we value, not the gold" - Alexander Pope

Same applies on you as you have grow in heaps and bounds as a writer. just keep writing such amazing works.

Rohan :\