'Parinay' THD1, Next CHP up in THD 2, Link PG 131 - Page 47

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Posted: 12 years ago

u actually have managed to achieve a feat NO OTHER ArHi FF writer I have read so far of has managed!

u managed to actually make me feel bad for them being a couple at the expense of a broken relationship. because u kept it realistic..ever character, every instance perfectly written..

made me think a little beyond cozy ArHiness and think about it as a whole story..

amazing writing!! absolutely love it as the journey ahead promises to be one hell of a ride simply by being so realistic!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
That's a very realistic approach and loved all the characterizations which were not all cliched.
Though I love arhi, I felt bad for Arnav and Lavanya
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a story!! 👏
really sad for khushi. she's got a tough job to break through arnav's heart!!

if khushi was in place of lavanya. then too i wud hv been sad for khushi !
always biased for arshi !! 😉

will arnav be able to love khushi TRULY who claims to love lavanya unconditionally??😲
will he be able to love her d same way or more??😲
wont khushi think herself to be his second and the only choice??😲

me thinking thinking...love is so complicated. makes my head spin

ps- anyways update sooner quicker and ... faster..!!
w8ing.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting story..initially it reminded me of Krani's Arranged Marriage...but this is different...La equation changes everything...well Arnav being so strong with his feelings for La, I feel bad for Khushi...poor girl, her dreams were crushed due to emotional blackmail...and now what did she get?? i hope as the story progresses there would be happiness coming in for Khushi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shree (shree10) recommended this story and since we both follow a lot of common stories I thought I should try this one too :) I am glad I decided to give this a try because I really like your story telling style...going to follow the story henceforth and I hope that this wont be a sad ending...because I cant take sadness at the end...ok with all the heartbreaks throughout but it has to end on a happy note for me:)

I like the way you have written Khushi's pov...actually it is the plight of many girls in India...those who attend girls school dont interact with boys at all till their wedding...and they have no clue about handling interactions with a man...and you know what I have a friend who faced a very similar problem...her husband was totally reserved after their wedding...even refused to touch her...she put up with it for few months and also discussed this with him...she couldnt bear all that aloofness and ignorance...and had no idea what to do...should she take the first step in physical intimacy? she was totally lost...and then things got worse...they are divorced now :( so when I read the first few chapters I was reminded of her story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
So basically my daughter was high on adrenaline last night and slept at 2, which means I got about 2 and half hours of sleep as I start work at 5. However I do intend to post the update today, but later than usual. Thanks for your comments and patience.

Cheers
K
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Naach_Basanti

So basically my daughter was high on adrenaline last night and slept at 2, which means I got about 2 and half hours of sleep as I start work at 5. However I do intend to post the update today, but later than usual. Thanks for your comments and patience.

Cheers
K


Was just about to start spamming when I saw the note. Okay, I will wait :)

Patiently. Or not.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww it's okay, we'll be waiting 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Naach_Basanti

So basically my daughter was high on adrenaline last night and slept at 2, which means I got about 2 and half hours of sleep as I start work at 5. However I do intend to post the update today, but later than usual. Thanks for your comments and patience.

Cheers
K


We can wait, take your time dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
its ok dear...take ur time...will be waiting...

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