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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: akshitaTaarey

NICE !!! par aadha toh gaane mein hi cover ho gaya .. lol n by d way sharon thinking about taayam is vry funny , lets see wat happens nxt n i hop ki rey confusion clear karde n ya precap is interesting . UPDATE SOON N PM ME plss (thanx fr d pm )

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vijichandran

nice update...

sharon s jelous...
wow...
rey n taani bth r happy thinking abt each other😳😳😳
song selectn ws superb
update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: taarey1fan

lovely update...😊

thank u 4 d pm...
plzzz update soon...😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelypriya

lovely update...😊...thank u 4 d pm...plzzz update soon...😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 8JSmileyFace8J

Great Update!!!!

oh no swayam is becoming a devdas!!!
and sharon is already pissed at him!!!
and taarey were the commentators!!!!
i wonder who sent taani the choclates...
i think it might be that creep arun...
poor rey is already falling for taani and he don't even know it!!!
loved the song sequence!!!
ot fit perfectly in to the situation!!!
Awesome update!!!
CONTINUE SOOON!!!!

hehehehehe dear jisne taai ko yeh sab bheja hai wo arun toh nai pakka
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti2306

lovely update...😊

it was so awesum di...👏
CHOCOLATES...thinking who would have given it to taani??
thank u 4 d pm...
update soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: raddhi

Hey I luv ur stry I read it in one go awsm
Stry I luv rey n rinni bond haaye u remind
Me n my bro n v both r still same n thn I luv
Taayam past I know u hav not shown fully but
Bit I know luvly n I like taaron bond but in few
Last prt thr r missing aww miss thm n thn I luv tht
Rey fight for his sis n is vry passive abt her wow n
Arun n rinni n rey past was emotional but I like d way
He fight I luv taayam bond dis frdship one luvly it is n
I think I know tht BMW guy n I am excited to read more
So plzz do continue it soon n do PM me n u know wht today
Is 26 so I hope I get ur pm for update soon plzz PM me kk
Ohhh sry forget to say I luv ur stry n viha r cute do pm n update soon plzzz

oh dear thanku sooo much for reading my story
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Posted: 12 years ago

THIS CHAPTER IS SPECIALLY FOR MY DARLING BABY SISTER SHANAYA LOVE U PRINCESS N PLZ CALM DOWN

CHAPTER-7

After song taareyam decided they will do something about swaron in collage

Sw-rey chal dinner karte hai

Taani-ha sab saath mai karenge aap…mai…(lost in rey)….aur

Rey-(lost in taani)-aur

Taani-aur

Rey-aur

Sw-aur mai guys…yeh aur aur kya kar rahe ho

Rey-ammm nothing sorry guys I would love to but mujhe ghar jana hoga…rinni aaj kal kuch khati nai hai I have to make sure she have her food

Sw-toh call kar k pooch le

Rey-mai janta ho usse fingers cross kar k bol dege k kha liya…yr mujhe jana hoga

Sw-par yr

Taani-rey aap jaeye we understand (smiles)

Rey-tum mujhe kitne achi tarah se samjhte ho

Sw-kya???

Rey- mera matlab kitne achi dost ho….i got to go bye tc(he left in hurry n here taani blushes not knowing y)

Sw-taanya tum mere saath dinner karogi

Taani-nai(sw became sad)…mai nai aap mere saath dinner karoge maine paneer banaya hai

Sw(eyes light up)-panner!!!!! Ha jaldi chalo abhi dinner karna hai abhi k abhi(sad like a kid)

Taani-u r such a kid

Sw makes fake anger face-I m not a kid

Taani-aww u r sooo cute acha ab apna fake anger chodo come on lets do dinner

Sw left for taani's home n here taani calls rey

Rey-ha taani

Taani- wo…mujhe…mujhe aapse kuch khehna hai

Rey(smile)-ha khaho na

Taan-wo…wo…car dhyaan se chalana aur khana bhi kha lena(she close her eyes n smile n cut her call)

Rey thinks-mujhe itna acha kyu lag raha hai….taani meri kitne care karti hai

Taani thinks-mai itne care kyu karti ho rey k …kya ho raha hai mujhe

Sw-arre taani jaldi aao mujhe paneer khana hai

Taani-ha aa rahe ho

Here rey reached his house smiling thinking about taani when he saw rinni standing outside talking to a guy…rey thought the guy is amar but he wasn't so rey hide behind a pillar n listen to them

Guy-madam agar aap yeh wali tablet loge na toh aapka 10 din mai 1kg kam ho jayega

