new truth-trust inquest thread 2 - Page 53

Originally posted by: IPK..Jenny

no need to change it...one slight thing when you change from scene to scene can you seperate it...by putting in Lucknow or at RM please...it makes it easier to understand what goes were if that makes sense...other than that its excellent

Jenny x

Originally posted by: kbtr

You're going at the right pace. Sometimes, i feel sad though, reading the story. But that's to be expected. You really going to kill off Pari??😭

Originally posted by: sohara

Soni, don't be disheartened my friend.

If you feel to write, you should write, it shouldn't matter, if you have readers or not.

For this FF, my opinion is, too many characters made the story a bit complex. that's why the readers are getting ambiguous. This is completely my POV.

My suggestion will be you can reveal the secret and can focus more on Arshi story.

Sorry if i intrude your thought.

take care.

Originally posted by: Angel13

no dear

I think you are on right track I mean it's going fine now

just keep up the way you are writing no need to change

Originally posted by: raniluvsasr

Hey u write amazingly well. Please dont say u dnt write well. As i hav said earlier ur stories are amazing to read. U will get a good response it might take tym bt do nt lose hope.. Thnxx for replying to my post.

dear u and ur work is awesome.

Originally posted by: india094

no, dear
I think you are going a great job...
it is just for some school have started and cant comment as they did before...
maybe time to have a pm list...

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

Soni

I think I did comment before ,you are perfectly fine and don't pay attention to others ,do what pleases you.

You are a good writer ,editor and that's all it matters and if ppl don't hit like ,it doesn't mean they are not reading it.sometimes they don't want their names to show up for so many reasons.so keep up the good work