#2.:VIVAAH:. ArSh Short Story THE END Page:121 and Epilogue 125 :D

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@SacredLove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Hey pls update soon
and i want pm part too
just cant comment till 29th may due to exam
but pls send me pm parts i wil read them and comment after exam
k tc love u yah

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moonlight2630

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Hey dear plz add me in ur buddy list n plz do pm me waiting for ur update.

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Bharti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Laddoo u are making me angry now 😡

u said u will update but still nothing 😭

i want a update and then a hot shot part ☺️

jaldi update karo warna main bhi update nahi karongi (This was the first time i wrote something in hind or tried and this just for u)😉

~~~Bharti~~~

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Part:20 Confession Time

The Mallik Mansion was decorated with flowers and lights and all were running here and there to complete the preparations on time.Padma was arranging flowers and gifts when she saw the ladies and greeted them.Shashank was also present and supervising other tasks.

Scenario in atul-anjali room:

Muskaan and few of anjali's friends were helping the would be mom to get ready but the situation seemed to be very difficult for them.

anjali-no way yeh dress..muskaan see itni tight ho rahi hai..main itni moti ho gayi...

muskaan-anjie yaar ro mat na..dekh yeh bilkul theek hai tujhe bas aise hee lag rha hai...agar itna royegi na to makeup kharap ho jayega

Padma-arey tumloug ab tak kya kar rahi ho..anjali you are not ready yet..guests a chuke hai beta rasm bhi shuru karni hai...

anjali-mom I cant wear this..Shilpa ne yeh dress dekhke nahi layi thi kya..mujhe fit nahi ho rahi hai...

muskaan-aunty ji aap to usiko bulaa do..warna aaj ki rasm samjho ho gayi..

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Shilpa-samajhta kya hai apne aapko...subah se try kar rahi hun per ek bhi baar mera call nahi uthaya..mujhe thori baat karni thi woh to mom ne kaha tha ke main inform kar dun aaj ghar eo function hai isliye jaldi ajaye...magar usey thori pari hai..

Shilpa was standing on the middle of the street with an angry expression on her face trying to stop a taxi...

shilpa-iss car ko bhi aaj hee kharab hona tha..ab itni baarish mein kaise ghar pohchu..pata nai anjali di tayiyar bhi hui hongi ya nahi...

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Armaan reached home along with Rahul and rushed to upstairs saving himself from everyones eyes.

rahul-sahi hai pehli baar dekh raha hun kisiko apne ghar mein choron ki tarah ghuste huey..

armaan-tu chup nahi baith sakta...

He got inside the room and locked it breathing a sigh of relief.

rahul-haan to maine kya galat kaha...

Rahul almost fell down on the bed relaxing his back muscles when armaan glared at him

armaan-yahan sone ki sochna bhi mat..it wont take me a second to inform muskaan about your arrival here

rahul-ahhh Mallik..whats wrong with you...bara kameena banta ja raha hai tu

He saw him taking out his shirt and getting in the bathroom.

armaan(from inside😆) cant help it jiske tere jaise dost ho aisa to hona hee hai..

rahul-right...waise aisa kya special hai iss bed pe jo tuney mujhe sone se roka...kahin kuch aisa waisa to ho nahi raha na aajkal..atul ke jaane ke baad I hardly get any inside news u know

Armaan was done with the shower now and standing in his robe tying it and giving rahul murderous looks

armaan-ho gaya tera?ab ja jaake fresh ho ja aur mujhe bhi tayiyar hone de nahi to mom ajayengi...

rahul-ja raha hun..waise main muskaan ka favourite colour pehenne wala hun...red kurta u know..I hope ke aaj to na jhagre woh mujhse..

armaan-nothing new dude...

Armaan was engrossed in his wadrobe while rahul was scanning the kurta when Shilpa entered the room without giving the duo any chance to react on.Her light blue suit was covered with mud and irritation was visible on her face.

Rahul turned back checking her out from head to toe and looked at armaan.

rahul-aaa are you alright shilpa..I mean yehh

Her eyes almost came out absorbing the fact Rahul was there seeing her in this state and she also could not avoid the looks her super angry husband was giving to her at the moment.Rahul excused himself and left with a grin on his face and Armaan locked the door before someone else barges in.

armaan-may i know yeh sab kya hai...

shilpa-wohh...baarish aur gari kharab ho gayi thi to...taxi milne mein der ho gayi..aur isliye kapre bhi..

armaan-right isiliye kachre ka haal banke ghum rahi ho

shilpa-kya?

armaan-aa nothing...

She dropped her bag and noticed him trying to get a proper attire suitable for the evening.The situation seemed to be very normal in the sense that armaan was with her in the same room almost half naked and still there was no reaction from her.In fact being clueless of this fact she got closer to him and started searching for something in the wadrobe.Armaan felt her body getting closer to him and closed his eyes.Cursing his innersoul he distanced himself abit away from her.

