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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nkss

wow!! you know i read the FF i one go!!i must say i LOVED it..u are an awesome writer Tanvish..loved this chap..sangeet AWESOME..n yeah HATS OFF..thamks for the PMupdate soon


Thank you so much 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dashinggirl

Hey Tanvish 😊

superb,amazing update
really loved it ❤️
it is penned down very well 👏
sangeet was grand loved it ❤️
songs u used was simply great
gang was as usual brilliant, mind blowing
u r a excellent writer yaar 😊
awesome job 👍🏼
keep up the great work
update the next part soon
thanks for the PM and do PM me...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: trisha19

Super rocking update!!!
Loved it...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shweta_garg

Amazing !!!! 😊
The Sangeet Ceremony was so Grand !!!! 😊
Loved how the gang depicted Swaron's Love story ! 😊
And the last part of Swayam dancing was completely Majnuish !! 😛


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SanskritiS

Awesome update 😊

well penned Sangeet
Swayam danced for Sharon


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anushka1129

finally updatewow wow..
totally awesome..
just loved this update alot..
the entire setup was beautiful..
n my swaron as always supreb..
loved the entire recalling past thing..
from first day to trial relation,every thing was beautiful ..
vicky n neha were the best choice for this😃
n swayam dance toh mindblowing as usal😳
plz update soon ..
n thanks for the pm :)


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: austen4ever

that was a lot of fun. it was an update i thoroughly enjoyed reading. fabulous job with rey n taaniz dialogues. the whole flashback was wonderful n their inputs were the icing on the cake. it was perfectly in tone with the occassion. good job


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Posted: 11 years ago



Chapter 16

Everyone: Woohhooo!!!!!

Swayam and Sharon were lost looking at each other.. They never realised that the song was now over and now people were actually starring at them.. They were lost in their own world.. Everyone was just staring at them and giggling.. Their parents were too giggling except for Rishi.. Their friends went awww.. Rey giggling moved forward..

Rey (whispering): Show time over guys! Gaana khatam.. Agar tumhari injazzat hot oh sangeet aage badaye?

Swayam and Sharon suddenly realised that Rey said something and looked at him questioningly..

Rey (teaseing): Thank god! Mujhe toh laga ab parso shaadi ke liye panditji ko idhar hi bulana padega shaadi karvane ke liye!

Both the bride and groom had their cheeks turning to beetroot red and they were hell embarrassed.. They looked around and people were looking at them only.. Their cheeks turned redder..

Soon the sangeet was over with everyone's dinner and then goodbyes.. All were home..

Sharon's room..

Sharon was really tired.. She had got herself changed and was just sitting at her dressing-table and smiling remembering their sangeet while cleaning up her face.. Just then her gaze fell of the window behind.. She wasn't surprised.. She walked to the window and stood their with her hands on her hip and looking at the person struggling to get in..

Swayam was trying to get in her room when his eyes feel on someone feet that were covered with the beautiful design and fluffy slippers.. He was hanging half inside and half outside.. His gaze travelled from the feet slowly to the beautiful angelic face.. She stood there with her eyebrow raised.. He gave her a cheeky smile and struggled further to get in.. Somehow managing to get the whole of him into the room he stood up and looked at her in the same position..

Sharon: Why am I not surprised?

Swayam (cheekily): What? I was missing you!

Sharon: Yeah right! Swayam hum abhi kuch der pehle saath the..

Swayam: Haan toh? Woh maa ne mujhse kahan ke kal subh subh humari halsi hai and I can't see you after that till the wedding iss liye I could stay without meeting you..

Sharon: Oh God! Kya karu main iss ladke ka?

Swayam (turning her and hugging her from behind): Kuch nahi! (placing his chin on her shoulder) Bas bahut saara pyaar karo aur jaldi se Mrs.Swayam Shekhwat bann jao..

Sharon (keeping a hand on his cheek): You are such a kid at times..

Swayam (kissing her cheek): Yes, your baby for life! I love you!

Sharon: Love you too!

