ARIYA SS PEhla PYaar THREAD 2 ...UPDATED - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
awsum update...!!!
hmm so abhi know about ariya...!!! hope he helps them in uniting...!!!
awww arjun...!!! jealous...!!! keh kyu nai deta apni dil ki baat riya ko...!!!
loved abhi riya's bonding...
continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Awesome update.
So arjun is jealouse.
Interesting.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
lastly sorry for late comment!!!
seriously sorry!!!
part 1:-
poor riya!!!!!
i feel bad for her...
she loves him so much but she has to avoid him...!!!
must be difficult of her na..!!!!
u have very wll penned down the emotions!!!!


part 2:-
lastly Arjun realized that he loves Riya...hammaaa!!!!
but what now are u planning for a love triangle????
who is this new guy entry...????
whom was Riya hugging???


part 3:-
so finally jealous kicked in haan???
Arjun is jealous of the binding between Riya and abhi,but he was the one who pushed her away right???
ab jaylo!!!!!


part 4:-
haha!!!!
pyaar mein log kya kya karte...he seriously followed them????haha!!!
abhi know everything hmmm...
Riya:(
she has taken very hard decision to stay away:(
Arjun why are u angry now...!!!!
cont soon please!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
hey guys thank u for ur responses.. i m planning a big ff... so here is the part 5 of it ...

At night: arjun pov:

His heart:Kyon riya kyon tum kisike inte pass the,, nahi nahi

bardasht hota mujhse, nahi dekh tumhe kisi aur se saath.

Kal mein riya se keh dunga ki dur rahe abhi se aur har ladke

se..woh sirf meri hai.. sirf mein hi uske itne paas ja sakta

hoon aur koi nahi.

His mind: nahi arjun tum usee dur raho isime uski bhalai hai

aur abhi dost hai uska usee hug kar sakta hai' tum koi nahi

hote usse kuch bhi kehne wale kya haq tumhara us per.. agar

usne poocha kis haq se rok rahe hoon bata pauge ussee ke

ussee pyar ho tum' nahi arjun riya kisi aur se saath khush

reh rahi hai na bas dur raho usse'

Arjun bas bas ab aur nahi '.. chup ho jao tum dono'kyon

mein jisise bhi pyar karta hoon wooh meri zindagi se chala

jata hai kyon kyon akhir kya gunaah kiya hai

meine??????????

Next morning etf..

When he eneterd the office only riya and abhi was there in

conference room . they were chating abt sme college

memories and riya was beating abhi for teasing her abt sme

incident. Seeing arjun she becomes silent' all others cme'..

Rathore: team we have a case' minister sahab ne yeh

special case etf ko diya hai kuch illegal dealings ko track

kiya gaya hai and kuch gangster ke involve hone ke asar hai

so lets go and be carefull..

On the field all were chasing criminalss. (still riya is little

scared to shot) suddenly there was a slope on which riya's

leg slipped' arjun ran towards her bt abhi reached to riya

first..

Abhi: riya tum thik toh ho? Tumhara pair? Dikhao mujhe'


Riya: abhi mein thik ho I just slipped dnt worry chalo lets

get back to work'

Again the chase and this time it was riya who caught a

criminal and punched him in his face.. he attacked riya bt

she kicked him again' and he fell on the ground.. bt he

attacked riya from back and this time it was arjun who

saved riya... he bit the criminal very badly.

Rathore: rawte chodo usee mar hi daloge kya?

Arjun: rathore isne riya peche se var kiya mein ise nahi

chodunga'

Abhi : arjun chod do usee wooh criminal hai aur yahi uski

fitrat hai'

Riya: ha sir waise bhi mein thik hoon..( riya's foot is already

hurt and its swollen bt she didn't tell anyone fearing that all

would worry and arjun will scold her again)

She was nt walking properly .. shree noticed it and asked:

Shree: are ri tune toh kaha ki u r fine? toh phir tu langda

kyon rahi hai?

Abhi and arjun both turned to riya..abhi quickly going to

riya;;

Abhi: riya dikhao apna pair?

She showed her foot and it was swollen badly..

Arjun: shree gadi mein se pain relief spray and ice bag le aoo..

Riya was shocked abt this statement of arjun.. she thought

he would scold her'

Abhi put the pain relief spray and thn ice bag.. tears were

rolling down her eyes due to pain' arjun in his mind:

Chodunga nahi uss criminal ko usne meri riya ko hurt karne

ke koshish ki, I wl kill him..and he did that in the

interogation roomm.. he bit tht criminal so badly tht his face

was swollen and red to arjun's slaps and mukkas'

Rathore , abhi and shree all three stopped him.. riya was

scared seeing the condition of the criminal If the three

wouldn't have hold arjun he would hv bitten that person to

death..

Arjun was also hurt a bit even his hand was bleeding

too(pathar ka dekhta hai par hai toh insaan hi na)

Rathore: riya arjun ka haath bandage kardo..

Riya: jee sir..

Arjun was wanting sme time with riya atleast to see her

properly. Bt his bad luck..

Riya: shree mujhe ghar jana hai late bhi ho gaya hai.. tum

arjun sir ka wound bandage kardo mujhe abhi ghar drop kar dega..

Shree and chotu exchanging looks' they could believe it was the same riya who could even see arjun in slightest of pain and nw she is too negligent abt his wounds.. shree brought the first 'aid box and bandaged arjun's wound'

Riya and abhi reached the car and riya started to cry badly.

. tears holded till nw came out as an outburst'

Abhi: riya pl sambhalo apne aapko please ro mat.. ruko mein

shree ko call karke poochta hoon arjun thik hai ya nahi'

He calls shree ,riya still crying;

Abhi : ha shree

Before he could speak riya snacted the phone from him..

Riya: heloo shree arjun sir unki chot tune thikse toh

bandage kiya na unhe zyada dard toh nahi hua na shree

bolona'

Shree: ri saans toh le le, arjun sir thik hai unka wound mein

thik se dress kar diya hai aur pain killers bhi de di hai ab

kuch aur'

Riya: ha pain killer khana unhe pasand nahi hai isliye make

sure ki wooh pain killers khay and keep me updated abt him..

Shree: riya tu toh unhe ignore karne wali thi na phir unki itni

fikar kyon chodna thik ho jayenge waise bhi uss akdu ko

kahan koi dard hota hai.

Riya: shree kabardar jo arjun sir ke barein mein kuch bhi

kaha toh mera kaam karo warna mein chotu se kehke karva

lungi'

Abhi: ab chale riya..

Abhi was cleaning riya's tears when arjun was comg out of

the etf and saw them..

Abhi: ri chale?

Riya : ha chalo..

Aftr they went arjun already wounded hand in the wall to

give himself more and more pain'.he wound started

bleeding badly bt he drove in the same condition'the whole

stearing had his blood..


hope u all like it...


Edited by pinkerbell - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
OMG...
Arjun got hurt...
Riya cared for him...
Yaar,indono ka mel karwa do na,please...
Thnks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Aww... Nyc update!! Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Awesome update:)
omg…arjun got hurt…
cont soon…
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
pyaar insaan ko pagal kar deta hain n that is what happening with arjun
poor ariya
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
arjun loves ria a lot but he is frightened
arjun is hurting himself very much
even ria's condition is same
thanks for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Awesome update.
Lovely.
Arjun is getting jealous from abhi.
And riya ignores arjun.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.

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