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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: cheesemad

omg khushi has been framed for murder of shyam manohar jha?!

this is really interesting...
continue soon n thnx for the notification...

Unfortunately, yes... Thank you! I just hope I can keep thing going on well... Thriller is not my forte...😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: rakhee12

oh this is interesting. Shyam is Khushi's father and has been murdered. Khushi is accused of murdering him, this looks like a thriller, cant wait for the mystery to unravel.

Yups Rakhee! This is my first thriller... I hope I can do this well...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: JCJS

Poor khushi she has been framed for murder
Really felt pity for her.
This is really interesting waiting for the next update.
Thks for her the mail dear.

Thanks, J! Next update coming up soon!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: aquagal

So it's Khushi who was with Shyam and now is held guilty for his murder. Oh the poor soul.. she has to go through all this. Hoping that Devyani might be of some help to her in some way.

Devyani will sure be her guardian angel... But for how long?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Arshix144

what an unexpected turn of events, you take me back to all these crime shows I watch from time to time. It is heart breaking to see Khushi being prosocuted for a crime she did not commit. It will be interesting to see who the actual culprits are. They stabbed him 45 times, could it be revenge? could Arnav be responsible? Is he a cold blooded killer? moat probably not, he could be related to Devyani :) Ok I better stop right there as the theories are starting to sound even crazy to myself😆!

What can I say I am very much intrigued, bring on the next chapter and surprise us again! x

LOL! Sorry, Mini! For this one, I can't hint at anything coz then, all the thrill of this thriller will be lost...😆 Just keep reading!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: preethi28

Interesting story.
Khushi is sixteen, has a tragic past and is now sentenced to jail for a crime she did not commit!
This one is very different from all your other stories.
Continue soon Shikha!

Thank you, Preethi! Yups, I'm trying thriller for the first time, DM knows who it will be... But I hope I don't disappoint you!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: kondhili

Yeh kya Shikhaji...


Khushi Malik 😕
Devyani Gupta 😕

And Shyam is Khushi's father...😲, toh Di ka kya hoga...
And Where does Arnav come in here..
Khushi is 16 and in jail...😲😲😲
Yeh kya ho raha hai..

Keep reading Lisa! The story will unravel slowly...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: pinkpearlz

why why oh why did khushi touch the knife! knew she will be caught up in the mess then.
Shyam, her father? Woah didn't see that coming. Poor Khushi, feel sorry for her. Like Devyani here, lot. Hope she helps her.
love thrillers! Are you medical student?

Thank you dear!🤗 Although thrillers are not my forte, dropping my readers on cliffangers and being unpredictable are the best things I do!🤣
No, not a med student... yet... But I hope to be!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Crazy_soul

Oh God!!!!!.Shyam was her father😊.And here i thought😲...i should have known its shikha's story.And she loves Arshi tooo much.

Poor Girl.She went through a lot in such a tender age.And why am i getting a inkling that she is being trapped here?.But thank god,she has Devayani Gupta now(hmm,Devayani is a Gupta here).I wonder when will a certain Raizada enter???????😉

😆 Oh! I know what you thought! No! Shikha is not planning to do something like THAT too soon😆
No hints here! Read on, you'll see everything unravel when the time's right!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Ipkkndrokzz4eva

haww!


bad very!

what happened to the killer?
are you going to tell us who he is?

or is she going to rot in the jail?

you have improved a lot in the way you write!

keep it up!👍🏼

Oh my laapata SoulSisterwa!
You know how kroor I am!😈
Not telling you anything!Haha!😃
Just read!😉
And yeah? Thanxooo!!!! ❤️

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