ARIYA SS PEhla PYaar THREAD 2 ...UPDATED - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
i knw friends ki aap sab ariya ka union chahte hai even i want it bt


only few parts more of their separation..i promise.. sooti..(may 3 or 4)


i knw u hate me for this.. bt parts bohot interesting hai ariya ki


perfect feelings potrayal hai .. so


please mere liye read karna... and i promise to make a beautiful


confession soon...hope u all like the parts...


Part11

"pyar toh hai par dikhana nahi ata"


Next morning: etf office:


All were present at proper time..even arjun..


Rathore: rawte tum thik toh ho na?


Arjun: ha mein thik ho shree jo tha mera itna khayal rakhne wala


aur shayad koi aur bhi tha joh dur se mera khayal rakh raha tha..


Riya and abhi too entered'


Shree: aree ri tumhe toh chutti mili hai na shopping karne ke


liye..phir office kyon aye?


Riya was still staring at arjun's wounds'.


Chotu to shree: lagta hai ri phir se arjun sir mein kho gai..


Shree: chotu ri ki sagai hone wali hai just shut up..


riyaaa(he shouted)


Riya: ha shree bolna?


Shree and chotu: tu office mein kyon?


Riya: wooh malls toh late khulte hai toh mein aftrnoon mein


shopping karne jaungi.. waise bhi aaj sab final ho jayega..


Arjun was silently listening to all this..


Shree: waise ri tu bohot lucky hai ki tujhe abhinav sir jaisa life


partner mila hai he is soo caring and teri har wish fattse puri kar


dete hai.. kyon chotu..


Chotu: ha sab kuch teri pasand ka hi hona chahiye esi strict


instructions hai., decorations, flowers, cake , music sab kuch'


Abhi cms close to ria's ears and say: ri mujhe thoda kam hai mein


tumhe direct mall mein milta hoon okk.. riya nods in yes'



Abhi: love u ri (kisses her cheek slightly).. ria smiles a little.. all


this was in front of arjun..


Shree: wow ri abhinav sir toh romantic bhi hai hoon teri toh ash


hai..


Riya was nt giving any expressions she just gve a shut up look'


All were working and it was almost 2 pm'abhi called riya for cmg


to the mall and arjun had to go in the same direction.. bt he


couldn't drive so rathore asked riya to drop him there and


informed that even abhinav is there'


Riya: sir aapko kahan jana hai..?


Arjun gives her the address and thy reach there.


Abhi n arjun finishes their work ,


Abhi: arjun if u dnt mind tum bhi chalo hamare saath thodi si hi


shopping hai phir tumhe logg drop kar denge and me and riya will


go out for dinner kyon ri?


Ria: ha I dnt mind'


Arjun also agrees' itna time toh riya ke pass rehne ka moka


milega na'


They first go to the jewellary shop for selecting rings..


Abhi : ri tumhe joh bhi pasand aye select karo'.


Riya: abhi tumhi select karo na kuch I m getting confused.


Abhi: arjun why dnt u help me riya par kaun se ring achchi


lagegi??



Riya starred at arjun.. will he really select my engagement


ring..??? she thought..

Arjun choose a simple and elegant one for riya ..



ring achchi hai na.. i just lved it.. sorry back to the story...

Abhi: wow arjun tumhari choice ko toh manna padega kyon baby


u like it? pehen ke dekho size toh thik hai na?


Ria pov: yeh abhi kya hua hai achanak lover boy ki tarah kyon


behave kar raha hai.


Arjun pov: she is a grown up dude baby nahi'


She wears the ring and it was perrfect for her.. it looked as if it was


made for her..


Riya: abhi tumhari ring bhi choose karlo..


Abhi: riya u knw na mujhe kuch simple hi pasand hai.. toh choose


karo'


Abhi gets a call from rathore so he goes out as he wasn't getting


the network.. arjun and riya alone to together'


The salesman: ma'm yeh kuch rings hai sir ke liye aap choose kar


sakti hai.


salesman has misunderstood arjun to be the groom..

riya: yeh thik rahegi kyon abhi?




She turned bt abhinav was nt there,,


Riya: yeh abhi..


Arjun: wooh call attend kar raha hai bahar.


Salesman didn't knw that arjun is not the guy for whom the ring is


chosen..so he asked riya to put it on arjun's finger..he literally


pushed riya's finger and put the ring on arjun's finger...(mock


engagement toh ho hi gai)


Salesman to arjun: sir it is perfect. for u.(akhir riya ne choose ki


thi perfect hi hogi na)

Both riya and arjun looked at the ring on arjun's finger'arjun


removed the ring from his finger' and abhi entered..(sab kam ho


jane ke baad hi abhi ata hai)



Riya: abhi yeh ring dekh lo I like it for u..




