Originally posted by: bs_deeps
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I am assuming that you are not going to check this page and when I am done with the update, you will be surprised..I so want to see your reaction.. You gave me a hard time with this one! I was on the verge of crying .. 😳So many questions & confusions over the last chapter!nah..I didn't have any questions..😳 Good for you! 😛I have replied to a very few comments randomly from Page 102 onwards. To those I could not reply, please accept my thanks and gratitude for spending your time here.you didnt reply to my comment..so ok..I am accepting your thanks How can I reply to a non-existent comment? 🤢Since we are almost done with this story, I would like to recommend you two other stories that are close to my heart.
Destuhnee by chander992
without you by indi52
why..? if you are story is not done, you would not recommend? I am just asking No comment! 😆
This was supposed to be the last chapter of the SS but you will get another one. 😳 And there will be an epilogue which will reveal the mystery of lemon. 😉you first committed that there will be an epilogue and then you have started thinking about whether to give one or not? I am writing an epilogue baba!
"Your silence will not protect you."
Actually ASR happened to read this quote after the last update..so he decided to get into action Good that he read & realized!
Arnav stood rooted near the door as he watched her show her ring off to the female colleagues.
this is why you should not have glass doors from where you can see everything but you can't hear anything..either you have completely closed cabin or have an open cubicle culture..hehe.. 🤣🤣Her eyes glistened as bright as the stones of the ring. Her face was beaming; she seemed happy.and Khushi seemed happy? nahhh..she is happy..hehe... Of course she is! 😛As she sat down, he watched her eyeing the ring fondly and caressing it, a tender smile adorning her beautiful face.be happy that she didnt kiss it..😆 Haha .. would he have fainted or pulled out his hair?
The dagger ran deeper through Arnav's heart. How could you do this, Khushi?
the same way he sent daggers thru her heart? Ditto!
Arnav had needed time to get his strength back. The underground parking had become his personal hell as the painful realization had hit him hard and rough.
one doubt..a serious one..ok? ASR has his personal parking lot? no one can see him there? ok...you clarified my doubt..CEO has designated parking lot 😆 I have already explained! I was wondering why after all these days it came to you .. 😛The hailing storm within Arnav only got stronger as he witnessed her fondling the ring. His determination slowly slipped away and the unbearable pain took over again.Mr.Impulsive..this is how he runs his empire too? 😆 His empire and his lemon are not handled the say way .. 😉Arnav walked back to his office and slumped on his leather chair.
stepping back..slumping..it doesnt suit you ASR, open the door with a huge bang, drag her to your cabin, and do whatever you want to..I mean..talk whatever you want to..He sat silently with his eyes closed, clearly and deeply sensing each sensation happening to him. His head was pounding, limbs felt limp. Somewhere around the middle of his chest was the epicenter ' shooting pain through his body, quake after quake. He had no idea something like this could ever happen to him. He had no idea how his body could burst into so much pain with no apparent physical injury. He did not try to think or reason. He let himself feel the pain and drown.You have written this para so beautifully..👏you love ASR or what? did he have any idea that one day he would get accustomed to give lift to a girl with pompoms..did he have any idea he would go crazy over lemony essence over his costly perfume..the most important things in life happens unexpectedly..good or bad...so ASR..its time for you to learn that and stop planning and take some action 😉 Yes, I love ASR. I have always loved him .. my ASR, bas!
This was what he had been running away from all his life.
Gamophobia. Wasn't it what they called it? The fear of marriage. The fear of relationships. The fear of long term commitment. He had carefully instilled and pampered it in himself to save his once brutalized heart, to never let anyone hurt him again ' to never let himself hurt anyone.
Gamophobia..you introduced me to another new word..you remember the other word from other FF? 😳 Hehe .. the other word I doubt if you can use much .. hehe .. but this one you can!
And now all he felt was hurt, pain, grief .. all for a woman.
arrey while feel so bad..just for liking that woman a lot? shya... Shya indeed!
