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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Nice CS. . . . .
Waiting 4 d 1st part. .update. . . .
Update super-soon . . .
And do pm me. .

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archu395

@archu395

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awesome... pm me whn u continue...:-)

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payal

@.vruShan_rocks.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

thank you for apriciating our work...

my name is payal...

and here is the fist part

chapter 1>

swayam-toh fruitjam tum kal anewali ho na?????
kria-ha ha zoozoo pakka...mujhe toh salman aur ranbir se milna hai..
swayam-ha ha mil lena aur ek kam karna unlogo ke ghar pe reh jana...
kria- tumhare sath kaun rehna chahega...
swayam-bohot log he jo mere sath rehna chahte hai...mai bohot famous hu...
kria-woh toh aake dekhungi ke kaunsi pagal ladkiya hai jo ek cartoon k sath rehna chahegi...
swayam-chal bye see u tomorow fruitjam...
kria-bye zoozoo...

at australia airport...
rey's mom-beta passport le liya na??????aur khana kha lena!careful rehna!
rey-mom! me choti bachaaa nai hu!
rey's mom-beta choti nai chota!kya hoga tera india me?
rey- its the same...

flight announcement

rey-mom bye!its tym for my flight!take care!
gives hug to his mom and goes to checking area...
...
in MUMBAI...
alarm clock is ringing since 15 min.
sharon-ye alarm kyu itna jaldi baj raha hai...
ramu kaka-sharon baby utho 8 baj gaye hai college start hone me sirf aadha ghanta baki hai...
sharon -itni jaldi 8 baj gaye aap ne mujhe pehle kyu nai bataya
college ka first day aur mai late kaise bhi nai ho sakti!!!!!!!!!
...
airport
kria-late ho gai me universeji bhag kria bhag...
she hurriedly runs toward the checking counter and dashes wid rey...llhh (kr bg tune)
kria-dekh ke nai chal sakte u moron
rey-oh!hello mene tumhe dhaka nahi mari tum mere se takraya...
kria started to laugh!!
rey-don't laugh ...u first dashed with me aur ab laughing at me...crazy girl!!!
kria-crazy kise kaha galti tumahari he pehle aise beech me khade rehte ho aur funny si hindi bolte ho
rey-wateverrr!!!i dont want to spoil my day by talking to u...
kria-din toh mera kharab ho gaya par kya kare meri phooti kismat
mujhe bi aapse baat karne me interst nai hai...

they both go to check in...
...
in MUMBAI
sharon in her scooty
sharon-sirf 5 min baki hai plz god mujhe late mat hone dena...
she reaches the parking lot and is about to park her scooty when suddenly swayam parks his car in that area...
sharon-abhi ye kaun pagal hai
she knocks at the window...llhh(ss bg tune)
swayam-kya hua sweetheart?
sharon-pehli baat me tumahari swthrt nai hu aur doosri baat yeh car parking area nai he...
swayam-kya farak padta hai mai jaha chahu apni car park kar sakta hu...
sharon-kyu yeh college tumhari hai?
swayam-hai toh nahi par mere dad iss college k trustee hai...
sharon-ohhh...tumhare dad iss college ke trustee hai na tum nahi...
toh apna ghamand apne pass hi rakho...aur apni car hatalo agar pyari hai toh...
swayam-kya karlogi tum????u low standard girl...
sharon-mera fight karneka mood abhi nai hai and me class ke liye late ho rahi hu...
aur me kya karungi uske liye just wait and watch...

...

sooo
kaisa hai?joota chappals are welcome!!!😊
next update wil be soon!!!😃

pms will be sent later...😳

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Princess_Devil

@Princess_Devil

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

res
unres
awesome update...
loved kriyam convo...
kriyaansh b na first meet mai hi fight...
rey's hindi weak asusal😆
loved swayam's attitude...
dis is somethng different...
waiting for more swaron n kriyaansh...
thnx fr d pm...
P.S. dear send d link in d pm not d update so dat v can comment here easily

Edited by nikkreyarshafan - 12 years ago

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Sonia

@princessSonia

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Aww wat an update dears...👏👏

Loved it...👍🏼

It reminded me of our Old D3 days...😭

Kriyaansh bhi na First meeting mein

hi Laad rahe hai as usual...😆

N rey's Weak hindi Ufff...🤣

Koi toh sikhao isse Hindi bolna...😆

jzz joking

do cont soon..

n plz do pm me...

i will send both u of buddy request

do accept it...

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

1St meeting me hi llhh ke sath fight
not bad
nice update

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archu395

@archu395

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Superb... hehe rey's hindi lol...

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Awesome update 😊

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payal

@.vruShan_rocks.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

chapter 2>
sharon in the class-thank god!sir ab tak nai aaye warna kharab impression padti uss jerk ke wajahse...
swayam also comes in the class-sees sharon...llhh...
sir comes inside the class
sir-good morning everyone...so you r the new student (turning towards sharon)
what's ur name?
sharon-(proudly) sharon rai prakash...
swayam-(thinking)toh iss chatterbox ka naam sharon h...
class gets over...
in canteen...
sharon goes and gets a cup of coffee...
sharon turns and spills the coffee on swayam's shirt...
swayam-brand new shirt kharidi thi aur tumne bigad di u...
sharon-oh... sorry(baby face)adhi kharab hui hai me puri kharab kar deti hu...
throws the remaining coffee on swayam...
swayam-wat the hell...r u mad???
sharon-abhi tak toh nai par tumhare saath rahungi toh me pakka pagal ban jaungi...u dumbo...
swayam-u know wat... me kaun hu...
sharon-nai pata hai aur pata karna bhi nai hai...
girl1-look us ladki ki itni himmat k usne swayam k sath panga liya...
girl2-swayam ise chhodega nai...
sharon moves to leave but slips because of the coffee...
swayam holds her...llhh...(swaron bg)
sharon-how dare you hold me...mere kapde kharab ho gaye...
swayam-nai pakadna chahie tha toh lo chhod deta hu...
sharon falls down...
everyone in the canteen was laughing...
sharon gets up and leaves the canteen...
...
inside plane-
rey ki seat kria ke seat se age wali thi...
kria is listening the music...and rey is putting lugagge inside lugagge box suddenly perfume bottle felled on kria's head...
rey-sorrysorry...
kria-(without seeing rey)its ok...
she luks up and sees rey
rey-you!!!!
kria-tum!!!
llhh...(kr bg)
their voice makes everyone in the plane shock!!!
rey to everyone-sorry sorry...
kria-tum mere peecha kyu kar rahe ho?
rey-tumhara peecha kaun karni chahegi...
kria-tum aur tumhari hindi!!!mujhe tumse baat nai karni par tum english me baat kar sakte ho ...
rey-you miss.atitude...
kria-me aur miss attitude?????
(coming closer to kria just 4-5 inches away)
rey-itni bholi mat bano...perfume ke badle it would be better if the whole bag had fallen on your head...
apna mouth toh close rakti...
kria-nautanki!!!!
rey -nautanki???wat's that??????
kria-joh tum abhi kar rahe ho..dramaa...
rey-god mujhe isse bachao...
just then the flight attendent makes an annoucement ...
the plane is about to takeoff plz be seated and puton ur seat belts.thankyou..
rey-waah kya timing hai god...ise chup karva di...
kria- you know wat...
air hostress-maam plz take ur seat...
rey and kria sit down on ur seat...
...
precap-reyam fight...
swaron ride and kriyaansh dance... ..
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hope you like it...😊
next part on the way
will be updating soon...😳.