Swaron FF: The best Journey ever... *COMPLETED* - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
hello i m apurva commenting on jas k behhalf par
cs is nyc and intro also luking foreward
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Interesting concept.. nice CS
"Engagement se Shaadi ke beech ka waqt bahut khoobsurat aur yaadgaar hota hai!"
swaron journey from engagement to marriage wow..
really excited to read

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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting concept and plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing CS
Waiting for first part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow..awesum concept & cs...plz update soon n plz do pm me :) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey!
Just read da concept n da CS!!
Looking forward to read further!😊
Nyc concept n CS!!
Update soon!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow..seems interesting...plz pm wen u update

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my god hw cn i miss ur story..
A fab concept engagement to marriage is awsm time i thnk ..
Waiting for nxt part
pls pm me..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome concept!!!
Please continue...:) do pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey people, so here is the 1st update to my FF...


Chapter-1

'Hey, hey, hey everyone! Yaar pata hai aap sab busy ho but hum shayad yahan engagement main aaye hai so please can I have your attention' Thank you! So without any further delay chaliye inn dono becharo ki sagai karva dete hai' who kya hai na nahi toh mera yeh jo dost hai woh excitement ke maare pagal ho jaye' said Rey grabbing the mic and inviting everyone towards the couple'

There she stood right beside him' dressed in a beautiful purple and pink lehenga with some gold work on its borders' it was simple but yet elegant' a longitudinal cut right from her upper hip exposing her snow white skin' the sleeves ending with her shoulder and the netted dupatta dangling on one side' her hair left on her right shoulder with fluffy curls at the end' her ear rings not that long but just right for her outfit' she avoided wearing any bangles except for the two given by her future mother-in-law' very light make-up as he always liked her natural beauty' She avoided wearing much accessories though being the bride but her simplicity was surely making her look even more beautiful just like a typical indian dulhan' and to add to her beauty were her crimson red colour that were highlighting her rosy cheeks' she was looking no less than an angel from heaven' HIS angle'

And he stood in a deep purple indo western sherwani which had this elegant black shine' the sherwani was ended right above his knee because of which the creased pleats of the chudiddar were enhancing his long legs' the entire outfit was just apt for his anatomy' he had planned to gel up his hair as he had to look mature as he was the groom but just on her request he let his hair be messed up as always' but yes before the ceremony she had made it a point to take him for a trim as he had started tying a baby pony lately' being a man obviously he had no accessories but yes he did keep his silver and black shining rado on' And how can we forget, his perfect smile which was to die for' God! They were just perfectly complimenting one another'.

It was hard for Swayam to actually hold on to his horses as he was super excited' he was actually forcing Rey from the time they had arrived at the venue to make the announcement about the ring ceremony' He was really tired on continuous denial from Rey, Taani and then his parents' Sharon was continuously placing her hand on his shoulder to calm him down but in vain' He behaved no less than a 5 year old' But Sharon was seriously loving his cuteness and was admiring him throughout the while' As soon as Rey finished the announcement his eyes were glittering with happiness and his smile had gone wider' She chuckled looking at his reaction' Taani walked up with both the rings arranged beautifully on a silver plate that was covered with red rose petals' Mr. & Mrs. Shekhawat and Mr. & Mrs. Rai Prakash stood right there with them' Without waiting for further instructions Swayam hastily took the ring from the tray and asked Sharon for her hand' She gave him a slight glare and hit him on his hand telling him to behave' he ignored it and slid the ring in her left hand ring finger' Everyone clapped and so did he letting out a small sigh' She was purposely taking her own sweet time just to tease him' Sharon took the ring from Taani and stood there holding it in her hand' Swayam put his hand forward showing off his 32 pearls' holding the ring between her fingers she looked at him and then the ring' again him and then the ring' she nodded negatively with a pout' he was confused on what was she doing' the next action from Swayam made everyone present there laugh their hearts out' He just grabbed onto Sharon's hand that was catching the ring and guided her to his finger making the ring slide through' Everyone including Sharon were laughing their guts out'

Rey (teasingly): Dude, itni jaldi hai suli pe chadne ki ke khudko hi ring pehna di?!

In return he got a warning glare from Swayam' After sharing a slight laugh, both Sharon and Swayam moved to their parent and took their blessings' Both their parents were more than happy because they chose each other as their life partner'

Shweta (Swayam's mom): Swayam beta tum aur Sharon yahin pe ruko taaki sab guests tumhe mil sake

Swayam: Ji Maa!

Swayam comes to Sharon who was busy chatting with Taani'

Swayam: Hey!

