First of all Sorry for spamming your thread 😭I got TOO excited.
Oh and I am second to comment.
Let me do the victory dance :D
Coming to the update.
You are an expert in writing stories which grasp the reader's attention like soo quick.
I just wished the update never ended.
Very well written Navya.
I like the way Viren didn't let her remove the mangalsutra showing clearly how possessive he is about Jeevika.
Afterall he's not that bad.Is he? 😊
Viren is so naughty.Lol shower together =))
That would have been so awesome😳
Hehe
Okay so I really love the bond between Viren's parents and Jeevika.It gives a kind of warmth to her seeing their love.
The nightmares are getting onto her like anything but glad that Viren is there to take care of her and look after her in this harsh phase of life.
I lived the update.
Continue soon Navya
Thanks for the Pm
Edited by ktloversera - 12 years ago
