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Originally posted by: liyaliya

superb

luved rinni - rey bond

nd

romance

jaldi update karo

Originally posted by: flicka

loved the second chapter it was amazing

so what is rey upto😳

abd swayam is feeling bhai type possessive han😆

update soon

Originally posted by: aditipandey.adi

awesum story ..

read it 2day .. n itz superb .. 👏

luvd d cs .. 👍🏼

Chapter 1

rey n rinni momentz .. cute bro n sis .. 😳 ..

n rey .. ladke ko itna maara ki hospital me dalva dia .. 😆

shaani share a gr8 bond .. ❤️

sharey wer so cute .. 😃.. swayam jealous .. 😆

Chapter 2

luvd rey n rinni scenez .. specially dat dress wala prt .. rey possesive bhai .. 👍🏼

taarey meet .. amazng .. 👍🏼

swayam ko toh abhi pta bhi ni chala dat taani uski behen h .. phir bhi itni possesiveness .. 😆 ..

jb pta chlega toh pta ni kya krega ... 🤣

precp iz intrstng .. really vry excytd 2 c sharey jealous .. 😆 .. n taayam walk .. 😃

update soon ..

thank u 4 d pm .. 😊

Originally posted by: nis_n

Wow yaar

amazing Update!!!!

rey and rinni scene was cute...

hmm jealous sharon

Update Soon

already waiting for next part

Originally posted by: vijichandran

awesome story...

lovd bth parts a lot..

frst part wt lot of rey n rinni ws so gud...

luvd the possessvnss of rey for his sis n he teasing rinni...

n second chaptr lovd the unknwn taayam bond...

plz updtae soon

Originally posted by: CharMarfan1

LUVED THE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!😊

IT WAS SUPERDUPERAWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!😊

PLEASE UPDATE SOON.😃

Originally posted by: 8JSmileyFace8J

i just read both of your updates and sorry for being late..

really interesting concept!!!

i loved bro-sis jodi of rinni and rey!!

they are really cute!!!

that will be something definitely interesting to read!!!

i also wanna see taayam's story unfold too!!

UPDATE SOON!!!

Originally posted by: lovelypriya

wow super i read all two parts togeather...n i really liked rinni n rey bond sharon jelous...taayam wer super cute...n precap omg plz update soon will be waiting for it...

Originally posted by: tareyfan

it was amazing yaar 👏👏 seriously loving rey n rinni scenes ⭐️⭐️⭐️ n specially jab yeh sab padh rhi thi i was like lol 😆😆 Rey-rinni chipkalli(lizard)

Rinni-ahhh kaha hai!!!!!(she stands on sofa n starts jumping on sofa due to fear ( yeh mere sath bhi ho chuka hai 😆 bt spider ke name se i m really sacred of spiders 😳) n phir yeh Rinni was trying some dress'she came out wearing a really short dress n ask rey

Rinni-bhai how's this dress'achi hai na???

Rey-(looking at her but a little uncomfortable)-kuch zayda he short nai hai

Rinni-that means its perfect I m gonna buy it

Rey-arre' hehe lol 😆😆 Rey-ha wo toh dikh raha hai'..acha chal let's go n have dinner here'let's have pizza today what's say

Rinni-nai

Rey-kyu

Rinni-mai moti(fat) ho jaogi ( yeh saari ladkiyon ki proble hai😆😆) Rey(smiles n hug her)-hey sharon kaise ho

Sh(frustrated)-mar gaye Sharon!!!!!(sh walked out) 🤣 Vic-guys kya jo mai dekh raha ho wo tum log bhi dekh rahe ho

Nil-abbe hamme se koi bhi andha(blind) nai hai toh obviously hum sab dekh rahe hai 🤣 abhi tak swayam ko pata bhi nhi hai ki taniya uski sis hai bt phir bhi itna possesie pata nhi agar pata ho gaya to kya hoga 😛 ab agla part jaldi update karna seriously waiting 4 it 😃😊

Originally posted by: pooja123456

nyc cocnept!
pm me wen u update!