Sharon: Hey!

Swayam: Main toh tumhe woh important baat batana toh bhool hi gaya!

Sharon:Kya?

Swayam (in her ear): I Love You!

She turned into a deep shade of red and just looked away trying to hide her vulnerability'

Waise, I think you can reply back!

Sharon: Swayam, please! Yahan sab hai!

Swayam: Aare toh kya hua? Ab toh yeh mera hakk hai, after all you are my fianc (winks at her)

Sharon: Swayam behave!

He just pouts and fakes anger looking away'

Sharon: Swayam!

Swayam: Huh, mujhe tumse baat nai karni'

Before she could say anything further, a line of guest comes up to congratulate them' She looked at him but he was just ignoring her'

Sharon (to herself): God! Yeh ladka bhi na, kabhi kabhi bacho jaisi zidd karne lagta hai! Aur isse bhi humare sagai ke din hi mujhse naraz rehna hai'

Just as the frequency of the guests decreased Sharon planned to talk to him'

Sharon: Swayam! (no response) Swayam! (no response) Swayam please ya, stop acting like a kid! (no response) God, you are so stubborn!

Swayam (a bit irritated): What the hell! Maine itni choti si request ki and instead of fulfilling that request tum mujhe' I mean seriously mujhe stubborn bol rahi ho?! I guess you forgot, aaj tak tumne apne khud ka stubborn hone ka record tod diya hai, and tum mujhe stubborn bol rahi ho!

Sharon: Aare tum baat kidhar se kidhar lekar jaa rahe ho!

Swayam: Kidhar se kidhar kya! Jo sach hai woh bol raha hu!

Sharon: Par iss main meri stubborn hone ki baat kahan se aa gayi?

They had as usual started their tu-tu-main-main' though it wasn't loud but the gang noticed it'

Simi (shaking her head): Inka kuch nai ho sakta!

Nil: Haan yaar jab dekho tab ladhte rehte hai'

Vicky: Inn dono main itna stamina aata kahan se hai?

Neha: Par jitna yeh two fighting usse bhi jyada ek dusre ko love doing'

Simi: Yeah right! They are like the perfect love birds with a perfect love story'

They all chuckled and continued with their chit-chat' Rey ran up to the stage sensing that there is something wrong'

Rey: Hey guys, kya hua? Tum dono aise muh phugake kyun khade ho?

Swaron: Huh!

Rey: Guys please atleast aaj ke din toh fight mat karo! It your engagement yaar!

Sharon: Rey, apne best friend se kaho ussi ne fight chalu ki'

Swayam: Oh please pehle khud zidd karti ho and phir conveniently blame mujhpe dalti ho'

Rey: Guys! Guys! Shut up yaar! Actually you know what, I'm out of here!

Rey leaves them alone' it had been long since they were just attending all the guest and everyone was coming up and congratulating them' majority of the guests had already left as it was getting late' the gang was there having their dinner' Sharon was exhausted as it had been a long week for her' She had got all the arrangement done for their engagement as she wanted it to be perfect' Swayam had helped her a bit but even he was pretty busy with the office and then the academy' she didn't get a good sleep in these few days and to top it all she was the one who had pulled Swayam to shop for their outfits, rings and also taken him to b:blunt for a trim' She sat on one of the chairs arranged around a round table' Swayam sat next to her' he saw her closing her eyes and letting out a sigh'

Swayam (concern): Hey, you alright?

She just nodded positively while placing her palm on her eyes' Just then Sharon's mom walked up to them'

Rashmi: Beta, tum dono jao khana khaa lo, sab log toh chale hi gaye hai' you both must be tired, toh khaana khaa lo and phir thodi der main hum bhi chalte hai'

They obeyed her and very soon finished their dinner' after a while everything was done and they were ready to leave' Swayam and Sharon had yet not spoken' At the beginning both were busy arguing but now Sharon was really tired and just wanted to get back home to get some peaceful sleep' this seemed a bit hard as she had fought with Swayam' Soon everyone was back home'

She went up to her room' Just to feel a bit fresh and ware out the tiredness she first planned to have a nice soothing shower' she came out wearing her shorts and a white tank top, just ready to sleep' She stood in the middle of the room and was lost in her thoughts'

Sharon (to herself): Yeh Swayam ko bhi aaj hi mujhse fight karna tha kya?

Just then to her shock someone came and caught her from the back closing her mouth with the palm...

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So guys, how was it? Please do leave in your comments and tell me how it was!
Hope you'll enjoyed it...

Next Chapter coming soon... 😃
Edited by smartypantstanu - 12 years ago

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