SwaRonTanHa FF~Enigma of Fate 2~ epilogue pg 24 - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
I recently join IF n this ff is one of my favourite..can't believe it end..every part of this ff touches my heart..the pain swaron had gone through all these years n pain of separation was beautifully written.sharon hesitation to again feel alive with her swayam n finally giving permission to her heart to let go of past..n live happily with her life swayam..becoz she knows she can live her dream for real which won't vanish now..loved every part n most importantly happy ending coz i can't see or even read swaron fairy tale ended in departure or sad ;)...i always wish for happy ending :p n thanks alot you did so :) really gonna mis this ff ..<3 <3
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL

^^^^ API what have you done han u left me speechless...nothing more to say...I love you and u r equally special to me...gimme sometime to reply to your comment.


@Uzma: Yes. dear the next update is the final update :P

P.S: Epilogue might be a little late...don't worry zayada der nahin lage g...but ur comments have left me speechless...so much love and appreciation ...I won't update until I reply to all of u and that may take some time as I am clueless to what to how to express my gratitude for liking my work so much.

love
-Baz




U deserve all the appreciation and much more..i just hope u won't keep ur talent limited to IF & SwaRon ...

i was thinking how to comment on 3 updates i have missed ...as i will be MIA for sometime here...i didnt want to delay it further...m glad u liked my comment/feedback/blabbering ...😳

Thanks for considering me special dear ...means a lot 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay guys here is the epilogue of this FF. I know I said I won't update until I reply to all of u guys comments but if I didn't update it now then there would have been a big delay in the update and I didn't want that. Your comments on the previous update r beyond amazing and I WILL REPLY TO THEM. Yes, I will hopefully tonight...and max by the Sunday. They need to be replied personally.
Enough of my bakwaas...here is the last update for this FF...hope u all will like it.

Epilogue

Sharon peeked from behind the pillar she was hiding and the coast seemed clear. But she knew it was just the calm before the storm. Then she turned around and signaled kriya who was hiding behind the adjacent pillar to move forward. Kriya nodded and both of them held their guns tightly in the hands before carefully moving forward. They made their way upstairs as quietly as possible looking for their targets and then as they reached the top step swayam suddenly came out of his bedroom and rey also came out from the guest room before kriya and Sharon could respond swayam and rey pulled the trigger and the water shot through the guns hitting Sharon on her forehead and kriya on her stomach. Sharon glared at swayam and ducked his other attack before attacking him hitting him on his shoulder. While rey and kriya had taken their fight downstairs. Sharon then quickly went for the guest room but swayam stepped in between so she turned around and ran towards the roof. Swayam also ran behind her firing through his water gun at her, his few shots hit her while few missed, same was with Sharon she aimed blindly at him and few lucky shots hit him. She finally reached the roof and before she could close the door swayam gave his foot in between and she had to take a few steps back. She once again fired at him and it hit him more likely he let her hit him but then as she pulled the trigger again and no water came out and she realized that the gun needed a refill. Damn! She looked at swayam sheepishly who was looking at her with a mischievous glint in his eyes. She looked in his hands his water-gun was almost full. He took small steps towards her and said "who is gonna save you now? Remember the bet the one who goes down first will….tonight" she tried hard not to blush and said "not happening got it" he finally reached, her just a few steps separating them and raised his gun to drench her with water just then Sharon yelled "ATTACK" swayam turned around confused and found adi with two water guns in his hands and he started attacking swayam within no second. Sharon took advantage of the moment and snatched his gun from his hands while he said "What The…" but Sharon cut him in between and said "No swearing in front of the child swayam" he shut his mouth quickly and both Sharon and adi kept hitting him and finally adi wrapped himself around his leg and swayam tried to take him off but ended up falling down on the floor while adi came and sat on him still hitting him with his gun and Sharon also kept up her attack. Finally swayam raised his hands and yelled "Fine, you guys win" Sharon and adi both did a victory dance while swayam couldn't help but smile at the two of them.

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Sharon came with a tray of drinks in her hands while kriya trailed behind her with two huge bowls full of popcorns in her hands. Kriya gave one bowl to swayam and handed the other to rey while Sharon placed the tray of drinks on the coffee table and then went to turn off the lights. Kriya took an angelic face two years old girl from rey's hands and held her in air only to receive a giggle as an answer from her. Kriya then cradled her in her arms and said while sitting next to Rey "aww did my dear aditi missed me?" The baby girl just snuggled more into Kriya and rey lovingly caressed her cheek making her giggle again and said "I want my child back" kriya galred at him and replied "well she is mine too and u r not getting her back" Rey closed his mouth while Sharon came back and fit perfectly in space left between kriya and aditya who was sitting next to swayam snuggled into him. Swayam placed his arm on the sofa while adi and Sharon rested their heads against it and then the movie started and they all gave their attention to it. Everything seemed so perfect that it seemed unreal only that it was real. They were indeed one big happy family.

