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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaynsgirl

update soon... loved taayam bond ... n taarey😊

thanku so much dear
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CHAPTER-3

OUTSIDE THE CLUB

All were present there except taani n swaron…rey was getting restless to see taani but he couldn't understand y he is behaving like this….

Rinni noticed her bro n went to him n said-bhai????(rey was still lost in his thoughts)

Rinni(shaking rey)-bhai

Rey-ha…ha..ha bol kya hua

Rinni-wahi toh mai poch rahe ho k kya hua apko

Rey-nai mujhe kuch nai hua

Just then taani came wearing a red short dress looking stunning yet simple yet beautiful……rey looked at her n got lost in her beauty

Rinni saw her bro then at taani again at rey then at taani…she was sure something was there in between them or rather rey

Taani-hi guys

Before rey could anything bharat comes forward n said-taani tu ek dum dhaso lag rahe hai

Taani smile n rey glares at bharat

Just then swaron enter…sh came out wearing a really nice black dress n sw also wears a black jeans white shirt n a cool black jacket…all looked at them with wide eyes they were looking like a couple

Rey-guys tum log toh directly aane wale the na then yeh outfits???

Sh-ya but I thought lets change our outfit

Sw-ya then she force me to wear this(pointing his outfit) so we went my home n I changed…isliye late bhi ho gaye

Taani-but I must say u look really good

Sw smilies but then he looked at what she wearing n thought kuch zayda he short dress hai…sw concentrate on sh tujhe kya taani joh bhi phene par mai itna uncomfortable kyu ho raha ho….soon he pushed that thought away n compliment taani

Sw-you look beautiful..taani smiles

Sharey looked at them n then at each other n smile forcefully but they were thinking something else-rey thinks( y sw is so nice to taani)…sh thinks(y taani is so nice to sw) now both thinks (I m totally crazy how can I doubt my best friend)

All enter club n as soon as sharey enter

DJ-guys sharey r in the house so let's dance!!!

Taani(confused)asked sw-what's sharey???

Sw-sharey as in Sharon n rey

Taani-wow that's nice

Rey smile n puts his hand out n sh holds his hand n both moved to dance floor..

Sw was sitting near the bar watching sharey dance hand in hand…soon all join them at dance floor except taani…taani was smiling throughout watching bestfreinds dancing together when she saw sw sitting near bar n watching sharey…an immense amount of jealousy could be seen in his eyes…she went to him

Taani(smile)-hey

Sw(smile)-hey

Taani(sitting beside him)-so jealous???

Sw(couldn't understand)-sorry…

Taani-I said feeling jealous

Sw-no y I would be jealous. Sh n rey r best friends since childhood n they always dance here so y would I be jealous

Taani-really!!!! But I haven't mentioned sh n rey…

Sw closed his eyes because he was caught by taani n taani had a winning smile on her face

Taani-so I guess I was right

Sw-about what

Taani-u like sh

Sw smiles n blushes

Taani-u like her or u love her

Sw-I don't kow

Taani-really!!! Like really u don't know!!!!

Sw (smiles n said)-can we go out 4 a walk n talk about it

Taani-ya ofcourse waise bhi I don't like this club atmosphere

Sw-good even I don't like it

Taani-so let's go but hamare friends unhe kon bataega k hum bahar hai

Sw-oh that u don't worry I'll manage that tum chalo mai aata ho

Taani starts moving ahead n sw turns to bar tendor n said

Sw-hey dude can u do me a favor

Guy-yes sir

Sw-u saw us right with the gang n sharey….so when they come back can u plz tell them I m out for a walk with that girl(pointing taani)

Guy-sure sir …….n by the way sir all the best that girl is really hot n sexy(the guy thought taani is sw's gf)

This comment made sw furious he was like really mad on the guy but he controlled himself n said-dude u better do ur own job ok n next time u better not talk anything rubbish about that girl otherwise u won't be able to walk…get it

Guy-sorry sir

Sw went out n saw taani waiting 4 him….they started walking

Taani-so now tell u like her or u love her

Sw-I don't know

Taani-seriously!!!!...ok tell me truly don't lie to me….u were jealous from rey right??

Sw-ahmmm

Taani-come on say it

Sw-ahmmm yes kind of

Taani-that means u love her

Sw-ok fine I admit that I love her but u know what its strange

Taani-what???

