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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pranganga

wow, a breath taking pre cap
waiting eagerly for the update
soon plz


thanks...
I updated tonight... Atlest try...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jia123sagar

interesting precap

plz cont soon


thanks...
Try for tonight..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yaminnthida

Awesome precap khushi :D haww jaiswaal😲😲waiting for the update!!


thank u...
I will try for tonight...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaia99

i read part 156 and 157 love the family moment very much.viren was so caring for manvi.manvi had a nightmare,hope this not happen.precap OMG two villan are back.hope they don't harm manvi or the child and virat also.


thank u dear...
Nd lets see what happen...
Try to nomore harm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jannat89

awesome precap khushi
Waiting 4 update


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Try to soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

<font color="#FF66CC" size="2">Return of Jaiswal and RK!!! Interesting twist Khushi!! Waiting for the update :)
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Try for tonight...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pink1

nice precap so jaiswal and rk both came back
in there life update soon


thanks...
I will try to update tonight.,.,.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry sorry sorry...
I said i updated last night but i didn't get time...
But tonight after dinner i surly updated...
Sorry again...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-158
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VIrat takes maanvi with him to studio nd spend whole day with her..bcz of his new year concerts rehearsals he didn't get more time with her from last few days..so today he cover up all that missing times..whole day he makes her with him..in cabin..in recording room nd meetings also..she can also seen his concern nd care..his eyes never left her even not during his work..some times she get busy with her own antics bt he still caring nd loving towards her..
Its almost 5 in evening nd they r driving back towards home..as her pregnancy virat drives slowly nd smoothly..he know she was 4th month pregnant nd most important she has to oprate after 5 days..this was 2nd time her treatment going on as doc told him..its necessary for the growth of the baby..
He is driving car nd looking at her in between who looking down nd crassing her tummy with her hands nd smiling..from now days he saw changes in her behavior..like normal pregnancy her mood also changed nd her antics also..now she is not talking from whole journey where she always talking to much..
He smile nd shook his head..
V-fake expression-karlo karlo aur pyar karlo..ab hum to dur dur tak nahi hai..
M-hearing this she imigeatly looked at him with confusion-kya hua?
V-kya hua?..mujhe nahi tumhe hua hai..ya phir Jo hone vala hai uski vajeh se ab pahele jaisa kuch nahi ho raha..
M-confuse-virat..kya bol rahe ho?..hone vala hai..ho nahi raha..she said irritately
V-aur nahi to kya?..dekho na abhi Jo hua bhi nahi hai..means humari princess abhi is duniya me aai bhi nahi hai..use tum itni priority de rahi ho..aur pahele jab hum driving pe jate the tum humesha mere hath ko hug karke baith ti thi..lekin ab asa kuch nahi hota..he said teasingly..
M-smile nd understand what he was talking abt-achchha?..looking at him-paheli baat ye princess nahi junior rockstar hoga..means junior virat..come close to him nd hug his one hand..placed her head on his solder-aur dusri baat..papa ko jealously ho rahi hai..she said with teasing tone..
V-haa to nahi hogi..he said with fake anger..par koi baat nahi jab prinsecc ayegi to hum dono team up karlenge..abhi to main kuch nahi kar sakta Lekin uske ate hi woh apne papa k pass hi rahegi..tab dekhta hu kon jealous hota hai..
M-looked at him-in ur dreams..aur waise bhi ye prinsecc nahi rockstar hai..mera junior virat..she said happily..
V-nahi..princess hi hogi..mujhe pata hai..
M-tum kaise kahe sakte ho?..mujh me hai to mujhe pata hoga na?..aur mujhe pata hai ki ye mumma's boy hai..smiled
v-are to kya hua?..agr tum use conceive kar rahi ho..mera bhi to half contribution hai..he said without any shame nd abt to Leaned towards her bt she stopped him..
M-pussed him back-shut up virat..kuch bhi kahi bhi?..driving pe dhyan do..
V-looking front-ok ok..btw ye to batao itni Der se kya soch rahi thi?
M-kuch khas nahi..actually kuch hai..
V-kya?
M-kal tumhare final rehearsals hai to tum busy hoage..to main soch rahi thi ki Di k saath kal shopping k liye chali jau..
V-get serious-shopping?..pr kyu?..maanvi asi halat me tum shopping pe kaise?..i mean ye bahot hectic ho jayega..aur agr bhabhi aur tum dono shopping pe aoge to kids bhi ghar pr nahi rahenge so bahetar hai ki shopping cancel kardo..he said in one breath..
M-are..ye kya baat hui?..main kyu nahi ja sakti shopping pe?
V-maanvi plz koi bachcho vali jid nahi..concert k baad shopping kar dena..
M-nahi naa virat..mere pass koi kapde nahi concert k liye..
V-maanvi pura cupboard bhara pada hai..
M-lekin ab woh mujhe fit nahi hote virat..aur waise bhi mujhe ab shopping ki bahot jarurat hai..last 3 months se rest hi to kar rahi hu..ab size badh rahi hai..family badh rahi hai to saman bhi to badhega..
She starts her another antics..said all things dramatically way..
M-continue-aur asa to hai nahi tum kuch kamate nahi ho..jo mujhe..apni ek loti wife ko..jo paheli baar pregnant hui hai uske shopping bills pay na kar sake?..after all tum India k number one singer ban chuke ho..
V-shook his head after her drama-aur tum world ki number one drame baaz ho..nd smile
m-ecxitly-matlab me kal shopping pe ja sakti hu?
V-no..
M-make cute sad face-main asa sad puppy vala face banaungi fir bhi nahi?
V-nahi..
M-cute anger-main baat hi nahi krungi tumse..nd looked away..
V-smile-to thik hai..aaj ki shopping cancel..
M-imigeatly looked at him..ecxitly-shopping?..aaj?
V-haa..shocha to tha pr ab tum baat nahi karogi to hum shopping kaise karenge?..so shopping cancel
m-cut him-nahi nahi..karungi naa..Hug his hand..
V-smile nd shook his head-lekin jaise main kahunga waise?
M-yaha bhi shart?..tum thakte nahi?
V-jana hai ya nahi?
M-jana hai naa..waise bhi end me tumhe kaise patana hai mujhe ata hai..she said with playing with his ear noughtily..
V-achchha?..he said with looking at her with same noughty smile..
Both laugh..
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sorry for short..
Next will be double one with precap...
Romance with new track...
Hope u like..
Next update of other story as i get time..
Thank u for likes nd comment..
Manisha 4 pms..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome yaar..
Loved it..
Pleasee continue soon..

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