SS: Of Lemons & Limes #5 (Chapter 20 - 22)

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BSRaizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Haiieee.. Mere Arshi kab sudharenge??

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-DobByDoDgeR-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

No no no
Please dont leAve us there
You nasty!!!!:)
Anyway loved the chapter
I could totally feel hiw they were feeling
Their inner turmoil
Their love
Their everything
Well portrayed
But im upset cause its going to end soon

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__blossom__

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

wow!!!

that was beautiful...God...i want to go in there and shake some sense into these thick headed ppl!!!!!😛

you've explained their heart break anguish love so beautifully i stumped!

great update!!!

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..ObliViate..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

lovly update 👍🏼

loved it

it was emotional

waiting for the next update

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dilectus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Do i need to tell you again why i love you??

ah, yes?!!

ok!!

I love you for this, this HOPE you give me everytym you give me an update, that things might not be that bad as i am perceiving them. That the person might mot mean what he said or what i understood. That it doesnt make a difference how big a dream is, the only thing matters is the love with which i nurture that dream. that love can mend any scraps, bend any roads and do any magic for me to reach and realize that dream in reality.

I love you omaraboti!!! 😳😳😳

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Arshix144

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Thank heavens I stayed awake and thank you for updating I am grinning again! I can't stop myself, I think I will be a zombie at work tomorrow but it is all worth it because I got to read a chapter out of my favourite book! You should write a book with Arshi stories u know! :D

Awesome chapter yet again and the much anticipated confrontation happened! So glad to see Khushi finally expressing herself and letting Mr. emotionally challenged Raizada know exactly what she felt. "why don't you believe in marriage"? I don't think I saw this coming, for her to actually express this out of the blue. This only made everything clear even more that this is what hurt her the most. If only Arnav was able to express the internal battle he was facing with someone, he wouldn't be in this mess to begin with. Poor bugga desperately tried not to hurt her but he did it!

The hug they shared was cute, he hurts her but it pains him more so he comforts her too! *sighs "you are beautiful" why didn't you say it to her dammit! "I am not your type either" some more *sighs Why don't you become her type, you know you want to! Arnav being arnav yet again brilliant portrayal of his internal thought process👏👏

Forever 🤣 ROFLing @ DM as she was having a silent conversation with Anjali " Don't think do something, do I have to do everything" Thank you for these light moments when everything else is so intense. And finally Arnav is craving Khushi's presence, he gets anxious about meeting her yet he doesn't realize what this feeling is! And then comes the final blow his lemon is waiting for him at the cross roads, I was not expecting Lemon to give him the time of the day anymore yet she is there??😲 Bring on the next chapter, I am anticipating another chapter coming this weekend, isn't it?😳 :) Hope so! Loved everything about this chapter!

PS. I love the lemon reference and the lemony fragrance, I have always used lemony perfumes too ( rambling again :P)

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segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

wonderful nuanced job you are doing. my favorite part was

"They stood like that for how long they did not know, staring into each other's eyes, warming up into each other's embrace. It was not desire, it was not dancing blood cells, it was not butterflies in the stomach. It was sheer peace and pain."

beautifully written. sums it up very well

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bs_deeps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Omoraboti

Arnav's fist tightened. Damn he wanted to spoil her. In every way he could. Would she allow him? Would he allow him himself?

I am trying to to understand what you are referring to...that was one lovely update.. so when are we getting the next chapter? 😳

Edited by bs_deeps - 12 years ago