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Deepikikamandal

@Deepikikamandal

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#681

i think the person is Shyam...but earnestly hope that Arnav is fast enough to come to her rescue.Wnat a cliff hanger Farah!!!!!

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Srishti

@dereksmith

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#682

Heyy , I hope you are okay now , take care !
You know just how to keep us hanging there right ?
Please let khushi be fine .
Its amazing how khushi understands arnav .
I guess the best part of the show was how both of them could feel each others presence .<3
loved how you wrote about arnav feeling something not being ok with khushi ..
Lavanya ! What the hell .
& khushi considered her as her best friend ..Hhh !!
Loved the update ..
Thank you sooo much for messaging
Waiting for more
Write soon (:
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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#683

Farah, I knew this FF was coming close to ending but still hearing it from you and knowing that we are just short of few updates to finish, it hurts...it hurts dammit...more than I would have ever anticipated...

But all good things come to an end and it is better to wrap it up when the story is told rather than extend beyond that...this story for me has always been about Arnav and Khushi's journey through realising their love for each other, acknowledging it to each other and proclaiming it to the world!!! So yes the journey is now in the last phase and I must say that this is one helluva good journey that I absolutely loved being a part of...omg why am i writing a farewell note already!!! 😭 Silly me...let me comment on the update...

Well the one thing that stuck out in this update for me was La's behaviour...I was hoping that she will be the friend in need...We all go through phases when our family or partners cannot offer us any comfort...it is during such times that besties do what they are best doing!! listening to us without finding fault...and letting us know that they will lighten the burden a teeny weeny bit atleast...but La...totally unhappy with her immature behaviour...even if she comes around and apologises I am going to dislike this La for the rest of my FF life 😆

Like i said in one of my previous comments, Arnav and Khushi's love here in this story is like the love a mother has for her newborn...before harm comes in the way of her baby, her antenna will pick it up and the protective instincts will kick in!!!

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#684

Firstly, hope you are feeling better...

Secondly, Nooo you can't end SAY, what will happen to us who thrive on this story?? Please don't end their coming together is just the beginning of a beautiful journey together... They both have to teach & learn so much for the other, please continue with their journey together how they both adapt to the other's needs & wants & also their personalities...

Coming to the update Farah, a very emotional & scary one.

Loved the way Arnav is so concerned for Khushi & can sense when she has been crying... Khushi also understands where he is coming from but really doesn't know what to do or how to curb his anger before he puts himself in trouble with the law or in any other way...

Wish though she hadn't kept down the phone like that... That is no way to solve any problems or communicate... And that is key here, they need to talk properly without any angst & anguish, each needs to understand the other's dilemma...

Hated La in this update... 😡 What kind of a friend or person she is?? She has no consideration for her so called best friend, deserting her in a far away place like that...

I have a feeling the guy was Shyam... Khushi naively thought he was just a friendly guy... Hope Arnav can reach them in time before anything bad happens...

Yeah, wishing IPK a happy vaala birthday!!

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sskaug25

@sskaug25

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#685

An awesome update. Its a nice feeling to sense each other. So Arnav sensed that everything is not fine with khushi. Loved the way how he called her and try to comfort her. Is that person Karan in white suv. Anyway when Arnav is there no worries. Waiting for next update. Thanks for the pm.

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#686

yu wanted 2 end dis n 6th?tooo bad,,!!no emd z cumin/...haina..?yes!!..okiee...d chapter..as alwz fab..:)jalebi bann rae thi n khae jaa rae thi..n d fone buzzed...she rcvd//..
thinkin it myt b Anjali..
may b Rohan ka fone unavailable ho..
bt sh was wrong..
it was Arnav..

n he had clld 2 ask her..y she was cryin last tym on d cll..

did ne1 say nethin 2 her..
..

n den she recalled wt Anjali had said 2 her..
n she strted cryin..
n he new it..

he apologizd,,n Khushi cudnt take it..n cut d col.

...

LA n she went out..

n she told abt herslf-Arnav's r/shp..
n LA was lyk..yu stole my guy..
huh

she shud no..he dsnt feeel nethin 4 LA..

ol he feels 4 z Khushi..

..
La left her,,

itti durr,,!!

Khushi went out n lukin here n der..n thinkin hw restless her bauji n Rohan wud feel..if dey get 2 no..dt she's alone...

sum1 came..n she sat on d car..happily..

who was it?

LA came back?

no..she dint,...she was home..as Anjali said..

was it NK>?
cud b..as whyt SUV..

it was sum1..whom she new..
n she went wid her/him..

cud b Samiya?

..

newayz..
nw evry1 z restless..as Khushi's nt at home...

n Arnav new sumthin was wrong..
n dis z wt was wrong..!!

his Khsuhi z missin..
he wud find her..
n dey wud doo...rabba ve in d rain..
ryt?

well loved it./:)

thnxx.:)

n tc of urself..:)

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#687

I can't believe this story was destined to end today, also next week seems pretty early as well. I think personally you should end it on the 6th June 2014, it's only logical, lol.

Wow that was an amazing and brilliant update, absolutely fantastic.

The update was written exceptionally well, from start to finish a awesome read.

Awww the phone conversation between Khushi and Arnav was so sad, Arnav still having his temper moments and Khushi remembering his mothers words, but Arnav knew the last time they spoke Khushi had cried and was asking if that was true and explaining why he got so angry at Rohan.

Lavanya what a cow, she actually left Khushi deserted at the cafe on her own, so glad Khushi did shout at her and put her in her place.

Wonder who Khushi got into the SUV with, I'm thinking its NK or Shyam.

Poor Arnav got so worried after receiving Anjali's phone call, hope Khushi is ok.

Loved the update, eager to read more.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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rainyday3000

@rainyday3000

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#688

Omg...I can't believe La can do this to Khushi...who can it be in the SUV...it can't be Karan...khushi would never get into a car with him...cant wait for Ch 74...awesome update!!! :)