Sw-see rey is my best buddy still I never accepted infront of him that I love sh but I don't know y I m accepting infront of u…I guess I have this comfort level with u

Taani-oh my god!!!! U love sh let's go n tell her

Sw-what!!! No no no not now I don't know how to tell her

Taani-ok in that case I'll help u ok

Sw-ok

Taani-n I think tumhe rey ko bata dena chahiye wo tumhara best buddy hai

Sw-hmmm I guess u r right

Taani-can I confess something

Sw-ya sure

Taani-u know its really strange we meet today only but I feel really secure with u

Sw smiles-that's good…u can tell me if u have any prob ok

Taani-ok…they were still walking n talking about random things when both noticed some street guys staring at taani up n down with a disgusting look….sw felt an Immense amount of anger towards them he so wanted to teach them lesson he moved a bit forward but taani hold him n tell him let's leave

Sw still looking at those guys he didn't like the way they were looking at taani because she was wearing a really short dress….so he took off his jacket n made taani wear it…taani understood n said nothing n both moved back to club

As soon as sharey saw taayam coming back n taani wearing sw's jacket both said it at same time

Sharey-WHAT THE HELL!!!

Both looked at each other n then look here n there to avoid each other's graze

Vic-taani y r u wearing sw's jacket

Rey-exactly

Nil-guys is everything ok

Sw(knowing rey's nature he didn't tell about those guys otherwise rey won't spare them n he didn't want to create a scene)

Sw-ya everything is ok guys its late we should leave

Neha-right sw is neha leaving bye guys

Vic-arre par akele kaise

Neha-y u caring now 4 neha

Vic-par neha tum akele kaise jaoge mai tumhe aise skele nai chod sakta

Neha(with tears in her eyes)-tum toh already mujhe chod chuke ho Vicky aur kitna chodoge…

She left n simmi-arre neha I'll drop u….aashi, simmi n neha left

Boys also left with Vicky…now only taarey n swaron n rinni was left

Taani-ok guys it was fun so I'll see u in collage bye gn

Before rey could ask her to drop her…sh said

Sh-what see u in collage…madam u r coming with me at my house tonight

Taani-nai sh its late n

Sh-no I m not gonna listen u waise bhi tu mere saath nai rheh rahe hai….aaj toh ghar chal plzzz

Taani-ok fine lets go…both left

Reyam looked at each other n thought –shit!!! These girls…rey thinks-mujhe taani ko drop karna tha…sw thinks-mujhe sh ko drop karna tha

Rinni looks at them…first s trey then at sw again at rey then at sw…she come between them n said-guys…no response

Rinni taps on both shoulder n said-guys!!!!

Both(come back to senses)-ya

Rinni-shall we leave

Rey-ya…chal sw I'll drop u

Sw-ok

All went home

NEXT DAY IN COLLAGE

Everyone was sitting in canteen having there breakfast….taayam have gone to take there order…all were eating something except rinni she was just having a black coffee…just then rey enters

Rey-god I m dam humgry…guys mai kuch le kar aata ho…he was about to go to counter when he saw rinni having coffee

Rey(suspiciously)-rinni tune breakfast kar liya

Rinni's eyes poped out n all looked at her

Rinni-ha ha bhai kar liya(she lied)

Rinni give signal to all to say yes…all(except amar)-ha rey usne kar liya

But rey was still not satisfied he looked at amar

Amar-nai tiya hai n tubah te bat toffee te hai wo b taclk

All-kya??

Bharat-abbe bol raha hai k nai kiya hai n subah se bas coffee pe hai wo bhi black

Rey looked at rinni who was looking angrily at amar

Rey-rini nai kiya na tune breakfast!!! Tu kuch khate kyu nai hai

Rinni(pouting)-kyuki mai moti ho jaogi

Rey slaps his head n say kya karo mai is ladke ka

Rinni-aur agar moti ho gaye toh achi nai dekhonge

Amar-tum toh hameta achti dekhte ho

All-kya

Bharat-abbe bol raha hai k tum toh hamesha aachi deklhte ho

This made rinni blushed n rey glared at amar

Rey to rinni-bohot ho gaya tera…chal rinni I'll buy u breakfast

Rinni-arre par…..but rey drag her to counter where taayam was standing waiting 4 there order

Rey-bhaiya 2 sandwich with lots of cheese

Rinni-no less cheese

Rey-no lots of cheese

Rinni-I said na less cheese

Rey-n I said lots of cheese…n tumhe mere baat manne parege I m ur big brother ok

Rinni-really!!!! just 10 min older to me(yes guys they were twins n rey was 10 min older to her)

Rey-so bada toh ho na

The waiter got confused what to do n asked-ammm excuse me sir..what should I do lots of cheese or less cheese