Abhi nw wore the ring bt it was litle tight(ofcourse yeh ring bani hi


sirf acp arjun rawte ke liye hai.. ) bt still he bought it coz riya liked


it.. and no other size was available..


Aftr choosing rings they went for dress selection'



Abhi: ri tum saree pehenogi toh bohot pretty lagoge..ya phir lenga


choli watver u wish'waise bhi u r my angel..


Salesman showed them many sarees bt riya didn't choose any.. her


all attention was on arjun who starring at her all times.. and even


looking angry..

Riya's choosing lenga and choli ..aftr so many colors choosing riya


was confused and tired both' more to say she wasn't interested


and arjun's presence was worsening things more..


Abhi: ri jaldi karo na baba I m tired..


Riya: I dnt knw tum hi kuch choose karoon..


Abhi: ok tumhari bhi nai meri bhi nahi tum arjun ki choice ka


kuch pehno arjun please help kar do na'


Arjun approach to help bt riya interrupts'


Riya: abhi tumhe agar kuch choose nahi karna toh leave it kisi aur


se kehne ki zarorat nahi haii. Meri sagai tumse honewali hai kisi


aur se nahii..yeh hamare personal matters hai..


With this she ws abt to leave the shop bt abhi held her hand and


made her sit..


Abhi: I m sorry ri please gussa mat ho chalo I vl select smething ya


this one u like it?


Riya: ha its good'mein try kar leti hoon..


She went to the trial room and abhi stood outside .. arjun was hurt


as usual receiving such cold behavior from his love..

Abhi got message from shree abt sme case which needs him to


reach etf urgently'he tells riya by shout that he has to leave


urgently.. bt riya couldn't hear the whole thing properly..abhi


made arjun stand near the trial room and inform riya again abt his


gng.. riya comes out of trial room and sees arjun standing' he


was lost in her beauty.. she looked like an angel today.. bt


smething he thinks is missing her dimpled simple'


..imagine which ever u like..



riya: sir aap yahan??abhi kahan hai..?


arjun: wooh use urgently jana pada toh he informed ke mein


tumhe ghar chod du. Waise this dress soots u very much. Bohot


beautiful lag rahi ho tum..


riya: thank u sir.. mein change kar ke ati hoon thn lets go home'


she came out and arjun was gng to pay for the dress bt she


stopped..she took out her card and paid for it..


arjun: riya mein pay kar deta toh kya jata hai?


Riya: sir mujhe ajnabe logo se favour lena pasand nahi hai..


Arjun: mein ajnabi hoo riya?


Ria: ha 2 saal baad bhi mein apke baarein mein kuch bhi toh nahi


janti toh aap mere liye ajnabee hi hue na..yeh meri nai life ki


shuruat hai jahan mein apne past se kuch bhi carry on karna nahi


chahtii' ghar chale sirr..


kya abhi bhi arjun kuch nahi karega ...????????aur karega toh kya


karega?????????

Edited by pinkerbell - 12 years ago
pinkerbell thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wat is the wrong wid the update i also posted arjun's ring and it appeared it too nw it cann't be seen
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Posted: 12 years ago
woww ...my wait is rewarded beautifully i must say...


loved ur write uppp
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Posted: 12 years ago
HIGH time bhaiya...!! Kuch to karo!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
ariya part was nice
omg what is abhi doing yaar
something fishy😆
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh God...
Ab kya hoga????
Abhi ka behavior kuch fishy lag raha hai...
Kuch toh chut raha hai...
Arjun aur Riya ki mock sagai hochuki hai.
Love Riya ki ring and lehenga.
Tere paee pakarrti hu,Pinku.
Please Ariya ko jald se jald milwa do.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Riya! Riya!riya!
Why u do like tht
Bt man Mai to Arjun hai tabhi to uski wounds ko dekh rhe THI
Update is full package boss
Chotu and shree convo awesome
Thanx 4 pm me
Update soon
Mishti
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update.
I loved it.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
jo bhi karega solid karega.. yea fir mai ye bolu ki @pinkerbell jo tu karegi wo solid hoi
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update...!!!
wow arjun selected ring for her.,...!!
the ring was awsum...!!!
chalo mock hi sai but engagement to hui😉😆
but ye abhi ke dimag mai solid kuch chal rha hai...!!!
feeling bad for arjun...!!! and riya... :(
continue soon...

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