VIRMAN FF*ek mein aur ek tu*SEASON 2*pARt.1 PG. 17

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Ridzi

@Ro-001

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

So finally you updated it...

Loved it.

But i am confused that does Maanvi know her feelings or not

Anyways thanks for the pm and thanks for the awesomest update

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dania6

@dania6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

amazing start...fabulous to the core...sounds like kuch kuch hota hai ...but our shilpa Vl take d story to a totally new angle...won't u ;)...this story Vl also hv fab twists n turns ...but still.I.like kyu dard hai Itna more ...god knows why but I love that story...n I also loved emaet to the core ...please continue both ur stories soon n keep up the fab work...:):)

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shirhid

@shirhid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

it was mindbloing

very nice start

plz cont this

nd thanx for the pm 😊

Edited by shirhid - 12 years ago

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TeriKhamoshiyan

@TeriKhamoshiyan

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

it was awesome!!👍🏼
loved the update!!❤️

it seems like a very interesting concept...😃

awww..poor manvi, bechari loves him and he goes around dating so many girls!!😒

but love virat and manvi's relationship!!🤗

they are so cute together!!
will be waiting for the next update!!😊

plz do continue soon!!😛

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mehaksanaya

@mehaksanaya

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Awesome loved there frndship nd wow manvi luvs him

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Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

res i want to gve biggg cmnt isiliye res vl unres at night

Edited by copypaste - 12 years ago

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aisha77

@aisha77

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Ufff maar dala larku , kya zbrdast start hay. Simply fantastic. Plz dnt u dare to stop it hehehe , we want it to b soopr dooppr once again

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inlvwithehmmbh

@inlvwithehmmbh

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Youu know you updated this after so long that I had to re read some past chapters to make any sense of the above.
Anw, it's a good start, but I know you can do much better:/ my opinion sorry if you don't like it. However thanks for the PM.