Swayam picked Sharon in his arms and took her to the bed.. They both lay down with Sharon's head on his chest.. Swayam playing with her hair with one hand and the other under his head for support..

Sharon: Sangeet main kitna maza aaya na!

Swayam: Hmmm.. Humare friends ne kitni mehnat ki..

Sharon: The best gift we could have ever got..

Swayam: They are the best!

Sharon: Hmmm.. I'm sure yeh idea Rey aur Taani ka tha..

Swayam: Yeah.. We are so lucky to have such friends.. Hai na?

Sharon: Agar woh log nahi hote toh we would have been together today.. Nah they are more as family to us..

Swayam: Hmmm..! Chalo lets sleep Mrs.Shekawat! 2 more days filled with many more memorable moments to come..

Sharon: Yes Mr.Shekhawat!

They both soon drifted into a deep slumber.. Though they were tired but they loved each and every moment of each day.. All were celebrating their togetherness and so were they..

The sun hadn't yet shown off its brightness when someone was knocking at the door.. Sharon lazily yawned and got up..

Sharon: Ya mom!

Rashmi: Sharon beta utho and get ready, mandir jaana hai aur phir haldi bhi hai..

Sharon: Yes mom!

It was 4:30am Sharon rubbing her eyes looked at her love sleeping with his mouth a bit open.. She smiled and moved her hand through his silky soft hair..

Sharon: Swayam! Baby utho! You have to go home nahi toh Aunty will be worried..

Swayam: Kya hai Shar.. Sone do na!

Sharon: You have to go baba! Mujhe bhi tayaar hona hai..Chalo get up now..

Swayam (covering his face with the pillow): 5 minutes!!

Sharon (getting up): Ok! I'm getting ready!!

She moved to her bathroom to get ready.. After about 45 minutes she came wear a beautiful blue anarkali.. Her hair wet and water dripping from the ends.. She sat in front of the dressing table while drying her hair.. Swayam was yet in bed in deep sleep.. Sharon just smiled and nodded lightly.. After setting up her hair she moved to the bed.. She removed the pillow covering Swayam's face and saw a cute pout on his face.. It looked as if a 7-year old was trying his level best to catch up with his sleep and avoid going to school.. She again ruffled his hair..

Sharon: Swayam! Get up baba! Tumhe ab ghar jaana hoga..

Swayam got up with half opened eyes and hair messed up.. He looked at Sharon and again slept on her lap..

Swayam: Kya Sharon! Sone do na!

Sharon (sternly): Get up this minute.. And leave..

Swayam startled with the tone got up with a jerk and looked at Sharon with confused and surprised eyes..

Swayam: Aise baat karte hai apne honewale pati se?

Sharon: Honewale pati ho, hue toh nahi na! Now get out of bed and leave.. Sirf meri nahi tumhari bhi haldi hai.. Shaadi karni hai ke nahi?!

Swayam unwillingly got out of bed.. Went to the washroom to freshen-up while Sharon got herself ready.. After a few minutes he came out with a pout..

Sharon (giggling): Kya hua?

Swayam (fake anger): Huh! I hate you!

Sharon: he he he.. Pata hai! Now off you go..

Swayam came to her.. gave her a hug and kissed her cheek.. The pout hadn't left his face yet.. He turned towards the window but suddenly looked back..

Swayam: Hey Mrs.Shekhawat, you look stunning as always

He winked and she blushed as red as possible.. He jumped down and zoomed in his car..

The rest of the day went busy with them following the rituals and getting themselves drenched in haldi.. It was fun.. At first Swayam was ready to get the haldi all over him but when his mother told him that this haldi help your skin to glow just like the brides skin he held his mother's hand and made her apply the paste only over his exposed skin.. By the end of it all were really tired and awaited the Big Day..

Both Sharon and Swayam were unable to sleep that night.. Just another few hours and they will be together for the rest of their life.. The day they had always dreamt about.. It was finally here.. As their wedding was in the evening the planed to get some rest during the day time.. Though the urge of meeting each other was strong they still controlled themselves till the evening..