Rinni-yeh toh bohot kam hai

Guy-to mam aap yeh wali tablet lo isse 8 din mai 2kg kam hoga par yeh thore expensive hai

Rinni-ha chalega de do

Just then rey comes out n stand behind the guy…rinni saw rey n her eyes popped out n she said in hurry

Rinni-mat do…mujhe nai chahiye aap jao yaha se

Guy-par mam abhi toh aapko chahiyeh tha na

Rinni-par ab nai chahiyeh

Rey puts his hand on guy's shoulder n the guy turn n rey get shocked

Rey-tu!!! Tu wahi salesman hai na joh yaha phele bhi aaya tha yeh product dene maine mana kiya tha na samjh mai nai aata hai ek baar mai ya mai apne tareke se samjhao

Rinni(scared)-ha ha bhai isse samjh mai aa gaya bhaiya aap jao

The guy starts to move but rey hold him…

Rey-ek min ek min(fixing his shirt)-agar tu yaha agli baar dikh gaya na toh tujhe he dawai bana k tere company ko parcel kar donga samjha!!!!!

Guy-sorry sir

Rey-ab nikal yaha se

The guy ran away…rey looked at rinni n rinni made an angry face n goes inside n rey follows her

Rey-rinni kya tha yeh

Rinni(innocently)-kya

Rey-itna innocent mat ban….yeh tujhe achanak kya ho gaya hai kyu dubli hona hai tujhe arre theek toh hai tu

Rinni-kuch nai hua hai mujhe

Rey-khana khaya

Rinni-ha

Rey-nai khaya

Ri-bolana ha

Rey-tera ha mujhe pata hai…ruk mai kaka ko dekh kar aata ho

Rey went in kitchen

Rey-kaka aaj khane mai kya hai mujhe bohot bhook lage hai

Kaka-beta diet food hai

Rey-diet food!!! Kaka yaha diet food kon khata hai

Kaka-beta rinni gudiya ne kaha isiliye maine banaya

Rey-kya!!!!!

Kaka-beta ek baat hai…gudiya aaj kal badal gaye hai aapko toh pata hai na k gudiya ko chocolates kitne pasand hai

Rey-ha kaka

Kaka-unhone saare chocolates fhek(throw) kar de

Rey-kya!!! Yeh isse ho kya raha hai…kaka aap khana banae mai bhi dekhta ho kaise nai khate hai

Kaka prepared food n rey took a plate to rinni's room

Rey enter n saw rinni looking at mirrior she turn n asked him

Rinni-bhai mai moti ho gaye ho kya???

Rey(rolled his eyes)-not again

Rini-batao na bhai

Rey-phele tu mujhe bata k yeh sab kya chal raha hai…tujhe kyu dubla hona hai

Rinni goes in her dreamland n said-aapko pata hai bhi jab koi dubla hota hai toh wo kitna acha dekhta hai n jab koi ladki sahi figure mai hoti hai toh kitna pyaari lagte hai

Rey took this chance n smirks…rinni was in her dreamland moving here n there n rey was following her just to feed her

Rinni was talking non stop n rey would give her a bite whenever she stops he was moving behind her like a mother who use to feed her child while the child is busy in playing…although they were twins n rey was just some min elder to her still he took care like a mother…

Soon the food finished n rey singhed relief that she had eaten…rinni realize that bhai ne saara khana khila diya

Rinni(pouting)-bhai yeh cheating hai aapne saara khana khila diya

Rey-ha toh acha hai na…cha lab so ja

Rinni-nai

Rey-rinni its late come on sleep now(took her to bed n made her lie)

Rey sits beside rinni n his hand was on her head caring her hairs to made her sleep….soon she slept n rey kissed her forhead n was about to go when he saw a book beside her

The book was "how to get slim" rey thinks-yeh chakkar kya hai aise toh yeh apni tabiyat kharab kar lege"

NEXT DAY IN COLLAGE REHARSAL HALL

Rey was sitting in rh thinking about rinni when taani enters n saw him n said

Taani-hey hi

Rey-oh hi

Taani-itna dhanda hi kya hua kuch tension hai

Rey-nai toh

Taani-tum mujhe bata sakte ho

Rey thinks mai taani k help le sakta hai taani bhi toh ek ladki hai wo zaror help karege

Rey-taani mujhe rini k tension ho rahe hai wo kuch khate he nai hai(told her yesterday scene)

