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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Arjun seaches outside the club..but the boy hav no sign..
ye etani jaldy kahan gayab ho sakti hai,
yes i m definitly sure ke vo koe ladki hai..
.
Rukooo he shouted other wise i will shoot u..
Finaly arjun graze fell on the same boy..
arjun hold his gun tightly in his hand n moved toward the boy..
Whe arjun turned his face..
he was actualy a boy not a girl..
(Arjun was shocked)
ehsa kaise ho sakta hai,
Jistarah se vo mujhe dekh ker bhagi or..
uske body languge ye sab to ek girl ke taraf point kerte hain,
his chain of thought brock when that boy spook fearly..
tum kon ho ,
or ye gun mujh per kyun point ke hai,
dekho mujhe chod do tumhen jitane paise chahiye le loo,
(lolll arjun ko paise ke risvat..are bhaye ye kya tarika hai paise kamane ka,
Age padeye kya hota hai,)
.
Arjun took his gun back n signal him to go..
.
Boy-sure aab pakka mujhe shoot nahi karengen..
Arjun already fustrated by the unkonw girl..
he again took his gun n point on biys head..
Justt gooo..!!!!
.
Boy start his bike n run imedeatly (loll poor guy)
.
tum jo koe bhi ho tumhen to main pakad ker rahoonga..
.
Sudenly his phon ring..
it was sameer he picked his call..
Sam-mujhe nahi lagta arjun vo log yahan hai..
vaise tum ho kahan..
Ar-vi log yaha they rathore..
main unhi main se kise ek ka pichha ker raha tha ..
per vo mere haath se nikal gaye..
Arjun was bussy on phone un where the fact that..he was walking on the middle on highway..
(club high way ke pass bana tha)
.
he cut the called n turned other side..
One truk coming toward him in very fast speed..
esase pehale arjun kuch ker pata..
Some one pushed arjun away on the other side of the road..
the action was very quik n sudden,arjun couldnt balenced himself n fall the other side on the road..
.
Arjun lift his face up..
wanna to saw that person..






Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

He was shocked to saw him ..
he was the sam boy or may be girl..
(arjun stil laid on the road)
boy turned his face other side..
u r right acp i m not a boy..
He removed his cap..
which covered her long silki hair...
now her hair r free n waving on her shoulder...
one black car stoped near to her..
She rised her one hand up n say bye to him..
(Her face stil opposite to him)
before arjun manage to got up n run behind her ...
she said..
Soncha nahi the tumse phir kabhi mulakat hogi...
(open the door of car)
(arjun get up he wanna to cross the road but lot of traffice)
.
Ye to shuruyaat jai acp..Hum phir milenge..
but i wish hum phir kabhi na milen..
.
(She sit inside the car)
Rukoo kon ho tum...
stoppp arjun shouted..
.
(per car jaa chuki the)
.
finaly arjun crossed the road..
her red cap r stil on a road..
Arjun took that cap..
.
He felt somthing known..
he felt he hear the voiced before..
Kyun vo etani jaani pehchani lag rahi hai,
.
Ager vo ek criminal hai then why she saved me..
Why..??
.
lot of Q running on arjun's mind..
but no ans..
he took that cap n moved toward his suv..
----
SCENCE SHIFT-
MORNING TIME..9:00
NEXT DAY IN ETF OFFICE--
.
All r in conference room..
Rathore described his plan..
Guys hamare pass ye last mokka hai..
.
Last two hotal main hamen koe surag hanth nahi laga..
.
Kise bhi galti ke koe gunjayesh nahi honi chahiye..
.
Ab hamara target hai moon light club..
I hop aap sab ko pata hai,
ke aap sab ko kya kerna hai,
or yaah es baat ka dhayan rahe ke es baar koe gadbad na hoo,
.
n specialy u rawte..
Rawte...!!!! rathor again spook,but no responce..
.
bez arjun lost in last night incedent..
why she save me..? why.??
uske avaj...
he comes out his thought when rathore again shouted his name..
.
Ra-rawte ager tumhara case per dhayan nahi hai to pehale he bata




Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

bata do hum tumhare bina bhi manage ker lenge,
.
Arjun just give rathore his angery glare..
.
on the other all tried to controled their smiled..
.
----
TIME-7:00
MOON NIGHT CLUB--
One car is stoped ..
one beautiful couple comes out the car...
Man forward her to his hand... n wishper chalen jaan..
he leaned his face near to her ears n wishper ,Vaise tum es black saree main kabhi khubsurat lag rahi ho ayesha..
.
she wears one black saree having a red border n red deep cut blouse..
she looks to gog..
rathore heart stoped for the first time when he looks her in that black saree..
.
She blushes hard n wishper..
kaam per dhayan digiye mr rathore..we r not alone..
.
or vaise aap bhi kuch kaam nahi lag rahe..ander chalen,
weared one black shot with red shirt..
.
Rathore hold her slim waist n both goes inside..
.
choree n liza r in suv..
monitoring the parti on cctv..
(shree already feet camera n connect with his lappy)
.

arjun stood out side the club..
(waiting for shakshi)
ye ladki bhi naa , time ke koe valu he nahi hai,
.
pata nahi rathore ne ese kyun es operstion main shamil kiya hain..
.
his chain of thought Brock when he heared soft voice which calling his name..
.
Waoo arjun tum to kitane smart lag rahe ho,
mujhe nahi pata tha,
tum etane smart bhi lag sakte ho..
arjun wear this...

