The Pain of Loss (Completed) NOTE on P 41

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

wow beautifully written buddy 😳 loved it to the core..

waiting for the nxt part

thanks for the PM

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

wow wow and just wow
How imaginative you r dear

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Awesome, Heleeji!!!!! I loved it!!!!

Big Booo to Reva and Rehan!!!! Losers!

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

updated my comment on page 19:)

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: deepti1906

Damn you did it again..😆

i don't know why but i think vampires are quite lucky ...ur team wins, u get first spot in one of ur fav stories

Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Wow that was an amazing and fantastic update, written brilliantly.

I can't believe the prank Reva played on Arnav, that was so sad, but it shows why Arnav became ASR,

Loved how you showed his educational journey, especially how he had decided to study aboard,

Akash and Arnav both worked so hard and managed to buy there own flat, fabulous.

Loved the update, eager to read more.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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Tulipdulip

@Tulipdulip

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

This such an indepthof Arnav's life...I m loving it!!!

Pls continue soon.

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Oh ho firse I've got myself 2 posts to unreserve. This is becoming a habit! 😆

Chalo res! Today I'll Pakka unres I guess by nighttime.
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Uff! Must Aakash and Arnav be this brilliant? I kind of feel like a loser now Matlab Arnav toh is uber brilliant as it is... but ye Aakash bhi kuchh kam nai hai. I swear if Aakash hadn't gone into business or wasn't into chemistry...I would have suggested you to put him in IT. He looks thoda Engineer type ka na 😃

Eh...I'm from Delhi...so it was good read about the school and college bits. DPS, in my time was a school famous for getting hold of all of Delhi's brilliant students (90+%ters in 10th boards) and admitting them into their institution. But of course there were other controversial things the school was famous for 😃

Arnav is too brilliant. Usko to scholarship milna hi hai. So Arnav off to US while designs begins to get recognition here? Nice!

Nice chapter.

Edited by Anarocksick - 12 years ago

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Amazing loved it.
I am very happy for Anjali good that she continued her studies and also working with Nani and Mami and sort of moved on in life.
Loved the way you explain Arnav's academic very impressive and woah, the attitude indeed 'the storm had arrived' for others.
So the girl Reva awaken the rude ASR in him, how cheap of them to mock him like that creepos serves them good when all their group join Arnav gang.
Love Kailash uncle yet again for the message that drove him towards his focus.
Superb, the unknown bond both brother share make them pull out the best in eachother.
His struggle and confidence to achieve his goal is amazing and we all know he made it.
Bravo ASR.
Well written Helee thanks for pm.

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Jalebiee

@Jalebiee

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Heyy..first of all...Hats off! To you for writting such a long update...
I know it took lots of time nd energy in typing...this much content...
And nw coming back to update it was too gud,,,m happy that arnav know his goal...
Looking forward for the update...thanxx