TS - I Need You Note Pg. 19 - Page 9

Wow that was a fabulous and amazing update, simply outstanding.

Thank you for the scrap!

Arnav's frustrated texting juxtaposed against Khushi's furious replies was hilarious, as was the image of an 'at the end of his tether' Arnav chucking his phone at innocent passersby! I thought the notion of working for ASR was making Sanjay Khan nervous enough to faint and even to throw up, but looks like this crazy reaction is due to his infatuation with him… just loved your jab at fangirls of Arnav Singh Raizada / Barun Sobti! The line 'He was eventually brought out of his daze but not by one of the seasoned employees. He was made conscious of his surrounding by Steve Jobs vision and Arnav Singh Raizada's throwing ability.' had me in splits! The whole scene of Sheetal's reminiscences rousing Khushi's ire, Khushi on the verge of violence, Payal's fear of her sister and final frustrated advice "And pick up the damn phone and talk to your husband. The constant ringing is giving me a headache!" were epic! Looks like both Arnav and Khushi have had a lot of throwing practice… they keep scoring a bull's eye! Arnav bulldozing his way through all obstacles must have been part of his business tactics… he knows that only such tactics will get him an audience with his wife! "If you don't come willingly I know other ways to take you." 😉 Now if that isn't a double-entendre I don't know what is! A very frustrated Arnav turned around, threw his wife over his shoulder and once again began walking up the stairs… finally he has realised that only caveman tactics will work with his Khushi. "Damn it woman! Stop kicking! Do you want to have kids one day or not?!" 🤣 Dear Lord, how do you manage to come up with such one-liners?! The near-hysteria pervading the house at the realisation of a make out session, with sound effects, in the offing just slew me! Arnav's heartfelt words of gratitude for having Khushi in his life and his confession of how much he needs her were all the more beautiful in their simplicity, more meaningful and eloquent than any grand gestures! Forget Maths, Aarav is getting an aural lesson in Biology! Just love Sanjay Khan… poor Akash, looks like he's in for some more comparisons from his wife about his and his brother's prowess!

Just love your wacky and outrageous sense of humor 👏! A fitting conclusion to the whole Sheetal track! She won't dare look Khushi or Arnav in the eye after that very vocal proof of the latters' love 😆!

Hillarious update.

Hilarious update...

Hahahaha!! That was hilarious! 😆 But a very sweet update! Great job! 👏 😊

Take a bow! You are a genius!!

You call this as weird sense of humour? I say this is rib-breaking, tummy-aching freaking humour!!! I was LMAO throughout and literally fell off my chair several times!!!

Awesome!!!😆

Will you please please add me to your pm list if you have one? I am not able to bookmark your index post...it says topic is closed...

Just started with this one.

Firstly apologies for the late appearance *holds ears*


There are hardly any stories on the forum which deals with the Sheetal track as most of us detested it! So thumbs up for writing something around this track :-)


Secondly, I had seen the basketball related episodes in a total of two minutes as I was too furious on ASR and how badly he 'handled' the situation and treated Khushi *glares*


The start of your TS brought an automatic smile to my face as I got to read what I wanted to see - a thinking ASR.


I loved his inner debate and I am glad that he is using his brains, finally!


Off to read the next part :-)

Hahaha, it was just superb update! The way everybody was trying to stop Arnav from going to the kitchen was hilarious! Fantastic chapter, loved the way you wrote it. It was indeed funny 😆😆

Wow what an ending! You wrapped this up beautifully. Not only was I laughing but Arnav's heartfelt declaration was so perfect.