TRUTH OR DARE? A TAAREY FF part 12 updated - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Awww.. I really feel bad for Swayam..
He will be so heart-broken to know that Sharon does not have feelings for him...
fantastic update, dear.,,..
I really loved those beautiful lines which Swayam said to Sharon...
He actually spoke his heart out..
But, Why there was very less TaaRey scenes???😭
Update the next one soon, dear..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
the update was amazingg...
taani is so adorable...

and poor swayam...he must be heartbroken after this...
and sharon must also be feeling so awkward... =(
looking forward to the next part...
*excited*
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Aww Swayam proposal to Sharon was so romantic hope she accept it and not see it as a dare only... Amazing update plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: samiha_taarey

awww bechara swayam!!!! hw sweetly he proposed Sharon he surely b heartbroken when he findout the truth...😔 bt there is very less taarey in this update...so hoping a taareylious update in nxt... do update soon


um sorry... but i promise to give a taareylious update next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

Awww.. I really feel bad for Swayam..

He will be so heart-broken to know that Sharon does not have feelings for him...
fantastic update, dear.,,..
I really loved those beautiful lines which Swayam said to Sharon...
He actually spoke his heart out..
But, Why there was very less TaaRey scenes???😭
Update the next one soon, dear..😊


thanks for your comment Ayesha... this is actually a story written by me with different characters... but as i am a great fan of taarey and swaron i just changed the names... but dnt worry... taarey are the lead and they will be given more importance... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

Sorry for the late comment, dear..


Chapter 4
Awww... loved it..
Haha! Taani was so tensed about Rey's Gf...
And then she was so relieved after knowing that it was a prank..
I hope they understand their feelings towards each other soon...
Poor Neha... She had to dance with those high heels..
Awww.. Rey has never had a GF...
And the flashback was amazing..

Off to read the next part..
Will comment after reading..


Thank you ayesha, thanks for ur comments... all your comments are encouraging me... thanks... thank you so much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Part 4
TR first meet or fite was amazing! D way dey bck anwer each oder, hai! SO cute!

Part 5
Swayams proposal, was so cute! Kash sharon samajti its real! Poor him! I wish!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
awesome. the theme is really nice and taarey they are so cute. Feeling bad for swayam. He loves sharon a lot and sharon doesn't reciprocate the feelings
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
hey guys um here with the next update... pls tell me if my story goes boring...

Part 6

Swayam continued, "Everyday I wake up in the morning seeing your face. I sleep just to see you in my dreams. When I am away from you, I feel like I am away from myself. You are my life, you are my peace, you are my soul. I LOVE YOU! Will you be my better half?" he went on his kneels and extended his hands towards Sharon. There was pindrop silence in the place. "Ok guys, Swayam has finally completed his dare. So who is next?" Sharon said to the others not looking at Swayam .She was avoiding his gaze. "Sharon,Wait! What do you mean? Do you think I did this just for a dare?" Swayam said as his voice was trembling. "Of course, Swayam. You are my good friend. I dint want you to lose the dare. That's why I helped you." She confronted Swayam. "Swayam, she is right…. Errhh. You have now completed your dare. So… lets move on…" Taani said with a bit of hesitance in his voice. She started pulling Swayam away from Sharon. "Stop it Taani. What are you trying to do??" Swayam yelled at Taani. "Swayam come on.. its already too late. I think we have to move now… so come on guys lets move…" she was getting nervous. She knew very well about Swayam. He is a very calm guy. Meanwhile no one can stand to him when he was angry. She was pulling Swayam, but he let go off her. "Enough Taani! Everything is enough. If you want to go, just go, get lost. Please stop meddling with my life. This is personal. So please don't dare to interfere. Get lost." Swayam let out his sudden outburst. Taani couldn't tolerate this. She started taking steps backward and finally ran away. Sharon tried to stop Taani. "Hey, Taani, wait!" she went behind Taani but she felt a tight grip on her wrist. She turned to see Swayam standing there. "Sharon, do you really think I did this just for a dare? If so, then you are wrong. I really love you! I LOVE YOU DAMMIT..!!!" He yelled at her. Sharon slowly took his hand from her wrist and composed herself.

