TS - I Need You Note Pg. 19

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Great start. Sheetal track was a complete character assassination of both Arnav and Khushi. The ever concerned Arnav was least bothered about Khushi. I belong to the majority group as far as Sheetal track is concerned. So I usually avoid reading stories relating to this track. But I think I'd like to read more of this one as u seem to give us the part that was missing from the show and that is the inner thoughts of Arnav. Thanks for the PM :)

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

It was indeed hilarious, very nice and unique take on Sheetal track, I wish Arnav could have understand Khushi's feeling in the show too. Superb OS, continue soon 😊

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Excellent 👏👏

Poor Arnav🤣

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Gunjan

@..Gunjan..

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Hilarious awesome start
Different !
Please continue soon
😊

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

This one is actually very cute. Looking forward to how you are going to take this forward.

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arjuhi5

@arjuhi5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

awesome n intresting plzz continue...

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

That was really good! Waiting for part 2!

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rakhee12

@rakhee12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Fabulous start. I totally agree the Sheetal track though interesting was not handled well.. Hopefully we will get to see a better version of events in your story and make up for the disaster that was shown in the episode