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Posted: 12 years ago
Did I ever tell I love Ranvijay? At first I had negative vibes about him but after reading about him, I just loved him.
Dadi's love story is endearing to read and l just loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago

One thing though, I know Arnav and Khushi have strong natural bond between them but we need to give credit to both Dadi and Ranvijay with Dadi scoring the most .. Seems like Dadi is trying to revive all her memories with her grandson's love story... She clearly making every attempt to witness each and every interaction between them ..
I enjoyed the subtle zeal in this update like their fingers playing while Khushi offering the water , Arnav taking Khushi out of the room just to listen to the story together , Arnav kissing lightly while Khushi is trying to listen :)
Dadi's lovestory was indeed an epic .. Even though she was just 14 back then, she was strong who followed her heart and Raphael too was righteous; he didn't let the girl down who came all the way searching him.. I loved the way you incorporated the current love story while narrating Dadi's :)
Dadi and Ranvijay are like gaurdian angels for Arnav and Khushi's love .. Because both dadi and Ranvijay made sure that love birds are left away from the family's radar..
Mami is being very curious about their friendship ; but somehow I'm not that bothered at this moment as Dadi is being persistence and also both Khushi and Arnav's love is now fully blown ...
But I thought before anything they would talk through the incident especially when it marks as a life changing one between them and it indeed kept them apart for 15 years ..
As always, this update also left me with tingling sensation in my heart :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Rachel...I'm crying here! You write so beautifully that it leaves me in tears! Dadi is such a sweetheart! I love her! But Mami is getting on my nerves!!

I want to cry for Khushi and Arnav because I know the path from here will not be easy. There's Lavanya, his family, her family to go through. And the story of Khushi and Arnav is so pure..it deserves a chance to be complete. I think Khushi knows that...and she's knows that it will never happen...she's giving herself and Arnav some blissful days until the marriage and reality kicks in. And I just want to cry!!! Arnav and Khushi have transformed to the playful couple so easily...the subtle romance..the play of fingers, Arnav leaving to listen to Dadi's love story with his beloved, the playful kisses...it was meant to happen...*sigh*

This is wonderful! Please keep writing.

P.S: Please tell me Dadi sees through the ending of this story. Please!
Edited by Nehasupnfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was so awesome...Dadi's the best...she's so insightful and a very humbled person...

Love how she knows everything happening in all directions ...


This story...is just so blissful...I hope Arnav and Khushi also make an epic love story...as its going to get rough for them as well...
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Posted: 12 years ago
daadi's story...
really a cute one...
loved the phrase PINAPPLE MAN...:P
this story apart..
how khushi is so common to arnav infact loving to arnav???
does that bitter has got nothing to do with the current situation???
i didnt expect khushi ll react in a positive manner this sooner...:)
waiting for the next chapter...:):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was really a surprise update... N dadi's love story was like an icing on the cake... Loved it to tee... How do you manage to write so beautifully... You have no idea on how much I drool over our dadi... Knowing her love life has made me crush over her even more... Reading the above lines, makes me feel weird... But truth be said, I just love our dadi so much... May be because she has seen the love of Arnav n Khushi in its pure form even before they realized... This chapter just justified how deep emotions can run when it comes to Love...

So true... He indeed was a pineapple man and every single word you chose to explain it was so perfect... Like Arnav I just want Arnav n Khushi to have a great story to tell their grand children... If only dreams come true... Can life get that easy... My heart just goes out to this Arnav... I just hope he is not building castles in air...

Thanks again for this amazing love story of the most sexiest dadi ever... Between loved Ranvijay for being himself yet again... He is an equal match for dadi's crime...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Epic story... how sweet... ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Simply loved Dadi's love story! Love her and Ranvijay for their help and approval of Arnav and Khushi's love story!
I wish Dadi had noticed Manorama's searching eyes.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love is in the air. Arnavs sister, parents and grand parents, sure the love story of Arnav and Kushi will be epic.

It will be nice if you give a hint about "trampled", it is giving the sensation of show arnav (B/W) screaming from the gut Maaa.
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Posted: 12 years ago
A lovely chapter.
I could feel Dadi's emotions beautifully ! but still fearing Khushi fate ahead.
U r an amazing writer.

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