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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#251

Count me in cause I'm also sailing in the same boat with you.

I'm still very much in Arnav and Khushi's world, oblivion of the rest of the world.

I've been rewatching the show from 2nd December onward and right now I'm in the track where Arnav gave La Khushi's chosen jewelry set. So i could relate this tale more. And of course it still pricks my heart, that Arnav never came to know about Khushi's mom's bangles.

You gave a very beautiful disclosure of this two loops of IPK.

i absolutely loved Arnav's letter at the end. It was so thoughtful, deep and priceless. can't be a beautiful proposal than this for a woman from her prince charming.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#252

One word for this tale...Brilliant Meera... Just Brilliant...smiled and teared at the same time...Bravo👏

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happypeace

@happypeace

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

This ws amazing..! literally... how do u guys do it yar!!
loved it to bits... the dialogues, the overhearing, the flashback, the necklace modelling, the little whispers, khushi feeling jealous and finally the kangans and the letter accompanying them! each and every bit ws love!
u guys simply create magic with ur words...
please please do continue writing these series of one shots... each and everyone of them is so unique and spellbinding that i cant have enough!
Thanks to semanti and expel for all these beautiful one and special thanks to meera for this one! you guys are doing a great job!

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Deepa876

@Deepa876

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

Well done Meera, this was perfectly written. You have captured the essence of the jewelry scene so well. Also you are not the only one itching to slap a certain Mr. Raizada during that scene, I'm sure there's whole queue out there with me also in it :)
The best part of the story was the letter, simply written yet clarified everything & promising towards a new start.
Seriously how do you do it???? Writing one wonderful story after another. I'm already loving your new venture ' a word's worth '. Keep it up :)

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Tiramisu_coffee

@Tiramisu_coffee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

Simply fab!! I swear IPKKND's charm is still very much alive in our hearts because of writers like you!!! I really wish Arnav had found out about Khushi's pawning off her jewelry!! You made my day!! Great job Meera!!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#256

Thank you so much juhi/semanti for finding a replacement for writing your tales, it's a shame you are soon ending writing the tales but as Meera is a guest, can she be made a permanent fixture? I think so, lol!

Wow that was Fantastic and mind blowing tale,

Absolutely brilliant and written exceptionally well,

From start to finish an amazing read, wonderful writing.

Wow the part where Khushi was dressed up and Arnav whispered in her ear was so beautiful,

Awww bless Arnav actually made similar kangans to the one like khushi's mother and he sent them to her along with the lovely letter and asking her out for a coffee as well, so sweet.

Totally love your reason for writing the tale to recapture the necklace and Kangan scene you did a magnificent job.

Loved the tale, hopefully we may be blessed with more in the near future.

Thanks for the PM xx

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sarrahyusuf

@sarrahyusuf

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#257

Best stories ever.. And the famous dialogue sone pe suhaaga.. My 3 fav writers together.. Love u all n do keep,writin..

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#258

brilliant update...i wanted to slap ASR in the necklace seen to...this replaced that memory...very beautiful...love your writing style...

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#259

Since morning people had been gushing over this Tale & I had put off reading it until later in the day... Now I know why everybody was so spellbound as I am right now... That letter & those kangans just did it Meera... Hahaha, you were telling me that I have magic! When we all know that whenever you pick the pen or start typing you weave magic like none other. Meera this was just AWESOME!!!!