armaan-kya kar rahi ho..Iam getting late neeche jana hai..

She took out a short black sherwani cute kurta with heavy red borders on it and handed it to him.

armaan-yeh?main to suit pehenne wala tha

Shaking her head she got rid of her dupatta and earrings.

shilpa-aaj di ki godbharai ki rasm hai...koi business party nahi...yeh ma kal layi thi tumhare liye..yehi pehenne ko kaha hai...

He thought how ignorant he had been towards padma and others.But he had his own reason.

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Armaan was looking like a Greek God in the short shervani cut and matched white pajama with it.He played with the buttons and gelled his hair giving a last look on the mirror when a strong breeze hit him.It was raining hard outside and the window was constantly making noise irritating him to no bits.He closed it finally and heard the click of the bathroom door.He almost stopped breathing seeing the divine beauty in front of his eyes.There she stood in a red and green lehenga facing her bare back to him.She was trying to tie the dori of her choli and failing everytime.

shilpa-armaan..thori help kar doge?

He came out of the dreamy mode and heard what she was saying.With shaky hands he tried to touch the dori when her cold body came in contact with his skin and he left it there only.

armaan-aa...mujhse nahi hoga..main muskaan ko bhejta hun...

She turned back with a disappointing look

shilpa-aaj ke din to akar chor deta...main bhi dekhti hun akhir kab tak dur bhaagta hai mujhse...aaj chahe jo bhi ho jaye main tumse apne sawaalon ka jawaab maangke hee rahungi armaan.

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The god bharai rasm started with all ladies participating in it and dancing and joking around.Anjali was finally relaxed and contented with her outfit after Shilpa adjusted everything for her and it was her anxiety only which made her feel like that.The dress looked perfect on her.She was too happy to get gifts and blessings for her baby,having Atul beside her all the time asking fi she was okay.

Armaan glanced at his sister and a smile captured her face.He was standing with Rahul and other guys when he followed everyone s gaze fixed at the stairs.

One of the ladies-bhai wakai mein Padma tumhari bahu to laakhon mein ek hai...ekdum pari jaisi...itni khoobsoorat...

Others-aur nahi to kya humara armaan bohot lucky hai jo yeh chaand ka tukra usey naseeb hua...

At that moment he felt proud of the fact that she was his wife and not to forget his choice.A blush crept on his cheeks getting all teased by his friends.But deep down inside he was feeling jealous of the way she was wearing that dress.The blouse of her lehenga was deep cut and her back was visible to everyone.The dupatta was draped around her curve perfectly revealing abit her bare tummy.

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It was Armaan's turn to give blessings to Anjali and Padma asked Shilpa to join him.Shilpa tried to take the gifts on her hand when his hand touched hers on the process and both of them felt the heat.Avoiding any eye contact with her he went to anjali and placed a light kiss on her forehead.She again felt a tug at her heart.

anjali-mil gaya waqt apni behen ke liye

armaan-anjiee...stop getting cranky haan...

anjali-thanks aaj ka din yaad rakhne ke liye...

armaan-tumhe kya laga main yeh kabhi bhool sakta hun...here is a special gift for my special niece right?

anjali-nephew bhi to ho sakta hai..

armaan-naah I want a girl just like you..stunning and gorgeous

anjali-armaan...

Both for them were having the moment when Shilpa joined them with a smile on her face and hugged anjali.

shilpa-Our would be mumma is looking very beautiful...

anjali-haan lekin would be mami se to thora kun heee...kyun mama?

Armaan got lost in Shilpa while she blushed hard waiting for his comment.

armaan-aaa main abhi ata hun...

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She was sitting on the bed and taking out her earrings and bangles recalling what happened few hours ago.

The function went out well with Shilpa fulfilling all her duties of being an obedient and perfect daughter in law of the house and a little sister for anjali.Padma was on cloud nine after the praises she got from others for her daughter in law and her happiness knew no bounds.All in all armaan was the one avoiding her in the whole function.When all were seated for dinner she tried to talk to him but he joined with rahul and others again ignoring her.At one point muskaan felt something unusual and asked her if there was something wrong between them but she covered it up.Why was he doing this..she deserves to know whats going on his mind.Among all those worries,one of their relative's words were still ringing on her mind.

Bass armaan ab to next tumhari bari hai..good news kab de rahe ho humein?Ab aur der na karo iss ghar ko bhi to ek bachcha chahiye...itna time jo hua hai tumhari shaadi ko...humse to aur raha nahi jata...