How did he let this happen to him?
thats what happens when one follows their heart..all you get is pain.. someone sounds like ASR!
The rest of the day, the employees of AR faced a ruthless ASR. They had faced his anger before but this deadly amalgam of wrath and impatience was something beyond comprehension. Something was terribly wrong in the world of Arnav Singh Raizada, everyone understood. And everyone prayed, for their own sake, that things got back in order in his life again. Soon.
sight an example..what did he do? I thought its unnatural if he didnt shout at someone... I will have to write a full chapter on this .. you really want to know?
Simran silently sent a prayer for Khushi as she knocked on ASR's cabin door. ASR had asked for her ' to come and meet him in his cabin before she would leave.
"Hope she survives," Simran hoped and murmured sincerely.
she is safe in ASR's arms..I mean..cabin..she is the one who is giving him trouble Only if she knew! Someone asked me to include a bit in epilogue about AR employees' reaction when the news is out .. lol .. it would be fun!!
Arnav was restless and seething. Anger was his way of letting out; anger was his own defense mechanism. He knew he was being unreasonable but he did not know how else he could handle his vulnerability. He was fidgeting impatiently, waiting when he heard the knocks on his door. And he stiffened. Thrice in a row - short, mild, with steady breaks. It was her.
stiffened? he is supposed to get angry..he is supposed to charge on her..kya kar rahi ho tum? He is being charged instead these days! 😆
He shifted slightly in his seat, all his senses anticipating the one thing they were having difficulty to live without.
haha..ASR is tensed..that would be worth watching...
"Come in, Khushi."
She entered the room, little hesitantly, little surprised, little intimidated.
hesitantly..why? bcoz of his "go" in parking? because she is wondering why he has called her now ..
surprised..why? bcoz he knew it was her? check ..intimidated? now I dont know why because of his behaviour in the parkingYes, I even know how you knock. Arnav felt like shouting. Why did not she understand how much he .. ..
how much he what? Here lies the problem! He is still not getting to finish the line himself .. he will get there. yes, he will!
Arnav stared at her face. She was not even looking at him. She looked a bit annoyed, a bit uncomfortable. His eyes shifted and noticed her massaging the ring with her thumb. His whole body shuddered in an inexplicable emotion. How could she?
this girl is making it impossible for him..ok..now..massaging ring..we do that when we dont know what to do..rt? or when we are tensed or while concentrating on something..and all this guy could think of was, that she is doing it bcoz thats her engagement ring...? how could she what..hey Ram..or hey Devi Maiya.. One-tracked mind! 😆
His voice came out indifferent.
"Ok. You can leave."
another surprise to Khushi..this duo is full of surprises.. Mr Unpredictable!
Her eyes shot up, surprised and met his icy cold eyes. Finally. Arnav took the opportunity to read her eyes, to get inside .. to get an answer. How could you, Khushi? But she averted her gaze before he could infer anything.
She knows he can read her? hmm... Because she can read him too? 😛 It's a dangerous game ..
Arnav waited for her a few feet away from the AR building entrance. He stood leaning against the wall, half under the shade of the tree. The Delhi drizzle was drenching his favorite dark grey Brioni but he did not care. He was waiting for her. He had to know how she could do this to him... how she could do this to herself.
when you speak about drizzle and rain..I have no comments dear..bcoz I can think of only one person and my mind goes blank..😳 We are on the same boat .. you know that! 😳
and what is he thinking when he was feeling how she could do it to herself? he saw her showing the ring happily rt? 😉 That's why he got so confused!!!His lemon. She was his. Only his.no..she is not..she is becoming someone else's..now do what you want to..we will see...😃 Hehe .. He is Arnav Singh Raizada .. bhoolna maat! 😉
She started walking briskly, her eyes searching for an auto, her face slightly tensed. She checked her wrist watch and looked up anxiously. And then she halted as her eyes fell on the man standing on the other side of the lane.
why searching for auto..wind didnt work? she couldnt feel him around? tch..disappointed.. oh! I did not use that hawa ka jhoka thing in my FF! Also not too much fall in arms .. 😛
"We need to talk."
nah..you need to talk..