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Kriya stood up stretching while swayam leaned back in his chair and said "that was one long meeting" and kriya beamed "but we got the project…can u believe it?" swayam smiled at his friend and said "coffee?" and kriya replied "u r a life saver" swayam grinned at her and said "okay my cabin" kriya nodded and then they headed towards his cabin. As they neared his cabin they heard loud noises coming and it seemed that they were coming from his cabin. The noises became more and more loud and clear as they reached his cabin and both entered it shaking their heads. Vicky, Neha, Bharat, Vishaka, Nilesh, Simmi, Amar, Rinni, Rey and Kriya were all present more like stuffed in his cabin which was not small but definitely not built to hold so many people together. But this was not a new sight for them all of this was a part of their life and they didn't want to change it. Vickey, Nilesh, Bharat and Amar owned a dance academy together in which adi was currently taking dancing classes. Everyone was married to their respective crushes and one day kriya and Sharon came across Simmi and Vishaka in a mall and that day the group reunited and now well their pass time was fighting over who would get the last piece of pizza in swayam's cabin. His office was practically like their favorite hang out place. They didn't even paid attention to him as sometimes he would yell at them to get out and let him do some work but nah instead they would kick him out of his own cabin and he would have to go sulk and work in kriya's cabin whose perfect cabin remained like that and one threat from her that no one will mess around in her office seemed to have done the trick while on the other hand on one took swayam serious. Sharon didn't work with swayam and kriya anymore instead she worked with rey and they are the most famous choreographer duo of India right now. The girl was born to dance and didn't fit in the office job kind of work. Kriya and Swayam on the other hand took their company to new heights and were now considered business tycoons. Swayam and Kriya looked at each other with smiling faces as they saw their friends fight over another piece of pizza and then jumped in the fight yelling "leave that piece alone…its mine" Everything was back, friendship was back, friends were back, dance was back, love was back, life was back. Life certainly did come a full circle for them.

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Sharon closed the door behind her as she entered the room and looked at swayam sitting on the bed in half lying position and looking at their daughter Aditi lovingly and caressing her face. She came and sat on her side of the bed smiling lovingly at both of them and said in a low voice not wanting to disturb her angel "she is asleep" swayam nodded and kissed her forehead and grabbed sharon's hand in his other hand. Sharon squeezed his hand said while looking at her daughter "I am so glad she got ur divine features" swayam chuckled and replied "and I am so glad she got ur attitude and anger" Sharon smiled at him and said "Rey is spoiling her so much" swayam chuckled and replied "Yes, even kriya is with him in this one" Sharon nodded and both of them shook their heads. Rey was so possessive of aditi that even if Sharon glares at her if she is annoying her then he scolds her and dares her to say anything to his daughter and it was vice versa with adi. To an unknown person it would seem that adi was swayam and sharon's son and aditi was rey and kriya's daughter but to their friends it seemed as if both of them had two children. Life had taught them the importance of relations the hard way and now they were holding the relation close to them strongly.

Swayam looked at Sharon with so much love that she felt her stomach turn upside down. Even after all this time swayam still had the same effect on her. He asked for her hand and she gave it to him confused then he stood up making her stand too and took her out to the terrace and glanced once back to his angel to make sure she is still asleep. She was, so he quietly closed the glass door to the terrace and then pulled Sharon closer by placing his hands around her waist. She wrapped her arms around his neck and he whispered "dance with me" her heart skipped a beat it always did when he would say those words to her and she nodded in response. They didn't even need music as they started dancing to rhythm of their hearts beating for each other and the moonlight shined on them once again separating them from the world to a world so beautiful that only blessed souls were able to reach it.

Fate is an enigma but Love is an even bigger mystery both of them have been engaged in a war since a long time and many times fate have lost despite of winning and the love of some souls became eternal like heer-ranjha, laila-majnu and sohni-mahwaal. Fate separated them and even still when their hearts beated with nothing else but love for each other it separated them by taking away their souls. Still love won despite of them being unable unite; their love became eternal and an example for others. Fate realized that two other people named swayam and Sharon were walking on the same road. It did everything it could, separated them and placed many hurdles in their path but in the end it had to surrender in front of their love before it became eternal like others. But one thing was for sure their love was eternal whether it became known to the world or remained unknown. Why fate is like this is an enigma known as enigma of fate. No one is able to solve it and many are trying but if it would have been solved then it would not have been known as an enigma…..enigma of fate.

P.S: with this a year long journey of this FF comes to an end and for the last time guys leave ur feedback and hit the button. Ur comments on this update and the last one WILL BE replied personally!

