Arhi SS : Khamoshiyan [ Completed ] - Page 66

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...arnav planned so much for her...wonderful...
waiting eagerly to know the rest...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was just brillient
loved it
this update was mainly focused on khushi's birthday
arnav's afraid of khushi leaving him after the 6 months
you have described that part very well
and Arnav is trying his best to win back khushi
he is trying genuinely
he wished khushi twice for her birthday even though khushi thinks the first one was a dream
and then he wore a Kurta for khushi and even attended to the pooja
then he wished khushi again giving her roses
khushi waa very happy for that gesture
then arnav arranged a grand party for her with her loved ones
arnav has tried his best to make this day special for khushi
but khushi lost her cool and yelled at arnav
but what I noticed was that arnav didn't lose her cool. in fact he tried to calm down khushi
khushi's outburst was very fair on her part
but on the other hand I felt very bad for arnav
I am sure he too feels terrible
and then again a sweet gesture by arnav. he had ordered a cake with jalebis
and then khushi felt jealous. that's a good sign
well I wonder where arnav's taking khushi
this curiosity kills me. this is why I don't like cliffhangers
waiting for the next update
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing and brilliant update, simply mind blowing.

The update was a fantastic read from start to finish,

Wow, Arnav had gone through a lot off effort to celebrate khushi's birthday.

Awww bless Arnav even wore a kurta pyjama for Khushi, so sweet.

I think khushi's reaction was expected when she saw the gifts, her outburst was spot on.

Wonder where he is taking her, can't wait to read more birthday surprises.

Loved the update,

Eagerly waiting to read the next part,

Thanks for the PM,

What's this I'm reading the story has only 3 more updates, NAHI. I can't believe this amazing and mind blowing story is ending, NAHI. You need to continue this story 'Hamesha'!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Mints another great chapter... Loved how Arnav pulled out all the stops to make Khushi's birthday special for her... But what struck me was that out of all the things he had arranged for her, Khushi seemed to appreciate only the puja & the breakfast with her favorite dishes lovingly ordered by her Arnavji... Also, his wishes along with the roses mattered to her the most...
I could understand why Khushi's outburst at seeing all those expensive clothes, after having being called a gold digger, which self respecting female would want to touch those clothes & jewelry??? But I also felt Arnav's pain when she came down wearing an old anarkali...

Loved the way Arnav kept in the background so as to not aggravate Khushi by being close to her... Her happiness is what mattered to him albeit it came at the price of being away from her... Loved this sacrificing side of Arnav a lot...

Wonder where he is taking her?? Looks like wherever he is taking her will cause Khushi to reverse her decision about leaving him...
Mints, loved the chapter again... Please update soon, especially with an ending like that... Eager to know where he took her & why??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dekho kaun aaya😎
Kya kehti hain ye...khamoshiyaan...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update! Arnav planned the perfect party for her. Such a shame that she didn't wear any of the clothes he got for her. But she had her reasons. So nice of Arnav to personalise the dress according to her likes.

Khushi started to get jealous! Lets see wher he's planning on taking her now. Do continue.

Ive sent a buddy request Pls pm when u next update. Love ur writing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is very sweet beautiful nd emotional story..
i loved this very very very much...it ws like i m reading my show chapters...
arnav is trying very hard...
khushi plzz yaar maaf kr de arnav ko...
i love u arshi..love u mints...
beautiful update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
What an upate!
Arnav is trying his best to get Khushi to forgive him.
Loved how he wished her at midnight.
This is what I love in this story.
A Khushi with a spine.
Why should she forgive him so easily?
It feels good to have Arnav do some grovelling here.
Where is he taking her now?
Waiting eagerly to read the next chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
arnav is trying hard to get her back, at the same time giving her space, but he will not rest, till he gets her back fully
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Posted: 12 years ago
such a heart warming and cute update.
though khushi is justified in her reaction but how good and perfect had it been if she had not reacted like that.

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