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Posted: 12 years ago
Very beautiful update... She asked him out... That was so sweet... But sweetest was Arnav sulking in bed over last evening's argument... So it was the thoughts of her that caused him to near death... Guilt will kill...

The small flashback of the little ones dream was very heart warming... Every time I read anything related to the little Arnav n Khushi I m left back with moist eyes... I got all the more emotional when Arnav asked her to be only for him forever... Talking about the past, I dint know till this update that Khushi was not aware about Arnav being a witness to it... It explains why she had no idea on why Arnav left her...

Mr Ranvijay has slowly taken a solid place here... Loving him... Can he get anymore sarcastic???

The minute details you put in to describe a scene makes it all the more easy to visualize what we read... You are one amazing writer and it is an experience in itself to read anything you write... I am literally out of words when it comes to writing a comment for you... You just write every single line so wonderfully that I am left awestruck at the end... You make me smile n cry every single time...

You are one very talented writer and I would love to see your books in my rack one day... I would be religiously following any story you write...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow.. loved it.. awesome..
hope everythi is fine..
dnt lose patience and hope :-):-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it... But dont take this wrong!!

This story is really good. Have you ever thought to publish it?? Bcs when i usually read books i like it when its very much suspense in it. That makes me just want go back and read and know what they are hiding. Like I dont to leave the book intill i know what the secret it. I get exactly the feeling from this FF. And you write really well.

You should think about it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I agree to this point 100%.

Rachel (I believe that's your name, forgive me if I'm wrong), this is not related to TB, but it is my ultimate and complete DREAM to see Barun and Sanaya act in a film based on Mirage. Call me crazy, but it's my actual tween phangurl fantasy. If I, ever for any reason, become a film director, I will be coming to you first to ask about your FF because it DESERVES that platform. 😊

LOL. Sorry for change in topic, but I had to let you know 😆

Originally posted by: KreyaArshiLover

Loved it... But dont take this wrong!!


This story is really good. Have you ever thought to publish it?? Bcs when i usually read books i like it when its very much suspense in it. That makes me just want go back and read and know what they are hiding. Like I dont to leave the book intill i know what the secret it. I get exactly the feeling from this FF. And you write really well.

You should think about it.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Right fr0m the first para 0f this FF I just knew I am g0nna l0ve it and I wasnt wr0ng at all. The n0stalgic feeling this FF gives me, I just want t0 dr0wn myself in it and cry like the same Anyyav and Kukku
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aamir18

I agree to this point 100%.


Rachel (I believe that's your name, forgive me if I'm wrong), this is not related to TB, but it is my ultimate and complete DREAM to see Barun and Sanaya act in a film based on Mirage. Call me crazy, but it's my actual tween phangurl fantasy. If I, ever for any reason, become a film director, I will be coming to you first to ask about your FF because it DESERVES that platform. 😊

LOL. Sorry for change in topic, but I had to let you know 😆


Please do a movie of it, and relase it also in Sweden I will watch first day first show!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
words are failing to describe this update...
a sense of extreme happiness am feeling in my heart after reading this...
i dint expect this confession ll be so soon...
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"Be mine, Khushi. Be, mine forever."

"I'm always yours, Arnav. Always."

i would term these two lines are EPIC LINES of this FF...

these two lines are enough...
my heart is sinking in merry...

get us an update soon...:)


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Posted: 12 years ago
Bindaas update di 👏
Loved rearing it 😊

"Be mine, Khushi. Be, mine forever."

"I'm always yours, Arnav. Always."

Loved these lines.. they gave me goosebumps 😃

Fantshhtic.n.

Who was that monster?
Who is this uncke.Rob?
Was it uncle Rob? That monster? Eh?

I love Ranvijay ;)

maza agaya padh ke :)

I won't sayy update soon. 😃

Tc sissy.. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Here Im dedicating the song again

I just love this son it suits with current scenario of FFs I read esp trampled butterfly

"Be mine, Khushi. Be, mine forever."

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte

Tere bina kya wajood mera

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge

Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Kyunki tum hi ho

Ab tum hi ho

Zindagi ab tum hi ho

Chain bhi, mera dard bhi

Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa

Ik pal door gawara nahi

Tere liye har roz hai jeete

Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi

Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina

Har saans pe naam tera

This prompted me for dedicating this song.

Nothing more to say

such fab update and dunno what gonna happen

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Posted: 12 years ago
Once again an awosome update , so glad to read about there fab date , and Khushi was the one , who asked and planned the date ,fantastic , u go girl , Arnav's q b mine Khushi ,and khushis ans Iam always yours , these dialogues r the highlights of the update , epic , just epic , now about mr Cupid I mean RJ , I am impress , ur a good humenbeing with golden heart , thank u so much for bringing them close , I missed dadi in this chapter ,once again thanks alot , dear writter for creating this epic love story for us , now patiently waiting for my next dose of addiction

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