Arhi SS : Khamoshiyan [ Completed ] - Page 11

Originally posted by: PhenoixTears

Wow, read both the updates and they were just wow.. Super duper amazing, I really wish something like this should have happened in our show too, it would have been great to watch all these scenes on TV. Fantastic story Mints, just awesome!

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Thanks a lot for ontinuing thos story.

I love happy endings!

And I would love to see these two overcome the pain and orrow and come together.

Anjali can take the lead here for once and do something for her brother and his wife for a change.

What made me happy here was to see a strong Khushi and Anjali here.

They have not given up on living because their husbands have given them pain.

They have taken their lives into their own hands nd are working to support themselves.

Waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: sumond

Such a well written chapter, wish this was shown in the real track of the serial, instead they butchered the whole story, anyway thanks a ton for giving us this story which most of us on this forum would have liked to see. Take a bow, you are the BEST!!!

Originally posted by: nia07

That was great i m happy you converted it into ss and yay 😃 it will have an happy ending i hate sad ends and yes i didnt get pm please pm me next update if you can

Originally posted by: Afya

OMG Chitra! What on earth was that! Absolutely brilliant!👏

I can't even write 2 lines of something like that...

I have no clue how you and Vandana can spin up poems just like that and claim that you are not writers. Poets, You surely are! And brilliant ones at that.

That was simply superb. I am speechless.

Originally posted by: chetna19

di it ws amazing...

thank u fr continuing it...thank u so much..

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Arnav finally realises that his anger ...possessiveness and misplaced love for Di has managed to break his Khushi...he has put Shyam behind bars...and now if was time to take care of Khushi and give her the respect and love she deserves...

He knows she has made up her mind to leave...he can sense it...he does not need her words...but he is not ready to give her up...and never will be...so he decides he needs to win her back...patiently and forever..and.he will do what if takes in the time he has ...

Originally posted by: chitrajay

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Regrets for letting my anger rule.

Regrets for being such an utter fool.

Regrets for ruining a most precious life,

Of none other than my beloved wife.

Regrets for every bitter word and deed,

Regrets for not paying her truths any heed.

Regrets for not making her my priority,

For making her happiness a travesty.

'Tis time now, to change, to be a deserving man

Hoping against hope, to win her back, I'll do all that I can.