"Not before we are done talking."
your employee can sew you ASR...😆
"Kya kar rahe hain aap? Koi dekh lega .."
is it ok if no one notices? Haha ... bingo! 😉
"Kya kar rahi ho tum?"
aah..our fav..fav dailogue..and that expression..those eyes, lips... Yesss! My breathing falters yaar .. literally!
"Why? Why should I let you go?"
ok..now ASR is not having any logics.. lost .. 😆
"Kyunki mujhe der ho rahi hai. Aur .. Gautam-ji mera intezaar kar rahe hain."
now this is what is called as adding fuel.. He deserves it, right?
"Yes I am. Why does it bother you?"
"Kyun ki .. kyun ki, Khushi .."
and tounge tied.. That's our man! 😃😃
"Aur hum kiske saath kahan jaate hain, aapko isse kya faraq padta hain?"
Not again, Khushi. Arnav groaned.
"Farak padta hain, dammit .. tum jaanti ho!"
A woman always needs assurance..didnt you hear that? He is not getting it properly yet .. 😛
"Nahi. Mein Kuch nahi jaanti."Don't tell me you don't know.
now you dont tell us that you dont know that she cant do anything of that sort to you...😡"Khushi..""I don't understand you, Arnav ji. Why are you doing this? Kya chaahte ho aap?"
dont you understand what he wants..? you are supposed to understand everything Khushi...and he is supposed to misunderstand everything I have tried to keep it a bit more realistic .. it takes two to make a quarrel! 😉
"You want her, dammit," Devi Maiya squealed, "Say it, dammit. Just say it!"
ohho..devi maiya..what are you doing? you should make him say that.... She is resting!!
But Arnav Singh Raizada's eloquence was nurtured only for acquisition, mergers and portfolios. When it came to pouring his heart out, it failed him. He kept staring at her, trying earnestly to say something sensible but all he ended up doing was muttering a frustrated "Dammit".
dont worry..failures are stepping stones to success..first attempt failed..so what..you will still get another chance..will ya?
He wanted her with him. But he also wanted her .. happy. Was she happy moving on? Was she happy walking away from him?
now thats super irritating..its not sweet of him..not for me atleast..
"Tum .. Khush ho?"
Arnav stared at her with earnest hope, waiting for a reply. She couldn't be happy.
even if she is not, what makes him think that she will tell him about it?
"Haan. Khush hun. Bahaut Khush hain hum. Do you have any doubt?"
ta-da..perfect answer.. 😃
He .. did not understand her anymore. He .. did not understand himself.
aaaww...poor ASR... Hehe .. see .. you end up being on his side! 😛
"I believe you." He muttered.
now that makes your heart bleed when you know that you are lying and the other person is believing you only on the basis of trust that he has in you.. 😊😊
only I can write such dumb comment for a beautiful story that you had written...and the two paras that you wrote after this, when he walks away from her..I totally loved it when he felt that he could not face her any more..this is probably the worst situation one can face, you want to be with your loved one, but you can't, even if you know that person needs you the most..I love you dumbo comments because we both are dumbos, remember?DM creates all problems and then she says its his battle..you have nicely incorporated Anji - Arnav conversation..it fit so well...no one other than Anjali can put some sense into his non existant brain.. Anji dose I wanted to incorporate because I have always thought that that was her role in IPK .. well, we were not happy with her in IPK, so in my rendition, lets thank her! 😊
and tell me this..why everything goes wrong in his life, just when he decides to do something about his feelings? Murphy's law! 😉Let me see when you will read this comment...till then I am not telling you I have updated it 😉 You ended up telling me .. 😳 .. quite nautanki we both are!
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