Taani-rey wo ek ladki hai aur har ladki aise react karte hai

Rey-par phele nai karte thi ab achanak kyu mujhe tenion ho rahe hai

Taani-hmmm hum ek kaam kar sakte hai hum rinni pe nazar rakhte hai

Rey-par mai karonga toh usse pata chal jayega

Taani-ha yeh bhi hai

Rey looked at taani-taani tum yeh kar sakte ho

Taani-par mai kaise

Rey-plz taani meri behan k liye plz

Taani-ok fine mai karongi

Both smile n got lost in each other eyes n a big llkk happen

Just then sw enter n saw taarey specially rey

Sw thinks-mujhe aisa kyu feel ho raha hai k mai rey k aankh(eyes) phot do(break rey's eyes)…..god sw kya soach raha hai tu

He goes n stand between them n claps n both comes in real world n taani blushes

Rey-sw tu yaha

Sw-dude yeh rh hai n I m a dancer toh mai yaha aaonga he

Rey-ya ya right

Taani(change topic)-hey sw aapne kuch soocha k kaise sh ko bataoge

Sw-wahi toh disscuss karna tha

Just then all come n sh also enter n saw taayam standing very close n talking slowly….she didn't like it n tears come in her eyes n she left rh…

Taani saw her n goes after her

Here sh enter girls locker room crying….taani enter n gave her a tissue..

Taani-sh tum ro kyu rahe ho

Sh-aise he

Taani-mujhe nai bataogi…mai tere liye india aae aur tu mujhe nai bataege

Sh-kya bolo tujhe yahi k hum dono ko ek he ladka pasand aaya hai

Taani(confused)-matlab

Sh-tujhe sw pasand hai

Taani(normally)-ha

Sh starts crying more loudly…n taani understand what she meant

Taani-nooo…..not like that…oh shit r u mad!!!! I like sw jaise u like rey as a friend just as a friend

Sh-really wow I m so happy


Taani(raised her eyebrows)-par tujhe kya hua hai…kya baat hai madam Sharon rai prakash ek ladke k liye ro rahe hai

Sh blushed…taani-omg ab blush bhi kar rahe hai….tell me kya baat hai

Sh-ok I m telling u par promise kar k tu kisiko bhi nai bataege

Taani-promise

Sh-ok…wo…mmm I think i…i…I like sw

Taani-oh u like him or u l…o…v…e… him

Sh blushed harder nbut said-love ka pata nai but ya I like him

Taani-I m soo happy 4 u they hug

Now the scene is this taani is very happy as sh accept that she likes sw so she calls rey…rey was with sw …sw saw rey phone n thinks taani kyu call kar rahe hai

Rey picked up

Taani-reyyy

Rey-kya kya hua chila kyu rahe ho

Taani-tumhe pata hai sh like sw

Rey(rolled his eyes)-hame pata hai taani bohot phele se

Taani(cutely pouting)-par mujhe toh abhi pata chala na

Rey(thinks)god she is sooo cute

Rey-ha taani

Taani saw rinni…taani-rey rinni hai mai uska peecha karte ho

Rey-ha jaldi

Taani goes after rinni who enter fire escape…taani peep inside n saw rinni moving up n down on stairs n saying come on rinni loose weight

Taani told to rey this

Rey-hey bhagwaan is ladki ko kya ho gaya hai

Taani-rey mai baad mai phone karte ho

Now rey was with all boys when his phone rings for the 4th time n it was taani

Nil-abbe yeh taani tujhe baar baar call kyu kar rahe hai

Bharat-ha be kya chal raha hai tum dono k beech mai

Sw-shutup guys aisa kuch nai hai

Amar-tujhe kya hua

Sw-kuch nai

(note further scenes r specially for…U-ME-AUR-D3 LOVE U SIS)

Now all notice that Vicky was sitting silent

Nil-abbe isse kya hua

Sw-ha Vicky!!! Chup kaise hai

Bharat-chalo dekhte hai

All moved towards him n sit infront of him in a circle….vicky's head was down

All tap on his shoulder n he looks up he was crying

Rey-vicky mere bhai

Nil-tu ro raha hai

Sw-kya hua yr

Bharat-ha be tu ro kyu raha ladki k mafik

Amar-tata toh ticky tya tua

All-kya

Bharat-abbe bol raha hai k bata toh kya hua

All was thinking that Vicky is calm now but Vicky was Vicky he suddenly stands on chairs n said loudly

Vicky-gao(village) walo

Nil-abbe yeh collage hai

Vicky-sorry collage walo!!!!!!!! Mujhe kuch khehna hai…mai ek no ka gaddha darpok aur bewakuf ho

All boys claps

Rey-phele baar kuch sahi bola hai yeh

Vic-ha mai bewakuf ho itne achi ladki ko chod diya maine!!!! Kagu!!!! Kagu tum bohot achi ho kagu!!!

