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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
brilliant updt
d much req confession
arnav n khushi bng d confused souls devi maiyya plz kuch kijiye ...
wud anji get 2 knw abt arnav n khushi?????
wud she play cupid fr arhi?????
hope she does
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Looonnggg update! Yay!
A and K should really just say whatever they want to. Not keep it inside themselves.

Hey Devi Maiyya! You never fail to bring a smile on my face ^_^
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
congrats on new thread.. and awesome update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
That was an awesome update!
Very well handled and beautifully written...

I so would have wanted to see them being indifferent ... which quite seems to be the need of the hour!
But whats this i see? she still waiting for him at the crossroad!?
umm where is this leading to?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Oh Farah - it was a heart breaker yaar. Both so wanted other to console them, Khushi wanted Arnav to say what she means to him and Arnav wanted to hear Khushi being there for him. I am becoming like Devi Maiyya in your FF. Just wishing these idiots tell each other their fears and what they want from each other. Kuch toh karo yaar, talk, scream, rant - tell that you can't live without the other. Arnav needs to open up and tell that he is completely screwed up without Khushi and her lemon scent in his life. Bechara is completely lost when he was driving to the office. Imagine what his state would be if she were to go away - get married to someone else. And Anjali please don't be a dumbo and try to poke into the love affair of your brother. He needs help and you need to be there for him.

The ending was superb. So Khushi was standing at her usual spot. I hope it is not a dream. I hope it is Khushi in real and somehow I want Khushi to tell Arnav what he means to her. Arnav se toh I have lost all the umeed - Bewaakoof kahin ka, hamesha bewaakoof hi rahega. Khushi, you go tigress and tell the confused man that you are in love with him. Can't wait for the next update. In the end, Hayee, this story is so awesome - Do you really want to end it? Whatever you do, give a nice epilogue with Arnav-Khushi and their kid. And don't you dare end the FF with both going their separate ways. I can't imagine Arnav without Khushi and vice-versa. Kuch bhi karo but make sure the ending is happy one - warna you are not safe, that much I can assure you. Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Wow... that hug was beautiful... kind of peaceful... I never expected khushi to broach the marriage topic this fast... but good that she did...
And will she get into the car??? I cannot wait to find out...this was a grt chapter and ur devi mayya was as usual her witty self :-D
Congrtz on d thread btw though I wish it isn't the last one. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so many emotions woven altogether...him denying all his feelings for her doing everything against what his heart wished for but still not able to come top the terms of the consequences...and thus his heart craving for her...loved the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update
Aww she was waiting there for him
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I hope khushi for once do not get into his car and do not let him force her as well
Edited by ranogill - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update! Even though she is there I somehow hope she doesn't ride in his car! Hope they figure this out soon!!

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