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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter4>
rey go towards that guy and catches his collar...
guy-abe tu????aur mujhe aise kyu pakad raha hai...
rey-swayam...tu yaha kya kar rahi hai???
giving a playful slap...
swayam-teri hindi kabhi nai sudhragi...mujhe tune male se female bana dia...
aur leave me...us din ke liye abhi tak naaraaz hai aur hona bi chahiye par atleast
publicly zalil toh mat kar...
rey-zaaa...e...wat???
swayam-woh tujhe baad me samjaunga pehle collar chhod...
kria-yes!!mera plan successfull abhi rey ko ek zor ka punch and kria ko mile 500 points...yeep...
back to reyam
rey-i can't leave uss ladki ni bola ki tum usse stare kar rahe ho...
swayam-kaunsi ladki????
rey was standing facing his back to kria.
rey-woh...mere peechee hai red top wali...
dude be carefull she should not know that are looking at her...
swayam sees her...
swayam-dude woh ladki???r u joking rey????
rey-nahiii... im serious...
swayam-woh meri behen hai jiske baare me mene tujhe europe tour mai bataya tha...
rey-usne aisa kyu kia???
swayam-zhagda hua tha kya????
rey-haa...
swayam-aacha abhi pata chala...woh tujhe problem me dal rahi thi...
rey and swayam together-CHICKS!!!!
swayam- ruk ruk ek plan hai...
rey-kya???
swayam-tu mere sath chal...
rey and swayam go together...
kria-yeh log kaha ja rahe hai????
rey-apne muh pe sauce laga de...
swayam-thik he...
rey takes swayam to kria...
rey-aur ladki ko tang karegi toh pair tod dunga...
swayam was acting that he was hurt realy bad by rey...
kria-aapne yeh kya kia???
rey-u said that he was troubling u ...so i thought him a lesson...
thanks bolne ki zarurat nahi hai...
kria-tumhe pata bhi hai yeh kaun he???
chalo isse hospital leke jana padega...
swayam-fruitjam tumne mere sath aisa kyu kia?????
kriya-isse hospital leke chalo...
rey and swayam start laughing...
kria-tum dono has kyu rahe ho???
zoozoo tume bohot lagi hai chalo hospital...
rey takes sauce from swayams face...
rey-yummmy...par chili wala lete toh aur aacha hota...
kria-sheee...yeh sab kya ho raha hai????
swayam-meri pyari fruitjam me rey ko pehle se janta hu...infact woh mera bohot accha dost hai...
aur mujhe yebhi pata hai ki tumne use kyu bheja,...
kria-owww... woh...april fool's day...
swayam and rey-kya?????
rey-miss attitude admit ki tum fail ho gai...apne so called plann me...
kria-ok!!!i admit...
swayam-chalo ghar chalte hai... car nai hai... taxi waha khadi hai...
kria-car kaha gai???
swayam-long story...
kria goes...
swayam-rey tu kaha jane wala hai...cum at my home...
rey-nai mujhe thoda kaam hai...phir kavi...
swayam-you mean kabhi???
rey-yaa...
swayam-ye le mera phone no...
rey-thanks dude...

rey goes to registration office for dancing beats...
rey-net pe toh yahi addresss tha...
rey-ex cuse me!!!
girl-ya..
rey-is this registration office for db??
girl-yaaa...are u applying for that???
rey-yess...
girl-me too...sath me register karwate hai
rey-cool.btw wats ur name???
girl-sharon and urs???
rey-reyaansh..but u can call me rey...
sharon-nice to meet u...
sharon and rey register the form...
rey-so we will meet in the event...
sharon-yup...bye...
rey-nice to meet u ...bye...
...

we know its really lame story but still
hope u like it...
next update will be soon...😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Yaay idhar bhi first... [:D/]

Aaj meri Lottery hai...😉
Awesum update...👏

Bechari Kriya ka chop ho gaya...😆

Do cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awesome updates...
continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Awesome update 😊
Kria's plan backfired on herself only 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
sorry for the late comment ... i read your all the chapter together...
wow!!!!!!! it amazing story i would love to read more... continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
AWESOME

kria ka plan ulta

rey-sharon too met

update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Awesome uodate...

Luvd it...

Dat kreyam scence was mast...

Bechari kriya ka plan fail ho gaya...

Updat doon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38

CHAPTER 5>
at swayam's house...
swayam-toh kaisi thi tumhari journey???
kria-pucho mat zoozoo...reyansh irritated me like hell...
swayam-ohh!!poor girl...waise toh woh bohot aacha insaan hai...
kria-aacha insaan???meri joooti...
swayam-ohk...chalo ab jakar so jao tum thak gai hogi..
kria-yup...good night... umm zoozoo tumne db ke frms bhare kya????
swayam-haa...woh toh kal hi bhare the...
kria-good boy..
swayam-thank you mummy...
they both laugh...
swayam's room-sharon!!!yaar yeh ladki mere dimaag se kyu nai jaa rahi...ohh dude
kya soch raha hai tu...
tuje nindh ki sakht zarurat hai...
rey's father was staying in mumbai so he had his own bunglow...
rey's room..
every thing is on its place...but...
he was admiring the beauty of kria and falls asleep...

