TS - I Need You Note Pg. 19 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waiting dear...
Do pm when u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi everyone,

First of all I'm sorry for not updating when said I would but I wasn't very happy with what I had written so wanted to fix it up.

Hoping to update by the end of this week for sure!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
No problem - take your time and update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice os continue soon please and pm me next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful writing! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice..waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi everyone!

I'm not entirely happy with this part but it is better than what I had originally written and I can't seem to think of ways to improve it so I am just going to post it.

I promise the next part will be better and longer!

Also if anyone would like a PM for the last update please add me as a buddy.

PS. I've only scrapped up to page 2 I will continue tomorrow!


Part 2: Mr. Bartley's Bimbos

"Khushi what should we make for dinner today?" asked Payal while flipping through her newly purchased international cookbook.

"How about some burgers? Arnav and I used to love this burger place called Mr. Bartleys! He used to take me there all the time."

Two pairs of eyes shot up to look at Sheetal. One pair immediately focused on a cookbook and frantically began to look for burger recipes while the other saw red.

Does she think her name is Khushi?!

No Sheetalji your name is Sheetal!

Stop it Khushi! She's a guest!

Yeah a guest who is hell bent on making "meant nothing" into something.

"NAHI!"

"Khushi if you don't want to make burgers you can just say so. There's really no need to yell," said Sheetal as she gave Khushi a dirty look.

"Are you okay Khushi?" asked a concerned Payal.

"Of course Jiji, I was just thinking about something else. Jiji did you find a burger recipe in there or should I google it?" Khushi weakly asked her sister as she reached for their kitchen Ipad.

But Arnavji said it "meant nothing!"

Oh okay that's why they shared that weird eye lock on the court yesterday? It's perfectly normal to share that kind of vibe with an ex-girlfriend and become a father figure to her son right?

Bas Khushi bas! He said he only eats jalebis with me!

Um hate to break it to you but jalebis have absolutely nothing to do with impregnating a woman.

Ugh you know what I mean!

Just prepare yourself to be a stepmother...or an ex-wife.

"HE WOULDN'T DARE!"

"What's so daring about Arnav taking me to his favourite restaurant? I mean he was my boyfriend after all."

Haye Devi Mayia! When will this henna dyed red haired freak of nature stop talking about my husband?!

"Oh Sheetalji! You have no idea how crazy our Khushi is! I'm sure she was daydreaming about Arnavji as usual," Payal said as she quickly grabbed the knife out of her sister's hands in a desperate attempt to diffuse the situation

"So as I was saying Arnav used to literally drag me there! You know the burgers used to be so big that I would just share with Arnav instead of ordering my own." Sheetal took a bite of a carrot knowing her words had hit the exact spot she was aiming for.

Ring Ring

Can't this man take a hint?

Ring Ring

Didn't he learn anything at Harvard other than attracting bimbos with fake accents?

"Khushi why did you cut those calls?"

"It was just a telemarketer Jiji. He's been bugging me all morning."

****************************************************************

"OW!"

"Are you okay Sanjay?"

"I think so Aman Sir. That cellphone came out of nowhere," replied Sanjay rubbing his head and staring at the Iphone lying near his feet.

Aman quickly diverted his attention to his boss's cabin and waited.

"AMAN BRING ME MY GOD FORSAKEN PHONE!"


Please let me know what you think! :)


Edited by IPKWA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice part! I don't like that Sheetal, what does she think of herself! Waiting for the next part! Great update! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww poor Sanjay..Hope his head is OK 😆😆 Angry ASR is one hell lot of human being to handle, god bless Khushi for disconnecting his phone 😊 Great update and love the way you wrote Khushi's outburst just like Arnav's in previous update. Awesome!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
amazing!!! plzzz do pm me when u update next

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