Rey- I m the GS of collage so take my words lots of cheese

The waiter went to take order

Rinni-u just wait n watch I'll complain to dad

Rey-really awe my baby sister…i'll also complain to dad about how much u eat n to mom about how much u shop ok my baby sister

Rinni-I hate u…she took her sandwich that waiter brought n asked-kitne paise hue

Rey-arre mai de donga tu ja

Rinni-nai mera sandwich hai mai paise donge kitne paise hue

Waiter-100

Rini gave him money n looked at rey n said-I m not talking to u n left

The waiter was about to took that money but rey took it back n gave 200 for his sandwich also n said-wo mere behan hai use kabhi paise mat lena…I m gonna pay 4 her everytime ok…he left

The whole scene was witnessed by taayam n they had a smile on their face thinking-kash meri behan/bhai abhi mere saath hoti toh mai bhi yahi karte…just then there order come

Taani-kitne paise hue???

Waiter-madam 70

Taani gave him a note of 100…but waiter said-madam change nai hai plz 70 he dejiyeh

Taani-mere pass toh 100 k he note hai saare

Waiter-toh mam aap ek kaam kariye extra cheese dalwa lijeyeh toh 100 ho jayenge

Taani looked at her stomach n murmured-extra cheese!!! Moti ho jaoge

Sw heard it n smile at her innocence n said-chill mere pass change mai pay kar deta ho

Taani-arre par tum kaise

Sw-arre its ok u go I'll pay

Taani leaves n sw pays for both of them n felt happy after paying n thinks-mai kya paagal ho gaya ho maine taanya ka bill pay kiya toh mujhe itne kushi kyu ho rahe hai

Now all were eating when rinni stands up n started going to get water…when she bumps to a guy…both looks at each other n rinni got scared

She tries to leave but the guy blocked her way

Rinni-leave my way arun(his character will be shown later but he is the bad boy of this story)

Arun-what if I don't???

Soon all looked at rinni…all became angry n taani was confused what was going on…rey immediately gets up n moved towards them n all said from behind-rey calm down

Rey goes to them n stands between rinni n arun

He looked at rinni who was hell scared then at arun was still looking at rinni

Rey-(claps his fingers infront of him n said)-idhar dekh kar baat kar

Arun-tujhese kon baat karna chahata hai mai toh rinni..

Before he could say anything rey holds his collar n said-don't u dare to take her name

Rinni(from behind)-bhai chodo use jaane do

Rey leaves his collar but still said-uus din toh jaane diya tha tujhe agli baar meri behan k aas pass bhi dikha na toh tere jaan le longa samjha!!!

Rey leaves from there n rinni follow him

Taani was shocked from his behavior she whispers to sw-yeh kon tha

Sw-wo yeh

Just then bell rings n it was time of their class

Sw-class k baad saath mai lunch karte hai tab batata ho

Huh finally I m done guys do like it n comment plzzz

Note(guys aise chote chote bhai behan k pal dekhana zarori hai sorry can't help it hope u guys like it)

Precap-taayam had lunch together n sw tells who is arun, a cute rinni n rey scenes witnessed by taani,viha dirty argument infront of all, reyam n sharey talk n taarey romantic yet cute scene

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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
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Yay I'm first!!! =)

Amazing update! 😊
Loved this taayam convo... 😊
Taani(smile)-hey

Sw(smile)-hey

Taani(sitting beside him)-so jealous???

Sw(couldn't understand)-sorry…

Taani-I said feeling jealous

Sw-no y I would be jealous. Sh n rey r best friends since childhood n they always dance here so y would I be jealous

Taani-really!!!! But I haven't mentioned sh n rey…

Sw closed his eyes because he was caught by taani n taani had a winning smile on her face

Taani-so I guess I was right

Sw-about what

Taani-u like sh

Sw smiles n blushes

Taani-u like her or u love her

Sw-I don't kow

Taani-really!!! Like really u don't know!!!!

Sw (smiles n said)-can we go out 4 a walk n talk about it

Taani-ya ofcourse waise bhi I don't like this club atmosphere

Sw-good even I don't like it


Loved this it was cute...

Reyam looked at each other n thought –shit!!! These girls…rey thinks-mujhe taani ko drop karna tha…sw thinks-mujhe sh ko drop karna tha

Rinni looks at them…first s trey then at sw again at rey then at sw…she come between them n said-guys…no response

Rinni taps on both shoulder n said-guys!!!!

Both(come back to senses)-ya

Rinni-shall we leave

Rey-ya…chal sw I'll drop u

Sw-ok

Loved this rinni n Rey part! Rey is such a sweet bro!!

