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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nrithyao

awesome update
maanvi was so cute here
loved her
please continue soon


thanks...
I will updated today...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pranganga

nice.
manvi and her antics are always sweet.
hope there is no problem.
anyway u take the story very interestingly.
thanks for the update.
next update?


thank u dear...
I will updated today...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

Awesome..! Waiting for their shopping...:)


thanks...
U get that part today...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Purufk

Superb dear...
Loved virmaan convo in car...
There love nd writing awesome...
Like to saw new twist soon...
Updated soon dear...


thank u...
I will updated tonight...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanabestfan

when will u update plz tell me


i will updated today dear... May be double one...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjana24

update soon

and plz pm me for this.


yeah...
I will updated today...
Nd
again for pm... Plz meet to Sweets1126...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for long wait...
Update in some time...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanabestfan

aur kitna time lo gi...waiting for ur update


sorry... My net was not working...
I m trying...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-159
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ONe nd half hour passed but still virmaan in mall..they of course done with there shopping bcz virat know more shopping was not good for maanvi so he makes everything little fast nd make every shopping easily..
He bring one man with them for hold one bag which contain her water which he always kept with him from house..her juice bottles which also he made up from house..he makes her drink juice every half hour which makes embarrassed in front of peoples in shop but who cares..he just want to care her..that man was one of worker of mall which he bring from talk with manager..
In ladies clothes area..
Virat makes her sit on chair starts looking dresses for her..maanvi looking at him surprisely nd shockingly..he took every dress from ward which he likes..maanvi just amazed by his speed..but also worried with his action..
M-virattt..
But he didn't hear her bcz he was busy with shopping..
M-irritately-virat..she call him loudly..
V-hearing her loud call imigeatly turn nd rush near her..place his one hand on her solder nd one on her stomach-panick-maanvi..kya hua?..pain ho raha hai?
M-hit him on his Hand on her stomach..
V-ouch..gve her confusing look..maanvi..
M-kya maanvi?..virat paheli baat main bilkul thik humar dusri baat tum kar kya rahe ho?
V-agr thik ho to chillai kyu?..aur kya kar raha humar se kya matlab hai?..tumhare liye dresses le raha hu..he explain
M-main chillai kyuki tum meri baat nahi sun rahe the..aur ye to mujhe bhi dikh raha hai ki tum dresses le rahe ho lekin ase?
V-haa to?..tumhari tarah mere liye sirf red carpet outfit lene k liye adha ghanta lagau?..maanvi hum pichle dedh ghante se shopping kar rahe hai aur Hume ghar jaldi jana hai..
M-to kya uske liye puri shop kharid lo ge?..virat tum pahele hi do pairs sues leke ki jagah 6 pairs le chuke ho mere liye aur ab yaha bhi?
V-haa to?..tum un 6 me se koi choice nahi kar pa rahi thi..
M-kyuki sabhi achchi thi..
V-correct to Maine sabhi kharid li that's it..nd again he walked towards clothes nd states looking for dresses..
M-virat..main kya karu tumhara?..she said irritately..
He just smile..
V-to shopkeeper lady-kitne dresses hua?
Lady-sir 27...
Hearing this maanvi's eyes got wide..
V-nice..ye teen aur complete 30...he gve her another 3 dresses nd walked towards counter where maanvi sitting on chair..
M-as he come near-virat pagal ho gaye ho?..ya apni aur do biwi o ke liye dresses le rahe ho?
V-shock-kya?
M-aur nahi to kya?..30 dresses pagal ho?..ek to mujhe choose nahi karne rahe aur pata nahi kya kya le rakha hai aur woh bhi itne sare?
V-smile-maanvi paheli baat ye sabhi tumhare liye hai..kuch size abhi k liye aur kuch tumhe next months se fit ho jayenge aur nahi hua to hum dusre le lenga..
M-virat..
V-cut her-let me complete..aur mujhe tumhare liye Jo bhi achche lage Maine sab utha liye..tumhare choose karne ka time nahi hai..baby thak gaya hoga..so no more decisions..
M-make cute angry face..
Other persons nd working staff of shop giggling at there antics from starting..how cute couple..
Lady-sir bill..
V-yeah..my card..nd he gve her his card for clear bills..
M-aur udao paise..said cutly in anger..
V-smile nd looked at her-tumhare liye hi kamata hu..aur waise bhi ek baar meri princess aa gai phir tumhe kon puchne vala hai..he teas her..
M-open her mouth in o shape-mat puchne kyuki woh prinsecc nahi mera rockstar hoga..tab Hume bhi tumhari koi jarurat nahi padegi..she said angrily nd cross her hands against her chest nd looked away..
V-smile nd come near to her ear-agr meri jarurat nahi hoti to ye bhi nahi hota..he said in low husky voice..
Hearing this maanvi imigeatly looked at with with confusion..he indicate her towards her tummy with his eyes nd smirked..
She get his point nd pussed him back with blushing nd smiling..her whole anger melted with his one try..
Virat clear all bills nd told that man which walking with him to put all those shopping bags in his car nd took keys from guard..
After that he took maanvi with him nd walk out from shop..
Like ideal couple..he holding her one hand with engaginghis fingers with her..she hugging his that hand with her free hand resting her head on his solder..both continuing there random talks nd fights on small small things..but suddenly maanvi stop..
V-looking at her-maanvi kya hua?..ruk kyu gai?
M-looked at him-virat mujhe ice-cream khani hai..
V-ice-cream?
M-haa..woh..pointing towards ice-cream corner..with cute face
