The Pain of Loss (Completed) NOTE on P 41

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Yippee a new short story from you, so excited to read more.

The prologue is amazing, eager to read more.

Love the fact the story is going to be based on Arnav and hopefully we get an insight on what he has gone through in his past.

Loved the character sketch, so is Khushi not part of the story?

Continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

So...I saw this in the morning and wanted to reserve the first place so bad but didn't because I knew I wouldn't be able to comment till this blasted week reached an end. Exams and all. But Yay you started a new FF! 🥳

I'll edit this on Friday, okay?

I res!
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I unres. Okay. It's just prologue and it's short, so I read it. And the character sketch as well. Love it. Yes, no one has touched this part yet, as in no writer has ever given this part attention.

So far so good. Liked the first scene. So is it going to be all present or story is going to take a leap and show a grown up Arnav too? I don't mind either.

Good stuff.

Edited by Anarocksick - 12 years ago

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

NK seems to be interesting.

But where izz Khushi Bitiy. I wonderz.

Continue soon.😊

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

wow a new story by you helee...you won't believe how happy i m...

talking about the prologue...this is something new...fiction entirely based on arnav...n m looking forward to it...

loved all the characters n new font too😆

continue soon n thnx for the pm

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

intezaar kab tak hum karenge bhala lol!

will wait for you next update

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

res...

i can't believe american standard time thing actually worked for me...will comment later... need to sleep ryt now...😃

edited...

what a wonderful chapter...this update left me ineffable...

this concept of yours is something new n refreshing...i got excited after reading the prologue... i love khushi too but its really interesting to see how arnav became ASR...

coming to the update...

i loved akash in this update...he is mature and understanding...he is eager to help his brother who thought him as a low class cousin of his until today...

i think arnav is not wrong here..after all he is a child..its his father who is the culprit...

u know helee whenever i watched the show n they showed about his past i always used to think that his parents were cowards nothing else...poor kids, both anjali n arnav had to face the consequences of their spineless act...

u made me cry today...what a family...nani, mamiji, akash loved everyone...their selfless love for arnav n anjali left me amazed...

when they were discussing about his education i was surprised, the people whom his dad never even considered worthy of their friendship are actually sacrificing their everything for both the kids...

specially akash he is just a kid who is ready to use second hand books just because arnav won't like reading used books...this is family...m glad they r in better place ryt now...

loved it...very well written👏

ps:u changed ur font again??

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: cheesemad
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Haay meri stalker! I love you yaar!!! ❤️ 😆

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: hmtxyz

Haay meri stalker! I love you yaar!!! ❤️ 😆

u won't belive m grinning like an idiot ryt now helee...m so happy...i did it finally...😃

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damon fan

@-damon-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

What a lovely chapter...👍🏼i loved Akash...he sooo sweet...he is ready to give his new books to Arnav...aww...I love him...
Till now that i've read..It's different from it...Looking forward for nxt chap...!!

Edited by aman3354 - 12 years ago