--
Arjun just giv her his famous angerly glare..
n moved inside the club..
.
Heyy arjun ye kya baat huye..
maine tumhari tarif ke kaam se kaam tum meri tarif to ker sakte the,
she make a sad face n follow him..
.
she wears a simple black sleevless dress..

her sweet smiled make her beauti doubled..
--
INSIDE CLUB-
Sam and ayesha dancing on a dranc floor




Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54



Normal couple..
dono ek sath kitane achhe lagten hain sakshi wishper..
.
Hey arjun chalo na hum bhi dance kerten hai..
.
But arjun didnt answer n turned his face other side..
.
Hey arjun etana bhav kyun kha rahe ho ..ek dance kerne ko to keh rahi hoon,
She held arjun's hand..
.
Arjun snnached his hand away n shouted..
just shut up shakshi hum yaha case solve kerne aye hai,
Naa ke tumhare tarah time waist kerne..
.
far near the baar counter Someone looking both..
she turned his face other side n order one wine..
.
Ek wipe dena..
Per madam aap already he do glass le chukin hain..
.
She tightly closed her eyes n says..
apne kaam se kaam rakho verna...
Samjhe ya samjhayon n hold his coller,
---
arjun avoiding shakhi..
she felt bad n goes bar counter n order some soft drink..
.
kya huya tumhara bf tumhen avoid ker raha hai...
one girl asked her, she is already there n drinking her vine..
.
But her graze fix on arjun..
Sha-no he is not my bf..
But i like him..
.
Girl give smiles..in mind but i hate him...
she signal to shakhi-tum yahan baid sakti hoo..
.
Sa-thanks n sit near to her..
her graze also following him..
.
Girl- (sipping her vine)
Tumhen dekhker lagta hai tum usase pyaar kerti hoo..
.
Sha-(lost) haan ..i lv two man most in my life,first my father n second showing toward arjun..
.
Gir-(smiles)
.
Sha-hey tum hus kyun rahe ho..
Gir-she finished her all drink n reply..
I hate two man most in my life..first my dad..
n second..
looking toward arjun...
N then shakhi..
my love or my so cold ex...but she didnt complete n left toward the dance floor...

---
Light goes dim...
She stood on the midle of dance floor..holding one poll..
music start..
TBC-
Girl n arjun face to face...
HOW was the part..
A r like or not..??
plz reply..if u want next part...
plz hit like button ...






Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
superb teaser :) loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Update...plzzz how much time u will take...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Teaser of part =3/promo



dont u dare to touch me acp...
He steped closer to her..
she smiled mischiviously...
Uff acp..mujhe majboor mat karo shot kerne ke liye...
She took her gun n point in front of him..
.
but arjun steped closer to her..
Main janta hoon ke tum mujhe shoot nahi karogi..
.
She again smiled..
Kya bast hai acp tum mere bare main etana sure ho..
.
yes u right i dont shot u..
or shayad main tumhen kabhi shoot ker bhi nahi sakti...
.
Tumhare gunahon ke etani aasan moot ...
na na na acp etani asan mootnahi milegi tumhen...
.
Just listen to me one time..
he steped more closer to her, she took steped back..
.
I warn u acp dont came close to me..
She point gun on her head..
Main tumhen kabhi shoot nahi ker sakti ,
.
jitana pyaar maine tumse kiya usase kaye jayada nafrat kerti hoo..
.

but i killed my self..n u know very well acp main ehsa ker sakti hoon..
or main ehsa doo baar ker bhi chuki hoon...
---
so how was that, r u looks confused...????
whats going on bw acp n girl ..
for this wait for next part...





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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Nice teaser de
W8 4 next update

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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Awesome update dr.

The girl in disguise was Riya.

Awww she saved Arjun.

Why she hate him?

Loved Saakshi n that girl's conco.

Nice n really vry interesting teaser.

Eagerly waiting for the nxt one.

Continue soon.
Edited by akanksha1371986 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Waooo dr nice part..
cant wait to know who is the girl n why she behaiving like this to arjun..
lot of q plz update soon

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