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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Oh God I can't stop laughing 🤣

U know I was apprehensive about reading this TS as Its a topic I usually avoid. But I m glad that I read it. U seriously r an absolutely awesome writer. I never thought this TS will come out like this. I have read the previous two OSs the first time u have posted them and enjoyed them equally. U should write more. I m waiting for u to update The Other Side of Khushi. Thanks for making me read this TS. I have really enjoyed it. Thanku for the PM and the scrap as well :)

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Good Lord, woman...that was freaking awesome.

In your face Sheetal...ha ha ha

Arnav Singh Raizada, the hapless, joru-ka-gulam, talking to himself, going crazy husband..love this.

This was superb..funny,with the kind of tongue-in-cheek humour, I love..

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@BlueBloodQueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Awesome up date, really funny up date dear...

Edited by Hemalatha.s - 12 years ago

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Omg!! Lol is all I have to say!! That was funny!!

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mastermagician

@mastermagician

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

OMG!!!!🤣

Woman!!!you seriously have a knack of writing hilarious stuff!!!😆

The text messages between Arnav and Kushi were so funny!!!

Payal was damn funny in such serious situation!

AAGH Sheetal!!that bimbo!! dont get me started on her!!!😡

Paya chucking Tomatoes!!1 Oh god!!!🤣

Sanjay Khan!!!😆 Poor guy!!😆

Arnav came home like a raging bull and carried his wife on his shoulders without any hesitation!!😳

I was wondering why they need cotton... Everyone desperately looking for them😆

HP fainted just by listening that they needed cotton!!!🤣

I thought may be Arnav will start yelling on top of his lungs!!😲

But what followed was😳 It was Kushi screaming although for a different reason☺️

Akash! All the best with your ears🤣😳

Awesome update!!!!😃

I couldn't control my laugh!!!😆

I enjoyed it!!!😊

Thank you for notifying regarding the update!😊

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Jyothsna

@joe4joe

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

funny & superb updt.
Arnav rocked in tis updt.
But,y they need cotton?
Thx 4 the pm.
Waiting 4 ur next updt.

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Superb update
but why dey needed cotton..?? 😕

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Angel13

@Angel13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Fantastic update
Loved it
So Arnav came home and explained Khushi he needs her and nothing else matters to him
Ahh everyone knew Khushi would be screaming while making love
Hahahahhah and that is what happened and poor men fainted
Thanks for pm

Loved it

Edited by Angel13 - 12 years ago

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

I've become a fan of your writing. Absolutely hilarious. Hat a perfect finale to the Sheetl episode. I hated er and hated Arnav's indifference to Khushi when Sheetal was around. This is what one would expect from Arnav if he really loved his wife. Wonderful story. You are brilliant. Please PM me when you write anything new. Would love to read it.