Bharat-abbe bhai log lagta hai isne pe rakhe hai

Sw pulled Vicky n smell him his eyes goes wide

Sw-guys bharat is right Vicky is drunk

All-what!!!

Vic-kagu!!!!!!!!!!kagu!!!!!!!!! mujhese shaadi karogi oh mujhse shaadi karoge!!!

Rey-oh shit agar kisiko pata chal gaya toh

Bharat-ab kya kare

Nil-yr iska nasha utarna hoga

Amar-ek taam tarte hai ticty toh tahla tete hai

All-kya

Bharat-abbe bol raha hai k Vicky ko nehla lete hai

Sw-usse kya hoga

Nil-nai re maine bhi suna hai agar issi nahla diya toh iska nasha thora kam ho jayega

Now all tried to drag Vicky

Nil-vicky mere baap plz naha le yr

Vic-nai mujhe kagu chahiyeh mujhe mere kagu chahiyeh(he sit on ground n said)-kagu meri kagu tum best ho tum kitne cute ho I m sorry maine hurt kiya kagu I love u

All tried to control him but now he suddenly stands n all get scared

Vic-mai apni kagu se milne jaoga

Reyam-kya!!!!

Nil,amr n bha-wah!!!

Reyam-abbe isme wah kya hai vic tu pagal ho gaya hai tu aisa kuch nai karega…vic nodes in no

Nil-nai be sahi kar raha hai atleast apni dil k baat toh bol dega…vic tu ja..vic nodes in yes

Reyam-vic tu nai jaega …vic nodes in no

Nil-vic tu ja…vic nodes in yes

Reyam-no

Nil-yes

Soon they realize that vic has already left…now all was searching 4 vicky n here vicky was rolling on floor like swimming saying-kagu mujhe bachao mai dob jaonga

Now he climbs on pillar n said-kagu apne ghar k window open rakho mai aa raha ho kagu mai aa raha ho

Finally he reached canteen where he saw all girls except neha

Vic-hi girls

All looked at him…girls-hi…vicky

Vicky-rinni(hug her) tu meri best friend hai na tu mujhe bata na meri kagu kaha hai

Rinni-vicky tum theek toh ho na

Just then all boys enter n control Vicky…soon neha enter with a guy n Vicky saw them he knows the guy n everyone knows that the guy like neha n he is not a good guy

Here the guy was looking at neha's back n was about to touch her n vic saw this n he goes mad….he goes to them

The guy was about to touch neha when Vicky hold his hand n in fully drunk stage he said

Vic-how dare u…..teri himmat kaise hue meri kagu ko touch karne k..teri toh(punch the guy)

Neha-vicky kya doing tum

Vic-kagu tum bohot sweet ho aur yeh tumhara fayda utha raha tha isse toh mai jaan se maar dalonga(kicks him)

Soon all boys holds him

Neha-vicky drunk u r

Vic-I love u kagu plz wapas aa jao kagu plz

All looked at them n laughs

Taani-neha tum Vicky ko yaha se kar jao

Neha-vicky chalo

Vic-I love u kagu plz come back

Neha-chalo Vicky she took her

Now collage end

Taani was doing some work still in collage n rey saw her he went to her

Rey-hey

Taani-hi

Rey-kya kar rahe ho ghar nai gaye

Taani-thora kaam tha Mai chali jaogi tum jao

Rey-ok he goes n sit on chair

Taani saw him…taani-aap ja nai rahe

Rey-nai tumhe chod kar jaoga

Taani-arre mai chali jaogi

Rey-nai mai chalonga

Both smile

Huh finally chapter 7 done…do like it guys n comment big one plzzz

Precap-taarey car drive…sw suspects about taarey…rey found taani real home….viha scenes…will neha aceept him????...will rey be able to found the past of taayam????

Note-guys rinni story is necessary as it will bring taarey together….n viha sences r also der as I feel every couple has its own problem that has to be shown we can't just focus on taarey n swaron…

Plz coorporate

Note2- guys plz stick to this story soon their gonna be some twist plzzz stay tune

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
taarey are too cute love them
precap is very interesting
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
swayam being possessv unknowingly s so cute...
taani n sharon convo ws superb...
update soon

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