V-bilkul bhi nahi..
M-ice-cream khani hai plz..make cute face..
V-maanvi shardi ho jayegi..already thand shuru ho gai hai..
M-make cute puppy face-plz..just half..
V-maanvi..
M-plz plz plz..
V-achchha thik hai main ghar pe tarun se kahe dunga woh bana dega..chalo..
M-nahi..woh kab banayega main kab khaungi?..mujhe abhi khani hai..chalte hai na..plz..
V-looked at her helplessly..how can he say no to him bt he didn't want her to eat this-maanvi plz samajho..
M-make sad puppy face..he saw water come in her eyes..
V-before they turned into tears-ok ok..stop..
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continue..
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PART-160
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V-before water of ere eyes turned into tears imigeatly-ok ok stop..chalte hai..jo khana hai kha lo..chaho to mujhe khalo..
M-smile widly like maanvi's style..water of her eyes which before some seconds abt to turned into tears now sparking in her eyes-nahi..abhi k liye sirf ice-cream..said like 5 years old kid..
V-shook his head on her drama nd walked towards ice-cream area..he make sit on corner table nd go for bring ice-cream for her..
V-placing ice-cream in front of her-ye lo..kro apni jid puri..nd sit in front of chair..
Maanvi didn't gve attention on his sensation nd stats eating her ice-cream like kid..
V-shook his head-kitna drama karti ho..hope meri princess tum pe na jaye..
M-hahaha..don't worry..asa nahi hoga kyuki ye princess nahi hai..still concentrating on her ice-cream..without looking at him.
V-bada pata hai tumhe..ab jaldi se ice-cream khtm karo bina baat ke..hum already late ho rahe hai..
M-humm..saying with eating..
He just shook his head nd rolled his eyes towards his watch...suddenly he get shock..of course from maanvi..
M-shout-virat..
V-imigeatly looked at her-kya hua?
M-doll?
V-confuse-doll?..maanvi ab tumhe bhi chahiye?..ye bahot ho raha hai ab..he said little irritately..
M-virat..main khud tumse kaheti raheti hu ki baby girl nahi boy hoga..phir main kyu doll mangungi?
V-to?
M-sss...mere over reacted pati Sara mall to khrid liya lekin subah Jo aliey ko promis kiya tha..uska kya?..uski doll?
V-oh..
M-oh..kya?..chalo uske liye doll lete hai..woh wait kar rahi hogi..she said hurriedly nd abt to stood up but he stop her nd make her sit again..
V-maanvi..shant..tum yahi baitho main dall le ke ata hu..
M-lekin..
V-maanvi..?..aaj k liye already bahot stress de chuki ho tum apni body pe..chup chap yaha baitho aur apni ice-cream karo..mere paise gaye hai isme..
M-make face..
V-achchha baba sorry..lekin plz..tum yahi baitho..dekho tumhare piche hi ek toy shop hai main 2 min me doll le ke aa jaunga ok..
M-ok..
V-smile nd just take 2 steps when she call him..
M-virat..
V-turned towards her..
M-woh doll
v-ke saath saath adi k liye bhi kuch le ana right?..complete her sentence..
M-smile nd shook her head in yes..
V-tumhare ladle ko kaise bhool sakta hu?..bas abhi aya..kahi jana mat vaha se dekh raha hu aur no more ice-cream..sirf ise khtm karlo..
M-nodded in yes-yes boss..she said dramatically..
V-shook his head-nahi sudhregi..-main abhi aya..nd he walked towards toy shop..
Maanvi smile nd turned back to her icecream..
Here virat entered in shop nd directly walked towards doll area nd choose one beautifull doll nd walked towards games zone..he know adi likes robots so he took one remoteic Robert for him nd walked towards counter which was near to glass wall..he come there nd looked at maanvi who enjoying her ice-cream nd her back facing him..he shook his head ..he heard voice for bills..he gve his card to boy nd again check for maanvi..still smile on his face..he again shook his head as he saw her playing with one kid of nearest table..he shook his head in this he saw some small stuff of small babys..means months old babys..he just looking at stuffs when again that boy come with his toys nd his card..
B-sir ur card nd toys..
Virat turned nd took bags from him nd his card..
V-smile-thank..he abt to complete but stop as he realize something..he again turned back nd looked at that direction where he saw him..his eyes fixed in shock..he imigeatly move his gaze towards maanvi who stood near table with still talking with that kid..he get shock nd worried at the same time nd most important fear raised inside him..he again looked at that direction..
V-whisper-jaiswaal..he can see that he looking at maanvi directly..
He hurriedly move from there nd come out from shop nd reached at area where he stood before minute..he found no one there..ne hurriedly rush at that spot..they r on 3rd floor..he moved his eyes here nd there for searching him nd found him walked out from mall..he felt something wrong..he imigeatly turned towards ice-cream shop for maanvi but she was not there..he got worried..he imigeatly rush towards her table nd starts looking here nd there worriedly..suddenly he feel her hand on his solder..
M-virat..
V-imigeatly turned towards her..take relief breath-kaha thi tum?..kaha tha na ki yahi rukna..he said angrily..
M-confusingly..sawing him ice-cream bag-main to bas ice-cream
V-cut her-ice-cream?..abhi bhi tumhe ice-cream khani hai?
M-more confuse-virat achanak se ase kyu behave kar rahe ho?
V-tum childish behave kar sakti ho main tumhe samaza bhi nahi sakta?..he still worried which comes out as anger..
M-her eyes get teary..looked down..didn't want to create drama in public bcz she know here people know him as rockstar..control on her tears nd anger..
V-control on his anger nd want to come out from there imigeatly..
V-hold her wrist-chalo ab yaha se..hum already late ho chuke hai..
He said with low voice but still sounds angry..she silently follow him towards car..
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continue..
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago

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