And finally it was time.. There entered the groom wear a marronish-red colour short-sherwani ending a few inches above his knees.. A rest-golden dhoti with red embroydary and a golden-red pagdi complimenting the rest of the outfit.. His red mojdi's were adding to the charm.. He had kept his hair gelled and his style could just melt hearts as he walked.. All the eyes warned to the enterance as the groom entered with his friends dancing on the beats of the dhol, making his existence known.. Swayam was welcomed by Rashmi at the enterance by the tilak and the small aarti.. As they proceeded forward Swayam's eyes were searching for only one person, for whom he was here today.. But as known she would only join in during the other rituals..

After a while the pandit called Swayam to the mandap and also Sharon.. His heart started beating at an abnormal pace.. His shifted his glance to the side and there his saw his lady walking to him in a complete with lehenga with gold embrydory.. Her hair were covered with the red netted dupatta complimenting the rest of the outfit.. Her hands filled with bangles.. Her delicated neck carrying an elagent set of gold.. A mang-tika covering her beautiful forehead and very minimum make-up.. She looked no less than an angel.. His Angel..

Swayam's eyes were following her path.. The pandit was saying something to him but he paid no heeds.. Finally when she came and sat next to him she giggled looking at him dazzed.. Sharon slowly forwarded her hand and closed his now open mouth.. Swayam was out of his trance and he checked her out once again..

Swayam: You look exceptionally Khoobsurat!! Just like My Angel!

Sharon blushed really really hard and nudged him.. He smiled and very quietly held her hand.. All throughout the rituals he didn't leave her hand even for a single moment.. After a longtime the kanyadaan, the mangal phera's, the mangal ashirwad everything was done.. She was finally his.. Actually she was always his but now officially too she was his part..

Soon everything was wrapped up.. The Shekhawat's were back home.. After finishing a few more rituals griha pravesh etc etc. Taani took Sharon to the room.. Swayam was with the boys who for no reason were keeping him busy.. He was getting hell irritated as it had been 24 hours and more than he hadn't been with her.. Finally the boys let him go and he entered the room..

Swayam (looking at the empty room): Yeh Sharon kahan chali gayi?

As he heard the water flowing in the bathroom he himself shifted to the cupboard and removed his night-wear.. A few minutes later Sharon came out dressed in a comfortable pair of shorts and tee..

Sharon (patting dry her hair): Hey baby, go get yourself changed..

Swayam was grinning looking at her.. But not letting his thoughts wander else where he moved to the bathroom to get changed.. When he was done he lay down on the bed and so did Sharon.. [Ab haar baar bolne ki zarurat thodi na hai ke Sharon kaise so rahi thi.. Its but obvious rest on his chest]

Sharon (playing with his fingers): Finally!

Swayam (stroking her hair): Finally Mrs.Shekhawat..

Sharon: Mrs.Sharon Swayam Shekhawat..

Swayam: I still can't believe ke tum hamesha ke liye meri bann gayi ho..

Sharon (looking into his eyes): Main toh hamesha se tumhari hi thi..

Swayam (creasing her cheek): I love you Mrs.Shekhawat!

Sharon: Love you too baby!

Sharon leaned forward while gazing at his lips.. Swayam hand slid down her ear cupping her face.. They were slowly inching closer.. and closer.. and closer.. And

LIGHTS OUT

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Posted: 11 years ago
NOTE

Hello Everyone,

Firstly a BIG BIG BIG Thank you to all of you'll for loving this story so much 🤗
This was just a random thought that came to my mind while I was cleaning up my room 😆
Mujhe koi idea nahi tha that I will end up writing a Swaron Story on it..
This wouldn't have been possible if you'll wouldn't have appreciated my work so much..
Thank you to all the Liker, Commenter, Reader and also the Silent Readers.
Thank you so much once again.
Keep liking my work and I shall keep irritating you'll with my concepts and stories..
That's a Deal..
Hope You'll enjoyed the story as much as I enjoyed writing it..
This is jus the start many more to come 😉
Edited by Tan.vish.K - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...awesome update
Wwish it never got over
Well written

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