Virman-SS-but I love you!!! part 15

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#591

oh wow that was such an awesome update nd i enjoyed the every bit of it. While reading the whole part i was smiling like an idiot. I never thought that in this story of urs virat could be so naughty. Aww finally mannu's dream which she saw in plane kissing by virat in the sand come true. Nd love the last line when mannu said i want to cuddle bt our genious virat said a guy never want to cuddle he want something more 😳 thanx for the upcoming pm in advance cont soon

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#592

it was worth to wait for this part just amazing,
what a part, 😳
it was too good to see how he treid to know how she feels, he is really attracted by manvi, 😊
and how he said he would want more than cuddle...
great part pleaseee dont wait long for the next part

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Anu Anu !!! u r making me crazy !!! can't stop blushing smiling !! eeks !!! this is soo soo awesome !!!! You are Amazing Anu !!! i feel like i m reading a awesome romantic novel by a famous super writer !!! Anu u r genius !!! <3 don't have enough words to tell u how much i loved it !!! i was in different world while reading it !!!!<3 i always said i love this mannu !!! i still do alot but now i m in love with viratji too !! :D
Starting from the piano scene !! awwn !! this is soo cute !!! N the beach part !!! Anu wat was it !!! Flawless !!! u juz kill me !!! look rite now also i m smiling like an idiot !!! everything was sooo magical !!! it was romantic ,sweet n beautiful !!!❤️ this is freaking Amazing !!! everything was soo soo good tat dunno wat should i say where should i start from !! lost in words !!! actually i m really happy !!! :DDD the kiss !!! eeks😳😳 Man tat was hot ;) the rain scene !! perfect situation perfect moment !!! the running n chasing thing !!! aah how much i loved everything !!!!<3 omg n the last part !!! naughty viratji !!! MORE !!! 😉 haii manvi !! me too wonder how more" More" would be like !!! eeeksss !!!! okay i noe u juz updated now !! but still i juz want to ask u to update another part soon if possible !!! will be eagerly eagerly eagerly waiting for it !!! have read the update twice !!! gonna read it bak again !!! bak to BILU Land !!!❤️

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luv nishal

@luv_nishal

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#594

it us sucha luvly romantic update...I liked it so much...update soonest dis tym...please

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#595

OMG Loved it from start to finish Viratji you're going to kill me.

Loved it when he said

"Baby, a guy doesn't just cuddle. He would want more."

And now Mannu wants to know what more would feel like

*sighs* Anu your seriously going to kill us one of these days with your updates.

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Miishii

@Miishii

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#596

Omggg! I am dead! I loved this sexy and passionate update! I want more!!! Hahaha i am becoming besharam for BILY!

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paddu503

@paddu503

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#597

Awesome update...no words to describe the way u portrayed the story...every expression in this part was just superb...u r just amazing...every line in the update was lovely and defines beauty of their relation...continue soon...take care...:-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-)

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simmy7

@simmy7

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#598

hey dear when you started this story I was little bit angry because tfl and addicted were my very favourites but now I am totally into this story. I cant describe u in words how much I love your stories. You always write best bu this update is better than best. Manvis feelings are so well depicted. You really should publish novel of your all stories. You are booker price worth writer. I am not at all exagrating. Love you. Hugs👏 Next update pls soon

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virmanhus

@virmanhus

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#599

cant wait to unres..

well my cleverest di,, Mannu's desire was to ''just lie down in the rain and sleep, chatting with someone'' wen it rains.. virat didnt want it to happen, i mean ofcoz he's carrying some snse after all

but.. but.. the tremendous author in my sweet di nailed the total situation.. finally didnt virat lie down vt her in rain and chat vt her and became that 'someone'???

mahnnn u are BRILLIANT!!! hats off!!

will complete my comment really later.. the boundary i set for myself highly fluctuates wen it comes to u 'only to u'.. such a magical writer!!

love u loads di

take care

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#600

Dead! Dead! Dead!...anu darling its a req...frm next at least give me previous warning...my my...it was mindblasting updt...i m on the fully la la land...ufff...so many kisses in 1 day...cant wait any more...cont asap anu plzzz

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