All this feels so weird to her.On one hand they are being asked for planning a baby and the other place he is not even on talking terms with her.There was this rage filled inside her now which she could not hold for any longer now.He had to answer her today only.

shilpa-armaan ka gussa..uska mujhe avoid karna..ab aur bardasht nahi hota mujhse...pehle to yeh sab mehsoos bhi nahi hota tha lekin ab...dill mein ek ajeeb sa dard hota hai jab..jab woh mujhe dekhta tak nahin...patanahi kya ho gaya hai mujhe..aajkal har khayal armaan se shuru hoke uspe hee khatam hone laga hai...jab main tayiyar hoti hun aur uski nazren mujhe nahi nihaarti to...gusse se laal ho jati hun main aur...meri choti choti baaton pe uska dhyan na dena pehle jaisa meri soch ko kamzor banata ja raha hai har pal...kya ho raha hai yeh sab...main..main sach mein ek patni banti ja rahi hun..per woh to ab tak bhi thi phir ab?

She noticed herself on the mirror and the changing colour of her face in armaan's mention gave her enough hints.

shilpa-kahin mujhe armaan se pyaar to?

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Armaan came down from anjali's room after convincing her to stay here till delivery or else Padma wont be on peace as well as them.He was too tired to do anything now frst the office work and then the function.It was a hectic day for sure.He opened the first two buttons of the kurta and came downstairs.

armaan-aa vishnu kaka hall ki safai ho gayi na?aur yeh darwaza kyun khula chora hai..bahar kitni baarish ho rahi hai aap loug bhi na

He went otuside and was about to close the door when a hand pulled her with strong force and he was too shocked to react at that moment.

armaan-tum?yahan kya kar rahi ho aur woh bhi iss waqt?

shilpa-mujhe tumse baat karni hai abhii...

Catching his head with his one hand he felt a throbbing pain on his head...

armaan-kal baat karey?main bohot thak gaya hun aaj

They were on the garden near the swing and it was not raining now for a change.

shilpa-ek aur bahana...mujhse bhaagne ka

He looked at her and then their surroundings

armaan-tum theek to ho?

shilpa-main to theek hun armaan per tumhe kya hua hai...akhir wajah kya hai iss change ki...ab to sabko nazar ane laga hai tummein yeh badlao...tum...tum mujhse to share kar sakte ho na armaan...ke kya baat hai jo tumhe andar khayi ja rahi hai

armaan-kyun..kya hua hai mujhe..aur kya change aya hai...main waisa hee hun jaisa pehle tha..aur logon ka kya hai..unki soch se hum apni zindagi nahi jee sakte

Shilpa-logon ka nahi to mera khayal ro karo armaan...aisi kya galti ki hai maine jiski saza tum mujhe de rahe ho...bolo...agar mujhse koi galti hui hai to batao mujhe..hum milke solve kar sakte hai na...per tumhari yeh khamoshi mujhe andar hee andar ghutn epe majboor kar raha hai...-aaj tum mere sawaalon ke jawab diye bagaer nahi ja sakte..aisa kya hua ke pichle 2 mahinon se tum mujhe ignore kar rahe ho...seedhe moo baat bhi nahi karte...

He saw her pouting her lips and making a cute face.She was still on her red and green lehenga.He tried to move away when she caught his wrist and her skin came in contact with his.He closed his eyes being badly effected with the touch.Just then the rain started pouring heavily and both of them getting fully drenched.

shilpa-tumhari aankhon mein mujhe apne liye pehle jaisa pyar kyun nahi dikhta armaan..kyun chir hoti hai is baat se jab tum mujhe dekhte nahi ho meri choti choti cheeson pe dhyaan nahi dete..kyun...yeh soch mujhe pagal kiye ja rahi hai...thak chuki hun main apne aap se har roz larte larte..ke aisa kya kiya hai maine ke tum..mujhse itne dur chale gaye...humare beech to sab theek tha na phir achanak kya ho gaya

armaan-yeh tum pooch rahi ho...actually yeh sab tumhe mujhse nahi apne aap se poochna chahiye shilpa...apne dill mein jhaak ke dekho..shayad wahan inke jawaab chupe ho...

With increasing wind and rain she was shivering badly and he noticed this.Tears were forming in her eyes and she could notr hold them for any longer

shilpa-dekh chuki hun main armaan...aur..shayad ehsaas bhi hai mujhe lekin..tum..tumhara dill kya chahta hai..bas yeh janna chahti hun main...kyun itni nafrat karne lage ho mujhse...pata nahi kya hota ja raha hai mujhe..chaahke bhi apne aap ko tumse dur nahi rakh pati..in 2 mahinon pe aisa ek bhi din ek bhi pal nahi gaya jab...tumhari soch ne mujhe bekaboo nahi kiya ho...kya ho gaya hai mujhe...main...

He got closer to her touching her breathe and whispered

armaan-pyaar...

She stared at his passionate eyes and fumbled hard to even say a word

shilpa-armaaan...

He joined their heads and caught her from her waist igniting fire on her body...closing her eyes she felt the cold wind more like burning heat now...

armaan-keh do na Shilpa...kyun tumhe fark parta hai mere tumhe avoid karne se...tumhe dekh ke bhi andekha karne se...meri aankhon mein tumhare liye pyar na dekhne pe itna dard kyun hota hai tumhe...thak chuka hun main iss benaam rishtey ko jeete jeete...dosti ek rishtey ki shuruat to ho sakti hai lekin uski buniyaad sirf aur sirf oyaar se banti hai...main tumhara dost nahi pati banna chahta hun ab...aur yehii dekhna tha mujhe ke kya mere tumse dur jaane se tumhe koi fark parta hai...tumhare hoton pe sirf aur sirf mera naam..zehem mein sirf mera khayal...kya hai yeh pyar?

