ARHI FF:MASTERCLASS THREAD 9: LINK TO NEW THREAD ON PG 161

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

No naina.. No... Please no... Don't end it... I dint expect the post marriage track to be this grippingly amazing... I am having a ball...

You are one amazing writer and the way you are taking this story is amazing... I love your characters a lot... I am guessing it is going to be a win for Khushi but I wish Arnav does not loose too... Is there a way to make it a win-win situation for them...

N another new character... Dint expect that twist... Khushi was engaged... Can't wait to read further

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Divya

@dvmishra

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#162

lovely update... Waiting fr arnav's reaction... Plz update soon...

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Naina... i loved the update to bits but your note has dampened my spirits !!!😭

Please please please dont end this story just cause a few readers have gone into hiding ...this story is going brilliantly still and it surely has more potential !!

I am sorry i am not able to come up with any proper comment for this update ...the A/N completely overshadowed the positive chapter yaar !!!😕

Edited by _disha_ - 12 years ago

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Nice update but don't end it, please do continue.

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Nice update and I kind of expected Khushi to walk away with the old man's approval. But of course what touches your heart and what makes commercial sense are two different things.

An interesting twist in the form of Angad? Hmm.. how is Mr Raizada going to react to him? That was a big surprise for us too and I just feel Arnav should have been told about it, instead of getting to know like this. Khushi had always known that Arnav had a past before her but Arnav does not. Not a good sign!

I dont know about dwindling readers, but the note after this update will definitely ensure that lots more people comment :-))

I thought the story was just getting interesting and you did say that you had loads more to write so it will be tragic if you don't continue because the number of comments have dwindled from what you have come to expect. I think part of that may well be the gap between updates. Readers loose track and the emotional connect with the story.

But at the end of the day you are the writer. You have to decide whether telling the story that you do want to tell even for the lesser number of readers who continue to read and comment is more important or getting tons of comments is.

If you decide to stop, thank you, it was a really enjoyable FF.

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Congratulations on the new thread!

Akash and Payal are miniature versions of Arhi..I love the way they challenge each other...Akash here is indeed Arnav's brother!

Khushi and Arnav..are a treat to read..but you gave us a twist here..Angad and Khushi were engaged earlier..but why was Khushi hoping to be not recognized by Angad?Hopefully no MU crops up between Arnav and Khushi..

I do hope you continue with the story ..this is a brilliant piece if work ..Hopefully you will end it only when the story demands an ending and not before..

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

HAILA!!!!! Well...I maybe from the minority..but I'm LOVING this new development! Angad!! BWAHAHAHA!! Its not like you haven't given a possessive Arnav in this FF but dayum I want more!! A LOT MORE!! And I'm proud of Khushi..as is Arnav! :) This is perfect! :)

And also, I'm saddened to hear that you want to end this story. I think you should go ahead and tell your story..the way you want to. But whatever you decide, I'll be there till the end reading it! :) Thank you for the PM :)

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Omg... That was a twist...or should i say a test...???
I just want their relation to be really strong to deal with each & everything
Waitinf for the next yaar...

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#169

What a beautiful story ! You are amazing !!!!

Read it almost in one go. Pl send me PM also whern you update. I will send you buddy request.

Thanks.

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reggie

@reggie

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Omg! Don't end it! I have like read your story with every update from the beginning! Now if u end it what will I do??! From the mesmerizing boss and pa relation to lovers to husband and wife and now business rivals the story has just been a brilliant rollercoaster ride! Plz don't end now! I agree I'm a silent reader.. But believe me when I say I'm a an absolute fan and would seriously beg of u to continue!