Rey-god I m dam humgry…guys mai kuch le kar aata ho…he was about to go to counter when he saw rinni having coffee

Rey(suspiciously)-rinni tune breakfast kar liya

Rinni's eyes poped out n all looked at her

Rinni-ha ha bhai kar liya(she lied)

Rinni give signal to all to say yes…all(except amar)-ha rey usne kar liya

But rey was still not satisfied he looked at amar

Amar-nai tiya hai n tubah te bat toffee te hai wo b taclk

All-kya??

Bharat-abbe bol raha hai k nai kiya hai n subah se bas coffee pe hai wo bhi black

Rey looked at rinni who was looking angrily at amar

Rey-rini nai kiya na tune breakfast!!! Tu kuch khate kyu nai hai

Rinni(pouting)-kyuki mai moti ho jaogi

Rey slaps his head n say kya karo mai is ladke ka

Rinni-aur agar moti ho gaye toh achi nai dekhonge

Amar-tum toh hameta achti dekhte ho

All-kya

Bharat-abbe bol raha hai k tum toh hamesha aachi deklhte ho

This made rinni blushed n rey glared at amar

Rey to rinni-bohot ho gaya tera…chal rinni I'll buy u breakfast

Rinni-arre par…..but rey drag her to counter where taayam was standing waiting 4 there order

Rey-bhaiya 2 sandwich with lots of cheese

Rinni-no less cheese

Rey-no lots of cheese

Rinni-I said na less cheese

Rey-n I said lots of cheese…n tumhe mere baat manne parege I m ur big brother ok

Rinni-really!!!! just 10 min older to me(yes guys they were twins n rey was 10 min older to her)

Rey-so bada toh ho na

The waiter got confused what to do n asked-ammm excuse me sir..what should I do lots of cheese or less cheese

Rey- I m the GS of collage so take my words lots of cheese

The waiter went to take order

Rinni-u just wait n watch I'll complain to dad

Rey-really awe my baby sister…i'll also complain to dad about how much u eat n to mom about how much u shop ok my baby sister

Rinni-I hate u…she took her sandwich that waiter brought n asked-kitne paise hue

Rey-arre mai de donga tu ja

Rinni-nai mera sandwich hai mai paise donge kitne paise hue

Waiter-100

Rini gave him money n looked at rey n said-I m not talking to u n left

The waiter was about to took that money but rey took it back n gave 200 for his sandwich also n said-wo mere behan hai use kabhi paise mat lena…I m gonna pay 4 her everytime ok…he left


amazing update thnx for d pm n update soon...😊

Edited by riachandnani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
kaash mera bhi bada bhai hota aur itna accha hota...
bt... 😭 chodo... chota hai...
nd hamesha usse probs hai...
nyways... i was happy happy reading the update...
pls update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
luved it..kitna sweet relationship hai sabko n the way u describe it is so good..especiaaly rey n rinni n swayam n taani...swayam n taani without knwing their relationship they r attached to each other because relation never break..

awesome ss..
thnx fr the pmz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
loved the updatee di ...
it was soo cuteee...esp the taayam scenes were so adorable...
the way they felt secure and happy with each other was soo cutee =D
and then sharey gettin jealous...awww <3
hehe =D
and rey is such a sweet brother...
poor rinni...ab woh moti ho jayegi...LOL =D
hehehehe =D
and arun ka history kya hai...?
excited to know...
update soon di =D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Amazing update dear as always
Luved rey curiosity to meet n see taani
N swayam uncomfy with taani dress was funny
N taayam walk n talk were really adorable n sweet
N swayam possesive luved that waiter scene
Jacket scene to was cute
N rinni n rey scene was so cute n sweet
Feeling bad for taayam but happy that swayam paid for taani
Aur wo varun kon h???

Uppdate soon n do PM me
Aur koi baat nhi I luv bro-sis scene..plz give us more
Keep smiling
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Rey waiting impatiently to see Taani that was so cute. Love Taayam bonding and Swayam without knowing Taani is his sister possessive bhai mode kicks in... Awesome that is lol. Rey and Rinni scene is so sweet, extra cheese, less cheese lol that was hilarious. Amazing update plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
awesum .. 👏

really luvd swayam possessiveness towardz taani .. n rey towardz rinni .. 👍🏼
sharey jealous .. 😈 😆

precp iz intrestng .. 😃

update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm .. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
luv rey and rinni bro sis relation...
taayam are so cute...
update soon...

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