ARHI FF:MASTERCLASS THREAD 9: LINK TO NEW THREAD ON PG 161

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

congratz for new thread 🥳

payal and aakash...what an amazing pair...the challenges they throw at each other and the replies...wow...simply love it 😃

anjali called nani...to tell her what???about aman and her???😕

khushi's going to beat arnav by using the tactics taught by arnav himself...nice 😉

who the heck is angad grover??? no tension between our Arshi please...😔

And please don't end this FF...we will miss it so much 😭

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Dimz13

@Dimz13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

The way you describe Aakaash..it almost feels like Arnav just with glasses and ...but I like this Aakaash who is so sure of himself and knows what he wants and how to get it...Payal has it bad for Aakaash...!

So pati,patni aur woh...is in the bidding for the land..! Now who will win...I feel the old Parsi man wants to give it to Kushi...but will he...?

I love the convo between Arnav and Kushi before the presentation...switching from husband to mentor and from wife to mentee...! Pride and love in full display.

Waiting to see who gets it..!

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OmNaMaSteOm

@OmNaMaSteOm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

I did not even know there was a new thread ! sigh !

You want to end it why ?

Amazing update. I wonder who will win.

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abayance

@abayance

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

i have been waiting all the time and here the new thread and new chapter was already there. Thanks for the update! very interesting update. cannot wait for the next chapter. I personally think, you still need to tell us more about anjali and aman and there is a lot to tell us about akash and payal and top of that i love anrnv aka rr aka asr and khushi story...want to read many more chapters!

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priluvsmonaya

@priluvsmonaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Hey i have came across your story few days back and i have just finished reading its all part.You are amazing writer and i loved arnavas well as Khushi in ur story.I canfeel each and every emotion.
Please i requestyou to continue ur story as you have planned,please continue soon.Waiting 4 next part.

Edited by priluvsmonaya - 12 years ago

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priluvsmonaya

@priluvsmonaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Hope Angad dont create problems in Arshi life,nice twist.Please dont end it and update next part soon if possible,waiting for Arnav's reaction to Angad-Khushi engagement.

Edited by priluvsmonaya - 12 years ago

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

What a twist!

I have been following this ff since its conception. Could you please PM me when you update next?

I am loving the Aakash Payal couple.

Love the fact that you give them too space in your updates.

I loved how Khushi used what Arnav taught her to her advantage against him.

I am quite sure she will get the land.

Who is this Angad? Waiting for Arnav's reaction to this bombshell.

Please don't lose heart and stop writing. You do have a large. Umber of loyal readers who wait for your updates.

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

I had reserved a spot on the thread but for some reason IF is not allowing me to edit it. That's IF for you!!

First of all congratulations on the new thread!

Coming to the update, mind-blowing! I wasn't sure how you were going to show Arnav VS Khushi during the meeting with the land owner, but you completely blew me away with the simplicity of the matter.

I loved how Khushi remembered everything Arnav had thought her. The text message exchange put a smile on my face. They may be on opposite ends of this deal but they are one!!

The next issue I wanted to address is you wanting to end this story. Please please give it some more thought. I absolutely love this story and would be extremely upset to see it end. It is your story to tell and I know you know what's best for it. But please don't end it just because you feel readership has gone down. Trust me the people who are commenting wait for each and every update that you post with bated breath.

Payal & Akash!!! I can't tell you how sexy you have made Akash sound!!! Love the chemistry that is surrounding them. Looking forward to seeing that bomb explode.

Khushi was engaged??!!! What the!! Waiting for Arnav's reaction. Love the cliffhanger.

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

I definitely don't want Masterclass to end so soon as you have just added an exciting twist making it more interesting, but then again it is onto you to decide.😊
I loved this update, it had everything. Payal and Akash's cat and mouse game just got interesting, but the battle royale between ASR and KKG was awesome. Arnav couldn't help but admire his wife despite her being his rival and his encouragement to her as his mentor was really sweet! I just love this rakshas raizada!!
Khushi was engaged prior to meeting Arnav? But why did she hide it, and neither did her family mention about it. This sure got interesting and I am waiting to read how Arnav takes this news.
Great update and congrats on the new thread!