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Hi,

Simply superb...but one thing I don't understand is how can khushi behave so normally with arnav when she knows that he knew what happened with her n still didn't do anything...quite odd...

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

Rachel, your writing is magical and it touches the deepest recessess of my heart and soul ...I havent experienced something like this in a long time. I cannot explain the lump in my throat for such a happy chapter.

The similarities between arnav and dadaji are plenty to say the least. His quiet strength, standing up for someone while the other couldn't be bothered and even the way he refuses to acknowledge and recongnize Claire at the party was so similar to the way Arnav reacts to Khushi at the beginning.

But what gave me the goosebumps for this update

1. Dadi's talking about anohter love story in the making - how I wish she experiences the happiness of seeing arnav and Khushi together

2. Dadi taking in Khushi and Arnav's finger play and the way Khushi moves away - my heart broke along with dadi's.

3. Ranvijay directing Dadi to start the story so that people dont notice Arnav and Khushi - I am in love with Ranvijay, alittle less than Arnav but yes. who says we cant love two people at the same time😉

4. Arnav leaving the table to stand with Khushi but standing outside the door - beautiful move but an intelligent one too. They want to be together but are not ready to face the resistance that is bound to come from people.

5. General Singh Raizada and Claire Singh Raizada. Most interesting and strong couple. She is the heart and he is the head. She is the soul that he needs at the end of the day - doesnt it remind you of another love story ----hmmm - Arnav and Khushi's love story of course.

One question - how can Khushi behave normally with Arnav after his confession in the meadow? I can understand arnav not talking about it because he has done his major confession that he knew and is waiting fro Khushi's reaction. But Khushi's reaction ...there should be an awkwardness from Khushi's side because her friend knows that she was molested. ... There's a disconnect there...not able to put my finger on it. Unless of course you say that the confession took place the previous evening and they havent had time to discuss. Even then...shouldn't Khushi be a little awkward that her friend knows yet did nothing?

I personally loved the relief that you gave us through dadi's love story. You give angst and you provide the balm too😆

Dadi's love story. Seriously, that was written so wonderfully. Even though this update had a little less of Arnav-Khushi, I simply loved it... and it has to be favourite chapter up till now.

Hell, I think you can write an entire FF based on dada and dadi's lovely story. Can't explain it... you left me feeling all warm and giddy by the end of it.

Okay, and I have to say this... Ranvijay is awesome! He's so funny 😆 Seriously, I like him, I like him very much.

Arnav-Khushi in this update were so cute. I liked that dadi noticed their little exchanges, and how he took her hand and led her to outside.

What happened to Khushi response to Arnav's confession about that night? Hmm...

aww what an amazing chapter! I enjoyed reading this so much! I was so into Dadi's love story! She truly did have an epic love story. I also love how you wrote about Arnav and Khushi in the background creating their own amazing love story. I seriously love the way you write! I can feel every emotion that the characters are going through. Great job! Can't wait to read the next part!

Dadi's story was beautiful! Sigh it was epic!!!!

arnav is sensitive and caring but my favorite is Dadi. what a wonderful character!

I simply love Dadi & her epic love story😃.

wonderful