NEXT DAY...
sharon-are me toh apni scooty thik karvai hi nahi...
chalo aaj taxi se jana padega...
sharon was standing near the taxi stand...
sharon-taxi rukh kyu nahi hai aaj kal...
...
swayam's house...
swayam-fruitjam tum mere saath aaougi ke akele aaogi????
kria-zoozoo me baad me aati hu...tum jaao...
swayam-thik hai...
swayam-are meri car toh garrage me hi hai...challo aaj duri gaadi leke jani padegi...
how about ferrari????girls pagal ho jayegi college me...
swayam takes the ferrari and leaves...
he sees sharon standing near the taxi stand..
he stops opposite side of sharon...
swayam-yeh chatterbox yaha kya kar rahi hai????
hey!chatterbox...want lift?????
sharon-no thank u me losers ke sath nai behti...
swayam-mujhe loser kaha??? and comes out of his car...
he starts walking towards sharon...
wen suddenly a car comes by the same road...
swayam does not notice the car but sharon does...
sharon catches swayams hand and pulls him away from the road...
both fall down...
sharon on the top of swayam...llhh...
swayam-thank you!!!
sharon-it's ok...
they both stand up...
swayam-do u want lift???
sharon-no...i will manage...
swayam-plz(puppy face)
sharon-(itne cute se face ko kaun na bol sakta hai)ok!!!
swayam opens the door for sharon...
sharon sits besides swayam...
swayam driving...
swayam-aaj pehli baar ek ladki ko ek ladke ki jaan bachate dekha...
tum toh superwoman nikli...
both laugh...
swayam-meri car me bethne ke liye girls taras jaati hai...
tum apne apko lucky mano...
sharon-ladkiya tumhare sath baithne ke liye tarasti hai???/
breaking news...
swayam-sach mai...
sharon-ok!!mene maan liya
swayam-tum itni bhi buri nahi ho...
sharon-tum bhi...lo college aa gaya plz roko car ko...
swayam-kyu???
sharon-tum mere sath college jaoge toh tumahri repo. kharab hogayegi...
i think mujhe idhar hi utarna chahie..
swayam-what rubbish sab batte karte hai toh karne do mujhe farak nahi padta...
sharon-par mujhe padta hai...bye..
swayam-ajeeb hai yeh ladki...sab mere sath ane ke liye kya kya karte hai aur yeh...
...
kria- chal aaj tera ST.LOIUS...college me first day hai...
sab pe apna "k"effect chalana hai...
...
rey-chalo ur first day at st.loius...
rey comes out from his car...
every girl was watchin rey...
and the boys too...because they were jelous of him...
girl1-look at him...gosh...he is so hot...
girl2-waah swayam ko competition dene aa gaya...he is damm hansome...
girl3-use dance karna aata hai kya???
look at his car black porsche...
...
in college...
swayam and kriya were walking...
and rey was busy with mobile...
kria and rey both dash...
kria was in rey's arms...tightly holding his shirt with closed eyes...
llhh...
kria opens eyes...
kria gets up...
kria-universeji???r u kidding????
rey-wth...tum yaha kya kar rahe ho...
kria-yeh mera college hai...
rey-yeh tumahara college nai haii trustees ka hai...
swayam-rey hellow(wanting to stop fight)
kriyaansh-ek min...
rey-toh hum kaha the...comes little closer...
kria-aap toh mere peeche aise padh gaye ho jaise ek bachha chocolate ke liye apni
mom ke peeche padta hai...
swayam-kriaexample toh acha do...
rey-why r you taking her side...tu mera friend hai..
kria-use pehle mera bhai hai...
swayam-me kisi ki side nai le raha hu...
kria-tumhe pata hai tum ek idot,moron,senseless person ho...
rey-hawww...meri esi insult me bardashit(bardasshat)nahi kar sakata..
swayam-excuse me- bardis... wat???
kria-dialouge bolna nahi aata toh bigado mat...
rey-watever...
sharon sees both of them fighting...
swayam-thank god...
swayam goes towards sharon...
swayam holds her...
swayam-sharon inn dono ko chup karvane me meri madat karo plzzz...
sharon-ok...
swayam-bhagwan ne mujhe kal in dono ka trailer dikhaya tha lagta hai aaj puri
picture dekhni padegi...
sharon-kya????
swayam-nothing...
sharon-rey!listen...
sharon-kria tum yaha???
kria-hey shari tum yaha kya kar rahi ho...
sharon-apna career aur kya???
kria-chal canteen chalte hai...
sharon and kria leave..
rey and swayam are totally shocked...the look at each other...
rey-abhi toh jhangli billi thi aur ab shanti kaise ho gai???
swayam-u mean shant???
in ladkio ko koi nai samaj sakta...
swayam and rey together-CHICKS!!!
swayam and rey walks together
swayam-tu yaha kiske liye aaya???
rey-dance offcourse..
swayam-aur teri relationship kaise chal rahi hai sonia ke sath?????
...
who is sonia??? confused...aage aage dekho hota hai kya???
next chapter will be coming soon...
jhoota chappals welcome...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Amazing update ...😊
rey kriya ki jangli billi wali fight mast thi...🤣
luvd it...❤️
thnx 4 de pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
great it is looking forward to read more... continue soon and pm me...

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