He tightened his grip which made her more weak now...

armaan-tell me damn it...do you love me?

He pulled her more closer leaving an inch distance between their faces and thats when she mouthed those words

shilpa-yesss...

With the increasing sound of the thunder she collapsed in his arms whispering

shilpa-I love you armaan...main..pyaar karne lagi hun tumse...I love youu

This is it..the moment for which he had been waiting for long and finally he could hear the truth from her...what her heart says and what she genuinely felt not for the so called responsibility being the reason...she loves him and he knew it..he only wanted her to feel it and speak it out...

armaan-I love you too...

She opened her eyes and faced him...he wiped the tears and kissed her forehead giving her a feeling of satisfaction...

armaan-bohot pyar karta hun tumse..shayad apne aap se zyada...warna apne aap to itna jalata nahi main iss aag mein...I love you...

She shifted her weight on him and getting completely absorbed in his hold...they got their first complete hug...all mixed with passion and emotions..her hands at his back and his ones careesing her back...and the tight hold proved the fact they belong to eachother only...
Their wet bodies were clinging to eachother.Parting from the hug he made her face him and traced her lips.She at first felt abit shy but later touched his hand and placed a soft kiss there making him smile at the first initiative taken by her.Giving her one last look he slowly joined their lips and the heavy rain witnessed the two souls emerging in one finally.

He started it slowly by kissing her soft petals and then as he felt her participating equally...he deepened the kiss.He sucked her upperlip and the lower one while she blushed hard.The noise of the thunder made her come out of the kiss and hug him.Both of them panted and Shilpa felt her knees getting weaker due to the first proximity she shared with her husband.

So finally they sealed the beginning of their new journey with a kiss promising to give nothing but love to eachother!

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Saanson Ko Saanson Mein Dhalne Do Zara

He tugged at her dupatta and pulled her in his arms...

Dheemi Si Dhadkan Ko Badne Do Zara
Lamho Ki Guzarish Hai Yeh Paas Aa Jaaye
Hum' Hum Tum'
Tum' Hum Tum'!

She felt hot kisses on her neckline and earlobe.He carried her in his arms to their bedroom and fell on top of her in the bed.Staring at his face she kissed his whole face and eventually his lips leaving him stunned at her act.

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Armaan-jab tum aur main hum bante hai na to poora ho jata hai ek vivaah ka pyaar bhara rishta...!

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Thankyou guyz for being so patient and I love you all for those comments:) Coming to the part,mmm Iam not at all satisfied with the confession actually coz its not up to the mark:( I know u all have been waiting for this since long and I couldnt do anything special to bring it on😆for me it sounds more like a filler partwill be waiting for your comments now!Those who whavent checked the big note then have a look at page-14 please😉
-Laddoo

Edited by Laddoo.Phaddoo - 12 years ago

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Bharti

@TheSexyDevil

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Ress me first...yeahhh

Edited by TheSexyDevil - 12 years ago

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: TheSexyDevil
Ress me first...yeahhh

Heheh😳sooo sorrry for the delay:/ and I loved your hindi☺️

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Bharti

@TheSexyDevil

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: Laddoo.Phaddoo

Heheh😳sooo sorrry for the delay:/ and I loved your hindi☺️

I am really bad in writing 😛 But still thanks😃

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Amita Patel

@KaShforever06

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Fabulous update... Loved it..

was shilpa trying to seduce him a little?

I love Shilpa's and Anjie's bonding..

Finally Shilpa asked him why he was behaving different..

and Armaan kind of told her the reason...
confession was simple but stunning yar...

You described everything perfectly... Could definitely imagine them confessing in real life...

Their complete

Precap- looks amazing.. .

Now waiting for some romance...

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon

Edited by KaShforever06 - 12 years ago

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blessed4

@blessed4

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Hey that was amazing . Loved their confession.. Can't wait to read the pm part. Please continue soon

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...finally...da confession was perfect...ArSh sooo cute...Can't wait 4 more...love da precap...beautiful song...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm