'Parinay' THD1, Next CHP up in THD 2, Link PG 131 - Page 28

So their families not only forced them to get married,still forcing them to behave like husband-wife..
Ur description of Payal's psychology is so real...glad that u neither made her any mahan big sister nor any cruel one...
Buaji is really nice..at least she understands Khushi...
So Arnav was in a relationship...now I am angry..if he loves her,like he claims,he just can't get married..whatever may be the cuz...
After last update I was feeling bad for both..now I am feeling that only for Khushi...
Nice one dear...waiting for more...

Poor Khushi ..felt really bad for her 😭 😭 and there is more heartbreak in future for her...Arnav being in love with Lavanya was really unexpected...waiting for the next update 😃

Wow seems really different but let's see what's hoing to happen? Btw nice update:-))

oh NB, what a story dear -

I will love to discuss about both your FF's ..actually I can keep on talking about them ..so plz mail me your mail id .mine is jon_simki@blueyonder.co.uk

You know NB I am a silent reader of your CD. Coward of sorts i am, but your practicle approch always left me stumped. And i read your every update very relegiously, and sometimes even try to take in some of your amazing thoughts. A fan I am of your because.

Now when you stared this I had to read it and after todays update couldn't help but comment.
I was a dream, a plan of mine to write on this concept always. Because what theme you are writting I had witnessed this first hand. It happened in a real situation with someone very close to me. I realy i never felt sorry for the couple, neither did they themselves didi. And today they have a 1 year old baby boy.
It was same. Girl was married under pressure and the guy loved someone else. Now I am so happy that one of my favourite writters have chosen to write on this.
I am already in love with this and I trust you so completly with the story.
And i am glad it is a short story because now things will fall into place sooner and we dont have to wait for 30-40 chapters to deal with.
Very very well tackled and written parts hitherto and wish they would be the same in future too.

WOW that was twist...

Hey, I just come across your story and have to say... It's a brilliant one! From the concept of arranged marriage between two individuals who are broken between their feelings. Khushi wants her dream of attending University and Arnav is in love with Lavanya. I like that you have shown him to be in love in Lavanya. There are only a few Arnav and Khushi fan fictions which explore different relationships as it's frowned upon if they are shown to be in a relationship with someone else or God forbid in love so thank you for a fresh concept!