The gang now stood there frozen by seeing the incidents going on. They were looking at Swayam then at Sharon. Sharon was now facing Swayam. She raised her hand and gave a tight slap. "How could you ever do this? I let you do it just because I considered you as my best friend. nothing else other than that. Do you get that?" she yelled at him. Swayam was heartbroken by now. "dont you really love me?" he asked her again. "Never… I never had feelings for you. You were just my friend. friend that's all. Do you get that?" she gave him another slap. "This is for misusing my friendship" she gave another tight slap, "And this is for hurting Taani." But Swayam dint hear what she said. He was neither aware that Sharon slapped him. All that kept ringing in his head was, "I never had feelings for you." He stood there like a statue unable to do anything. Sharon went aside and sat under a tree. The boys went near Swayam. "Swayam…" they tried calling him. But it was of no use. He dint respond. The girls tried to console Sharon. "I am ok guys. just give me some time I will be alright." Sharon gave them a weak smile.

On the other hand Taani was running away from the place. She stood still at a place and wept bitterly. "What did I ever do?? Swayam told me to get lost!!" she was crying and decided to move towards the car. Meanwhile Rey somehow managed to set his princess right and was moving towards the campfire. Taani ran and finally bumped into Rey. She stood there in front of Rey shedding every possible drop of tear. "What happened Taani?? Why are you crying?? Is everything ok??" Rey was worried seeing Taani like this. He repeatedly asked questions but Taani dint give him an answer. He cupped her face in his hand. "Come on Taani, tell me what happened." He said in a very soft tone. Taani couldn't help herself but hugged him tightly. Rey was surprised. He then hugged her and caressed her hair. "Its ok Taani, everything thing will be alright." He couldn't see his Taani shed tears in front of him. He pulled her from the hug. "Taani, listen. Stop crying. I understand you are hurt. But I don't know why. I am with you always. No matter what I will never leave you." He said. They shared an eyelock. Rey kissed Taani on her forehead. He wiped her tears with his thumbs. He caressed her cheek. He again kissed her forehead. He kept staring at her and they stood there in each others embrace. Then they came back to their senses. "Now tell me what happened?" Rey asked her. Taani explained the entire incident and again started crying. "He hurt me… he… hurrttt… Sharon…" she said between her weeps. Rey was really dumbstruck. "What did Sharon say?" Rey asked her concerned. "I don't know. I ran away from there before that."

"Taani, come on lets go! We have to sort things out. And also its getting too late. We have to move now." He pulled her but she stood still. "I don't wanna come there Rey. Please… I don't want to face him again. He said me to get lost… he told me to stay away from his life… my best friend told me to go away…" she couldn't tolerate it any more. She started crying again. Rey hugged her tightly. He never let her go. She hugged him back and continued crying. Rey could feel his shirt getting wet due to her tears. He pulled her off the hug. "Ewwh, Taani I thought you were a bold girl with daring attitude. From when on did you become so weak?? These tears never suit your face. A smile, a wide smile only suits you." Rey consoled her. "Running away from the problem is never a solution. You should also have the guts to face it." He said pulling her towards the campfire. Taani was startled. She never saw this side of him. He was too caring and sweet. She felt happy. They finally reached the campfire. Rey saw Swayam standing still at a place and Sharon under a tree.



pls comment. i want to see the response... pls...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
awesomee update as always...
loved the way u showed their emotions...
and poor taayam...feelin so bad for them...
but glad in a way ki rey was their for taani...that scene was really cutee =)
loved it =)
the way he consoled her, and took care of her...jus too sweet <3
on the other hand, feelin so bad for swaron...
hope things get sorted out by the next chap...
update soon =)

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