A/N: Okay I don't even know what to say...a year ago when I came up with this concept I never thought I would receive such a huge and beautiful response. People have praised me so much and I truly believe I am not even half that good but I received such great comments. I can never put it into words my feelings after reading ur comments. When someone says u writing made me feel, u r my favorite writer, u narration painted a clear picture in front of my eyes, ur story was Epic and many more comments like that. I don't think u guys urself understand the impact of ur words but they means more than ever could be put into words. Thanks to u guys comments I never stopped writing and now its an addiction for me. I thank every person who ever commented on this FF or liked it or did neither just read it, from the bottom of my heart. I am kinda nostalgic right now, this FF is very special to me and I am blabbering so I am gonna shut up now.

THANK YOU for your support for this FF!

P.P.S: As of now hostage still remains on hold why because I think I am taking a break from writing. If I decide to discontinue it then a note will be put up..I am not saying I am gonna discontinue it I might continue if I remember the story line myself 😆 and same goes for my on going SS...however I will complete all of the challenges given to me. So guys please I understand ur feeling but kindly keep ur comments STRICTLY related to the update of this FF and don't ask about hostage as this is the exact thing I would reply in return.

Love

-Baz

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Posted: 12 years ago
RESERVED.


I am again first! :D So proud of me! :P
Edited by -Marium- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres..

best Epilogue i have ever read..⭐️
u penned down beautifully.. firstly d cute water gun game. den gang having fun n ending with swaron dance..😳
" Everything was back, friendship was back, friends were back, dance was back, love was back, life was back. Life certainly did come a full circle for them."
the part were u discribed aditi and adi had two parents was nice..😊
"Fate is an enigma but Love is an even bigger mystery both of them have been engaged in a war since a long time and many times fate have lost despite of winning and the love of some souls became eternal like heer-ranjha, laila-majnu and sohni-mahwaal. Fate separated them and even still when their hearts beated with nothing else but love for each other it separated them by taking away their souls. Still love won despite of them being unable unite; their love became eternal and an example for others. Fate realized that two other people named swayam and Sharon were walking on the same road. It did everything it could, separated them and placed many hurdles in their path but in the end it had to surrender in front of their love before it became eternal like others. But one thing was for sure their love was eternal whether it became known to the world or remained unknown. Why fate is like this is an enigma known as enigma of fate. No one is able to solve it and many are trying but if it would have been solved then it would not have been known as an enigma'..enigma of fate." perfect way to conclude dis beautiful story of swaron..👍🏼

i told many times but dat doesnt stop me from saying it again u really r an amazing and brilliant writter.. I love dis ff so much.. It was a wonderful journey along with Swayam and Sharon... you describe eveything in so detail dat we feel all emotions it just makes reading more interesting n your writings have so much depth.. u balance all emotions , characters equally and give dem all equal importance.. i had always started readg d current update by readg d privious one.. each chapter had a way to touch my heart...❤️

Im really gonna miss dis FF a lot.. thank you for writing this Beautiful story of Swaron. Im definitely gonna read again from d start!!!
keep writing more.
lastly thanks for mentioning my name.. u truely deseve it..
Thank you again..🤗

Lasya..





Edited by lassipriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWWW. SUCH A SWEET, WEIRD KINDA FAMILY <3

I LURVED THE EPILOGUE! ITS AMAZINGGG<3<3

Shit. It's overrr. :C
It's kinda like my baby, you know, this FF. I have always waited for it to be updated with the new chapters, the new twists and developments...its like i kinda grew up along with it! :)

But guess that's the thing with all your works, isn't it? :P
You are such a fab writer that i could read your works like ALL THE TIME!

I hope that you continue all of your other works too! :D

ABSOLUTELY AN AMAZING FF, FOREVER AND EVER.

Thankyou, Baz for giving us this!

Love,
Shagun
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow.. gr8 ff ...


Edited by aneed3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey..

This FF is the Best of all I've ever read
a PM from u always makes my day..
Right from the beginning you've written every update with so much warmth that it makes me read it atleast twice..
I can bet upon..there would be no such update which I haven't read atleast twice

You are an Amazing writing..and I'm gonna miss this FF a lot 😊



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Posted: 12 years ago
The Perfect family!!!
i can't believe this FF is done!!!
it was like one of my favorites!!!
but seriously you did an amazing job writing it...
and your writing had so much depth and details...
every chapter had a way to touch my heart...
its one FF imm definitely gonna come back and read again!!!
an amazing concept!!!
an amazing writer!!!
and those two things made for a really a beautiful story!!
i'm seriously gonna miss this FF...

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Posted: 12 years ago
res for lamba comment😳
Edited by swaronland - 12 years ago

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