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Posted: 12 years ago
yaar preet really amazing and very long update dear...
u did it in such short time?
am i dreaming or wat?
awesome update...
loved nk and la conversation...
so khushi and arjun(arnav) both can feel other presence but am waiting eagerly when will they come to know abt their truth...
prem got arjun's number so hope they will meet soon again...
and the precap arjun ill?😲 how? wat happened to him?
wats the big surprise u r gonna give us yaar waiting for the update eagerly...
khushi knowing something about arjun yaar u r making us very excited dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
The hints will greats wonder who is the person who knows everything... Is he a good or bad person???
Can't wait to read the next part!!!
Thanks for the pm πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gosh...you're awesome, ur story is awesome πŸ‘

I THINK ,
It should be yash...the one who knows everything!? 😳

can you update soon with a pretty please on the top 😳
Edited by T-Killer21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update.
Loved it.
Neha prem convo was really cute.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
great part dear
and precap seems more interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update was too good
Arjun's plan did work but the poor guy did not get enough time. Khushi is very surprised and uncomfortable to work with Arjun but he cannot refuse her either.
Prem is a gem, he has found the perfect way of speaking with Arjun and finding out more about his dad.
With the father and son duo trying to find happiness for khushi, the one person they both love, how can things not work out.
The precap is very intersting...please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: T-Killer21

Gosh...you're awesome, ur story is awesome πŸ‘


I THINK ,
It should be yash...the one who knows everything!? 😳

can you update soon with a pretty please on the top 😳


I'm going to update by saturday and with a bang
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ara_000

u r giving us an update so soon,its itslf a surprise πŸ˜†


And you will get another soonwa πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update...
I hope Khushi comes to know about Arjun soon
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ara_000

goddd firstly i cannot believe dat i get to read chappy 14 of FIOL sooo soon so was in shock actually aftr knwing dat u r going to update

but ok now aftr reading the chappy i came out of d shock nd here to give my commnt

so here it goes -
firstly i am really happy dat arjun is utilising aarti to put his plan of meeting khushi coz its knwn dat khushi will nvr say a NO to aarti nd arjun also very well knws about it πŸ˜‰
i love it how lavanya's interruption did not let her knw who the person is with whom aarti has asked her to meet ns the meting is vry important πŸ˜†
lavanya nd NK , ahem ahem wat to say actually...
i never knew that NK coul b sooo dam romantic also πŸ˜‰
i love it how khushi was teasing lavanya nd she was trying to escape the situation...lol πŸ˜†
payback is alwaz a b*tch nd dat lavanya has undrstd vry well by now πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
so NK wants lavanya to ahve a secnd baby but lavanya is not ready for that now as she wants to bcum d bst mom nd she is afraid dat sumhow aftr having the secnd child she will not b able to take that care of sam which he actually needed...nice thought but dat does not mean dat she will have to blame herslf for anythng bad happens to sam where she is not at all responsible...
i hope NK will make her undrstand about it nd will bring her out of dis...
payal nd akash convo,touchy actually 😳
akash nd NK both r in dilemma about arjun being their arnav bhai nd for that they have already hired a detective nd NK is all set to meet the him wit a pic of arnav...
akash good going boy,tum saabko tumhara bhai zarur mil jayega...yeh toh devi maiyaa ka icha hai akhir πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
so arnav is late nd he purposely called arti to inform dat his car has broken down nd he cannot reach AR as its knwn to him dat at AR they will get interrrupted πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
past experience akhir kaam aa hi gaya πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
so they finally meet up...
nd khushi can feel the same gust of wind around her which alwaz tells her that her arnavji is near to her but kahaani mein twist yeh hai ke aab woh aarnav nahi arjun ji baan gaye hai πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
nd arjun actually was patting himslf for his plan nd he got wat he wanted...

"Arjun too gets up and held her hand and when their hands touched each other, both of them felt as a shiver run throw their bodies and they instantly looked at each other and a soft music started playing in the background *Rabba Ve*"

ahem ahem so there again rabba ve started πŸ˜‰

nd their mere touch of fingers just sent shivers into thir bodies nd wen realisation hit them khushi got to undrstand dat she is doing wrng but a small voice inside her is saying her dat the man is her arnavji nd she is now determined to ask neha about arjun...

neha nd prem convo - awww its sooo sweet...prem is all set to meet his neha aunty's bhai...ahem ahem milna toh parega hi kyun ki milne se hi toh saab kuch samne ayega ke kaun hai yeh arjun...

so prem took his number nd he ia all set to call his uncle πŸ˜‰

nice move prem...go on bacha,u surely is playing the role of cupid in ur dad nd mom's love story πŸ˜‰

so mohabbat cum on,play ur magic nd make a progress in their love story πŸ˜‰

now about the edits -

ahhh they r lovely...

3 yrs ago arnav was shot dead but who that bloody b*stard is to shot him 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

nd now aftr 3 years neha nd prem r going to play the role of cupids...

aha dats pretty xciting...

cant wait for the nxt chappy now...

preet love u sweetheart ❀️

muaaahhh

hugs πŸ€—


you know nah that you are notanki πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† i know it was a shock for me too, me going to update soo soon

what!! you don't know that NK could be so romantic 😲 😲 😲
are yeh to kuch bhi nahi hai you have to see Neha and Karan and Yash and Aarti and what about Aakash and Payal.
I feel like giving justice to the rule of Aakash and Payal they deserve to have more space, i'm trying to give them that space in my own way.
Will NK be able to covince Lav for the second baby?? and why he want another baby?? keep thinking πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

I have something in my mind for Arjun πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ just want to say dilli abb dur nahi hai πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Thanks for the lovely comment πŸ€— πŸ€— my dear Aru now i'm gonna give you a perfect scene between your Neha and Karan πŸ˜‰
the gutter mind parts are just for you πŸ˜‰

Edited by HK90 - 12 years ago

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